Concept Critique
Jean_Luc_Picard
Join Date: 2003-02-03 Member: 13051Members
Join Date: 2003-02-03 Member: 13051Members
<div class="IPBDescription">Please C&C weapons concepts</div> <!--QuoteBegin--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->Not needed anymore, so buh bai<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
<!--QuoteBegin--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->Wow, looking back.. that thing DID blow! I might make another topic to track the new model... not sure, depends... well, yeah, I will after I finish the pistol. After all, I need to find a way to do it the way Dill did (having all the pictures themselves on the first page) and I don't have a web host as of yet... 0o'
Version 3 is done, it's down below. It's nothing like 1 or 2 0o' lol, it's the same as the NS standard pistol. Need to finish grip, other than that, it's done!<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
The FINAL drawing I'm doing of the SIDE of the Standard NS Pistol is now done! Look down a bit to see it!
<!--QuoteBegin--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->Wow, looking back.. that thing DID blow! I might make another topic to track the new model... not sure, depends... well, yeah, I will after I finish the pistol. After all, I need to find a way to do it the way Dill did (having all the pictures themselves on the first page) and I don't have a web host as of yet... 0o'
Version 3 is done, it's down below. It's nothing like 1 or 2 0o' lol, it's the same as the NS standard pistol. Need to finish grip, other than that, it's done!<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
The FINAL drawing I'm doing of the SIDE of the Standard NS Pistol is now done! Look down a bit to see it!
Comments
I mean... its out of shape, its too round... the trigger is too large...the props are out of size, the grip is to thin...AND its bending...
otherwise... its fine
sorry, no offence but its not a masterpice. i don't hope i have totally demoraliated you.
Good luck futher on.
~Wall out
e/ excuse the ghettoness <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
-removed it cause it was a waste of bandwidth <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo-->
<img src='http://natural-selection.org/images/pistol_final_thumb.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
...nice work from that first pic to your one enf0rcer.
keep up the good work
~Wall
That looks like, 95% like what the 2nd version does! RIGHT DOWN TO THE TAC LIGHT!
BTW- I'm having a few probs with Picture It and Norton... I hate Norton Antivirus... I much prefer 3rd party stuff...s tupid Norton firewall...
I''m hoping to post the 2nd version like... now... but I can't get Picture It to run so I can't resize it to make it fit... 0o'
I'll play with it some more after choir
PS- yeah, I know the thing's not straight <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
I'll prolly go over it with ink to make the scanner pick it up properly...
Well, here it is, VERSION TWO! (of prolly 7-10 different ones till final)
C&C?
This is all the work I'm going to do on #2, now it's on to #3!
(yeah, I go through a LOT of paper...)
*blink blink*
Nobody's saying anything now... lol
BTW- #3 is around 60% done. It's actually like the default one (I had an actual pic set to work from now, THANKS JIMMEH!) I'll be adding more dtail and then hopefully doing the finished one in #'s 4 and 5.
Jean Lerk signing off
This is a enlarged duplicate of the standard NS pistol, looking at it's right side. I still have to add the details to the grip.... but the hands are covering that... 0o' which means I'll have to try to make that up <!--emo&:0--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wow.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wow.gif' /><!--endemo--> Other than that, it's done...!
This now gives me a base to work off of for number 4, a high-detail version. If anyone has any ideas what I could use for these "high-details", don't hesitate to say it!
BTW- Comments, Questions, Critique?
I want crits on how close it is...
After all this isn't going to be CUSTOM models as much as it is HIGH DETAIL models... so it'll look the same, but better!
Here's what it looks like so far:
This is version one, around 1 hours work (it's hard cause the picture I'm referencing from is tilted about 10 degrees to the left so it's not a full top-down view 0o')
Erm... can someone please give some C&C?
Yo, Chrono, if you want, I'll re-draw the pics on non-graph paper... and I'll try to scan it without the middle line (stupid fax is being tard... lol)
I haven't done anything on it for a few days... been at a choir roadtrip so I haven't had time. I'll be finishing the front view soon (I hope)
Those are just the standard NS pistols. I'm working on adding detail... tho actually, that's mainly done with the skin isn't it. <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
Model away Chrono! I got 2 new views in progress, the front and the backFront is the hardest cause the hands are blocking most of the grip so 0o; I'm making that part up XD
Possible Heavy Armor? Looks more like a JP or LA to me but eh <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
FIRST front view
*EDIT* Pardon the poor quality, this is from our "reconstructed" fax machine (dude at my dad's work = Miracle worker) and I need to re-do the picture anyway... paper is all messed up and the lines are a tad smeared... I'll re-drawn and ink it sometime soon <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->
if you could reduce the ammount the grid lines show up (cause im too lazy to take em out) then i can shade it and even give some basic gradient skinns for it... the ha/jp replacement is just too much for me to work on right now.
Not worth doing all the fax machine setups on the draft pictures ^-^
i thought it was to begain with with some mods
You have funny printing.