First Pic

GolathGolath Join Date: 2003-05-20 Member: 16532Members
in Artwork Forum
Hey this is the first pic i ever made for anything really. Tell me what you think <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->. I know the legs are stuffed and the shoes look lik plungers, but its hard to draw a shoe from front on. This is a half cartoony half realistic marine. I wanna change the face to someones real face like flayra or one of the devs. tell me what you think <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • PerfectionsFlawPerfectionsFlaw Join Date: 2003-02-14 Member: 13555Members
    Wooo!!! Above the utility belt is great, it reminds me of cell shaded 3d models, there is a 3d Spiderman cartoon that MTV runs late at night. Everything below the waste scares me though, must really work on that ^.^;

    Nice first try.
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  • GolathGolath Join Date: 2003-05-20 Member: 16532Members
    Yeah i know <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo--> I fell like chopping him in half
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  • DelarosaDelarosa Naturally Custom Join Date: 2002-11-29 Member: 10214Members, NS1 Playtester
    add a shiny stop to the "top" of the toes on the shoes, and it'll look better <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->


    awsome job, keep it up!
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  • GolathGolath Join Date: 2003-05-20 Member: 16532Members
    im not sure iif i can add a 'shiny stop' to the shoes without breaking the singular colour rhing happening.
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  • CoolCookieCooksCoolCookieCooks Pretty Girl Join Date: 2003-05-18 Member: 16446Members, NS1 Playtester, Contributor, Constellation
    flash? <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • EplekongenEplekongen Join Date: 2002-11-16 Member: 8915Members
    That is great, I must admit, the bottom half isn't that bad at all. But you should try and give him shading and such over this. Just to test it, I think it would look great.
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  • EplekongenEplekongen Join Date: 2002-11-16 Member: 8915Members
    would you mind if I gave a go at it and gave it some shadows? I promise you it will still look linear. <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • GolathGolath Join Date: 2003-05-20 Member: 16532Members
    Sure thing do what you like with him. just leave my name in there. Oh and if you want you can redo his legs i dont mind. <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • EplekongenEplekongen Join Date: 2002-11-16 Member: 8915Members
    edited July 2003
    Small changes, very linear shadowning, but I think it works.
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  • GolathGolath Join Date: 2003-05-20 Member: 16532Members
    nice i like it. I am making a newer version, where he is smoking a ciggy while he has 1 foot on a dead skulk and a pistol in the otherhand. I am trying to lose the 'robotic feel' that he had when i originally made him.
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  • ironpancakeironpancake Join Date: 2003-05-23 Member: 16643Members
    my one suggestion is how is legs are placed. Make his legs farther apart with his legs so close he looks like a pansy <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> the rest is good though.
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  • CplDavisCplDavis I hunt the arctic Snonos Join Date: 2003-01-09 Member: 12097Members
    ooh nice one, he looks so happy and confident too. lol
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  • 343_guilty_spark343_guilty_spark Join Date: 2003-06-18 Member: 17462Members
    The legs are good i reckon, keep up the good work
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  • CoolCookieCooksCoolCookieCooks Pretty Girl Join Date: 2003-05-18 Member: 16446Members, NS1 Playtester, Contributor, Constellation
    yes vg legs <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • GolathGolath Join Date: 2003-05-20 Member: 16532Members
    Yeah i am seperating the legs and adding a little 'split' to seperate them
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