My First "real" Artwork.

CplDavisCplDavis I hunt the arctic Snonos Join Date: 2003-01-09 Member: 12097Members
edited May 2004 in Artwork Forum
<div class="IPBDescription">BIG picture</div> Hi everyone, I got PS7 today, so a little upgrade from PS 6 which i was using before,

I started to read some tutorials and I tinkered around for 7 hours and I finaly came up with this.

Ive done a lot of "photoshop hacks" but ive never really made anything totaly my own from absolutly nothing, so here goes.

My favorite part was getting the surface of the planet to actually look 3 demensional.

I had to save it as a level 7 quality .jpeg to get it to fit for the NS forums so its kinda fuzzy here.

Im still working on the nebula aspects.

What do you guys think? Where do I need to put more work/impove on?

Thoughts please <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->

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  • StarchyStarchy Join Date: 2003-04-21 Member: 15727Members, Constellation
    edited May 2004
    That looks very nice, just one thing. The Saturn like planet looks like a bit of a copy and paste. <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo--> Other than that.....

    Oh and at the middle/bottom, there is a subtle shadow of a larger planet. I like that!
  • enf0rcerenf0rcer intrigued... Join Date: 2003-03-16 Member: 14584Members
    ah, i see you tried that cool planet/star tutorial set. Very nice, too bad we can't see the full quality version.. resized gif maybe? Anyway i like it all except for that flair type thing in the top left. It seems a bit out of place being so bright and not having a strong visible edge.
  • CplDavisCplDavis I hunt the arctic Snonos Join Date: 2003-01-09 Member: 12097Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-Starchy+May 23 2004, 06:38 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Starchy @ May 23 2004, 06:38 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> That looks very nice, just one thing. The Saturn like planet looks like a bit of a copy and paste. <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo--> Other than that..... <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    nah, I made the planet and the rings in 2 separate files, I used similar colors from the example in the tutorial.

    It looks like a copy paste b/c I copied my planet layer onto my main star map layer.

    Unfortunately for me I made a newby mistake and I had made my planet over a black backdrop on the same layer. So after I pasted I had to erase/dematt as best I could around the planet and rings.

    >_<
  • LikuLiku I, am the Somberlain. Join Date: 2003-01-10 Member: 12128Members
    I like it, but I'm not diggin' the lense flare and the Saturn Planet.
  • OmegamanOmegaman Join Date: 2004-01-11 Member: 25239Members
    The lens flare could be emphasized a weeee bit more, but other than that, perfect.
  • DrfuzzyDrfuzzy FEW... MORE.... INCHES... Join Date: 2003-09-21 Member: 21094Members
    i like this <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • MavericMaveric Join Date: 2002-08-07 Member: 1101Members
    Put a "Natural-Selection" on it and as a sub-title "Survival of the Fittest"

    <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • CplDavisCplDavis I hunt the arctic Snonos Join Date: 2003-01-09 Member: 12097Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-Jean Luc Picard+May 23 2004, 01:00 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Jean Luc Picard @ May 23 2004, 01:00 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> I THINK I FOUND MY NEW BACKGROUND!


    Sweet dude! You really made that yourself??? <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    yea yea I made it <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    Here is more proof lol for those wondering about my sloppy planet transfer.
    See pic. (I think I looks like the Mars planet fromt he DOOM 3 trailer lol minus the rings. I used a nice texture fro the planetand then played around with 2 more layers to make the "highs" and "lows" of the sphereised texture stand out to look like actual terrain.

    If I had wanted too after I could have dropped another picture on there of a city from space view and make it look like there are areas filled with a large futuristic cities.

    Anyways, I just did the Star map first, then the Planet, then the Planet Rings, then the Nebula all separately then I just layered everything over on top of the star map.
  • Jean_Luc_PicardJean_Luc_Picard Join Date: 2003-02-03 Member: 13051Members
    I THINK I FOUND MY NEW BACKGROUND!


    Sweet dude! You really made that yourself???
  • EpidemicEpidemic Dark Force Gorge Join Date: 2003-06-29 Member: 17781Members
    edited May 2004
    Sorry to hijack but I didnt think it would warrant a new thread. Anyone likes this?


    Better quality:
    <img src='http://www.freewebs.com/bladmand/sphere3.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
  • statusqstatusq Join Date: 2003-01-10 Member: 12142Members
    Epidemic, why? Isn't there an own thread for these tutorial-based planets in off-topic forums? Atleast you could have resized your picture.
    And Davis, otherwise very pretty picture but the upper right corner lens-flare seems to be little out of place. It doesn't seem to fit in for some reason. Maybe reduce glow and add a few brighter streaks to make it look better.
    I love the planet (especially rings) and the backgroung stars!
    Very nice peace of art!
  • EpidemicEpidemic Dark Force Gorge Join Date: 2003-06-29 Member: 17781Members
    I had no response, why should I resize the picture?
  • RipzawRipzaw Join Date: 2004-05-09 Member: 28560Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-Epidemic+May 24 2004, 10:53 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Epidemic @ May 24 2004, 10:53 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> I had no response, why should I resize the picture? <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    It's a little bigger than my desktop and I got it at 1600x1200... I can't imagine what this would look like on 1024x768 or under.
  • EpidemicEpidemic Dark Force Gorge Join Date: 2003-06-29 Member: 17781Members
    You cant compromise art <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • BallistoBallisto Join Date: 2003-05-19 Member: 16503Members
  • MeanMrMustardMeanMrMustard Join Date: 2003-11-23 Member: 23456Members
    Looks good, but Slightly boring.. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo--> (in my opinion)
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