Onos Vs Marine

kyliegirlkyliegirl Gorge MasterAustralia Join Date: 2002-12-11 Member: 10586Members, Reinforced - Shadow
<div class="IPBDescription">the fight for survival</div> sorry for the temporary dissapearance of myself. but i have been around ns, just been fairly silent. so heres another long awaited pic to do with ns. enjoy <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->


layers- 64
time taken- 51 hrs (overall about 8 days)
size- 1169 x 827 pixels

<img src='http://www.opticpower.com/kylie/domain/onosvmarine.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

also heres a desktop version

<img src='http://www.opticpower.com/kylie/domain/desktoponovmarine.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
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  • n00b3hn00b3h Join Date: 2003-03-02 Member: 14205Members
    marines face lacks emotion he is too skinny and he looks like a wussy :|


    the onos kicks **** i should be on its own <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • RedfordRedford Monorailcatfjord Join Date: 2002-04-28 Member: 528Members, NS1 Playtester
    I think I know who's going to win! Yes! The cutegorge that is just off the frame to the right <3!
  • brute_forcebrute_force Join Date: 2003-10-04 Member: 21433Members, Constellation
    Nice, but... what is that green stuff on the right wall? If it is blood, then it looks quite strange and the onos should probably have wounds then. If it is infestation, it doesn't really look like it. Try making it more lumpy, cause right now it looks like it's splattered onto the wall, also the Kharaa infestation has a bit more yellowish/orange in it. Good job though. Oh, one more thing; the onos' eye is a bit thin. <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    If it is possible, could you make a 1600x1200 desktop version? <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • DethGauntDethGaunt Join Date: 2003-06-02 Member: 16938Members
    the marine needs beefing up a lot but the onos looks great good job.. the arms look a little long on the marine atm, but with a bit of beefing it will look fine
  • Fog_cartoonsFog_cartoons Join Date: 2003-09-08 Member: 20658Members
    you have to realise that most of the marines aren't super killers, and are probably poop scared when they see an onos, and when they are on their own, and when they only have a knife
  • kyliegirlkyliegirl Gorge Master Australia Join Date: 2002-12-11 Member: 10586Members, Reinforced - Shadow
    edited April 2004
    im sure not all marines would be all beefy, they would be all shapes and sizes. besides, the way the pics done, it would be a bit hard to beef him up now without ruining the armour etc. so ill just leave it..

    anyways, thanks for ya c and c <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    the infestation in the right wall is new infestation. like a new hostile invasion. it would start off green before it would grow its yellow and red orange tones. its sorta like on the scene battle and the infestation is spreading,


    edit: the onos eye is fine, hes more like squinting/evilly glaring as he attacks his victim. if you watch most creatures with eyelids when they attack, they squint at they lash out to bite at them.
  • brute_forcebrute_force Join Date: 2003-10-04 Member: 21433Members, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin-kyliegirl+Apr 25 2004, 03:51 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (kyliegirl @ Apr 25 2004, 03:51 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> the onos eye is fine, hes more like squinting/evilly glaring as he attacks his victim. if you watch most creatures with eyelids when they attack, they squint at they lash out to bite at them. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Oh. I don't know much about animals and such so <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • SudzzSudzz Join Date: 2003-08-01 Member: 18663Members, Constellation
    It looks great, though the marine does look like he just had all the fat torn out of him by the onos,
  • RaVeRaVe Join Date: 2003-06-20 Member: 17538Members
    edited April 2004
    :o Damn I don't work with enough layers <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    I like the whole pic, especially the expression of fear on the marines face. But his neck needs a bit of work. You try to make it look like he's looking at the Onos face to face, but he's looking at its feet. Shoulder plates also look a bit small, but I guess that could be explained by saying they gave him a uniform a 'slight bit smaller'.

    BTW, doesn't the knife also look a tad bit too small, or am I looking at too many katanas for one day?

    EDIT : Looking back on the picture, doesn't the Onos have tentacles much larger than that?
  • AkalamanaiaAkalamanaia Join Date: 2003-01-04 Member: 11833Members
    <!--emo&:0--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wow.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wow.gif' /><!--endemo--> Theres no..words...to describe beaty of this artwork...
  • taboofirestaboofires Join Date: 2002-11-24 Member: 9853Members
    Kylie please tell me somebody pays you well for your talent.

    The goo on the wall is kharaa blood. Somebody needs to turn his decals setting way up <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo--> But you're right, the combatants don't look particularly wounded, but I find it hard to imagine that an onos would ever look <i>wounded.</i>

    If you were to alter anything, I'd suggest toning down the marine's neck and changing his mouth a bit (I think it's the roundness that's throwing me off). It being right at a point your eye focuses on doesn't help much.
  • chis1chis1 Join Date: 2004-01-13 Member: 25281Members
    edited April 2004
    looks really good, but that marine is damn skinny <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    WOW i must say it acts as a great desktop image
  • kyliegirlkyliegirl Gorge Master Australia Join Date: 2002-12-11 Member: 10586Members, Reinforced - Shadow
    no, unfortunately i dont get paid for my art, or doing them. wish i could get a job doing art. but meh. my location isnt the best for artists.
  • ZunniZunni The best thing to happen to I&amp;S in a long while Join Date: 2002-11-26 Member: 10016Members
    I'm just curious what happened to make the marine be down on his knees like this. I understand him attempting to hold off the onos, and I personally don't have an issue with anything like how the marine looks etc. I'm more interested in the body positioning,

    But incredible work as always, you are the desktops on all the machines I have access to in my office and at home..
  • CatCopCatCop Join Date: 2003-08-28 Member: 20296Members, Constellation
    Kylie SHOULD get paid for her art.
    Hell I would pay.
    Kylie put up prints on Deviant Art <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • JimmehJimmeh Join Date: 2003-08-24 Member: 20173Members, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin-Delta-Snipe+Apr 26 2004, 09:23 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Delta-Snipe @ Apr 26 2004, 09:23 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Kylie SHOULD get paid for her art.
    Hell I would pay.
    Kylie put up prints on Deviant Art <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo--> <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    I agree.
  • Jean_Luc_PicardJean_Luc_Picard Join Date: 2003-02-03 Member: 13051Members
    Awsome! Just awsome!


    Tho I have to agree the marine needs a little more muscell. After all... they will only send the best of the best and they also have nano-neural implants as well as that armor which gives em all 6 packs!
  • panda_de_malheureuxpanda_de_malheureux Join Date: 2003-12-26 Member: 24775Members
    imo the whole holding the horn of the onos is a bit silly. if anything the marine should be scrambling backwards. and wheres his other leg? what is he a pirate? <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • Kenichi-SNKKenichi-SNK Join Date: 2003-12-21 Member: 24617Members
    Dude! That onos rules all other picture i have EVER seen!

    Get rid o the marine and the onos on its own will be a pure masterpiece! <!--emo&:0--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wow.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wow.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    <!--emo&::onos::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tiny.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tiny.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • AbraAbra Would you kindly Join Date: 2003-08-17 Member: 19870Members
    <!--emo&:0--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wow.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wow.gif' /><!--endemo--> that just looks SO GOOD!

    i get dizzy just trying to imagin how to create something like that! <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • SvenpaSvenpa Wait, what? Join Date: 2004-01-03 Member: 25012Members, Constellation
    Thats scary good art. nice just as all your other pics and as he said where's his other leg?
  • AezayAezay Join Date: 2003-04-19 Member: 15660Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-kyliegirl+Apr 26 2004, 03:01 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (kyliegirl @ Apr 26 2004, 03:01 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->no, unfortunately i dont get paid for my art, or doing them. wish i could get a job doing art. but meh. my location isnt the best for artists.<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Just continue to do what you do now, and eventually, you'll get paid for it. You may have to move, but if you love doing art, it'll be worth it.

    Good luck.
  • ChronoChrono Local flyboy Join Date: 2003-08-05 Member: 18989Members
    onos looks great but the marine looks a bit iffy i cant realy describe it
  • FlufFluf Join Date: 2004-04-05 Member: 27744Members
    I like it awesome picture and also the person said they couldnt describe the marine make him sitting on a toilet would look better. <!--emo&:0--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wow.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wow.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • GlissGliss Join Date: 2003-03-23 Member: 14800Members, Constellation, NS2 Map Tester
    <!--QuoteBegin-Aka'lamanaia+Apr 26 2004, 03:30 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Aka'lamanaia @ Apr 26 2004, 03:30 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--emo&:0--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wow.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wow.gif' /><!--endemo--> Theres no..words...to describe beaty of this artwork... <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    You're probably right, especially if you consider that beaty isn't a word.


    Nice work, Kylie, although I agree with most people about the marine. His neck seems a little too wide, as well.
  • Kenichi-SNKKenichi-SNK Join Date: 2003-12-21 Member: 24617Members
    Looks like fat b***t**d from austin powers with the skin excess <!--emo&:0--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wow.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wow.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • DrfuzzyDrfuzzy FEW... MORE.... INCHES... Join Date: 2003-09-21 Member: 21094Members
    make the marine have a shotgun and make him beefier and you have a winnar
  • Leaderz0rzLeaderz0rz Join Date: 2002-11-09 Member: 7847Members
    or she can leave it how it is...


    i like it =) you should do more onos devouring <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • FuryFury Silver Fish Hand Catch Join Date: 2003-08-14 Member: 19673Members, Constellation
    the other legs there.. just in a funky position <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • ThePhilipsThePhilips Join Date: 2002-09-09 Member: 1302Members
    The onos is extremly nice done. I can see your into more "animal" drawings then human. Very alive and well done.
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