Ns_revenge

BoSLOBOBoSLOBO Join Date: 2004-08-13 Member: 30594Members
in Mapping Forum
<div class="IPBDescription">my first ns map</div> its my first ns map...
<img src='http://osk.polhost.pl/~nemrod/sc/t20.JPG' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

<img src='http://osk.polhost.pl/~nemrod/sc/t21.JPG' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

<img src='http://osk.polhost.pl/~nemrod/sc/t22.JPG' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

<img src='http://osk.polhost.pl/~nemrod/sc/t23.JPG' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

<img src='http://osk.polhost.pl/~nemrod/sc/t24.JPG' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

<img src='http://osk.polhost.pl/~nemrod/sc/t28.JPG' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

<img src='http://osk.polhost.pl/~nemrod/sc/t30.JPG' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

<img src='http://osk.polhost.pl/~nemrod/sc/t31.JPG' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

<img src='http://osk.polhost.pl/~nemrod/sc/t32.JPG' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

<img src='http://osk.polhost.pl/~nemrod/sc/t33.JPG' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
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  • KesterKester Join Date: 2004-02-21 Member: 26770Members, Constellation
    a nice style uve got there, i think u need to work on ur texture use and ur brushwork a little, but it's a good start
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  • ReeseReese Join Date: 2003-05-08 Member: 16143Members
    I agree, great work for your first map.

    In addition to working on texturing/brushwork. I'd say you might want to look at your lighting as well. You have what seems like a lot of rooms entirely made of one color non-white light. This often tends to not look all that good. I'd say a lot of the areas could be visually improved with a little bit of white light thrown in to break things up.
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  • AlignAlign Remain Calm Join Date: 2002-11-02 Member: 5216Forum Moderators, Constellation
    If you aren't going to retexture the stairs so they look more like stairs, I say turn them into ramps.
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  • tomestomes Join Date: 2003-04-15 Member: 15524Members
    Good Job! Lobo. People will be playing with your map:) I'm waiting for next version of ns_revenge.
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  • Foxtrot_UniformFoxtrot_Uniform Join Date: 2003-06-12 Member: 17328Members
    "for you first map"? dont say bs like that. It's better than half the maps on these forums. I really like that last picture. Very atmospheric. The glass is cool in the rest of the pics, but you need to get some sort of glass textre, liek have them frosted in the corners or something. Don't want to make it look too plain.
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  • BoSLOBOBoSLOBO Join Date: 2004-08-13 Member: 30594Members
    its my first ns map not my first map whole.
    thx for your opinion <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->
    i change glass textures probably...
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  • brute_forcebrute_force Join Date: 2003-10-04 Member: 21433Members, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin-Foxtrot_Uniform+Aug 13 2004, 09:15 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Foxtrot_Uniform @ Aug 13 2004, 09:15 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> "for you first map"? dont say bs like that. It's better than half the maps on these forums. I really like that last picture. Very atmospheric. The glass is cool in the rest of the pics, but you need to get some sort of glass textre, liek have them frosted in the corners or something. Don't want to make it look too plain. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Nice going there - you just successfully insulted half of the mapping community in one post.
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  • RecoupRecoup Join Date: 2004-04-25 Member: 28195Members
    agreed... <!--emo&:angry:--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/mad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='mad.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • AfrAfr Join Date: 2003-05-13 Member: 16240Members, Reinforced - Shadow
    Nice architecture and everythin. You might want to look over the textures.
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  • RabbiSatanRabbiSatan Join Date: 2003-03-16 Member: 14562Members, Constellation
    Your map is comming along quite nicely - I would suggest adding some vents and areas along your corridors for skulks to be able to ambush (But not overly so that makes it too easy for them to do so).

    I'm not sure how the rest of the maps look like - but from first impression, the corridors are <i>very</i> claustrophobic - nicely done <!--emo&::asrifle::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/asrifle.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='asrifle.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • Once_OnlyOnce_Only Join Date: 2004-05-15 Member: 28700Members
    Its nice, but the glass is wierd <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif' /><!--endemo-->


    If jpegs didnt make the colour red look so grainy id really love that last pic.
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  • tomestomes Join Date: 2003-04-15 Member: 15524Members
    Don't worry, these screens are from beta version of this map. All the time he's sitting at the computer and making this map. I think when he finished, this map will be look better than on the screens.



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  • BijiyBijiy Fantastic Damage Join Date: 2003-11-28 Member: 23697Members
    Looking good, just gotta work on the texture job.
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  • KaineKaine Join Date: 2002-08-07 Member: 1096Members, Constellation
    i'd like to see a bit more contrast in the lighting. not sure whether its gamma settings or what, but all those screenys look a little washed out. i think you could be an awesome NS mapper with a bit of brushwork practice and getting a bit more detail into your maps. i love your style, has a real "epic" feel. keep at it!
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  • Lt_GravityLt_Gravity Join Date: 2003-04-28 Member: 15909Members
    and WHERE is the MAP? <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo-->
    nice so far but please try to use some different textures. the architecture itself is god but the texturing is horrible. to plain for my taste. some more colors would be fine.
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  • BoSLOBOBoSLOBO Join Date: 2004-08-13 Member: 30594Members
    but i have only 4 MB memory for texture :/
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  • brute_forcebrute_force Join Date: 2003-10-04 Member: 21433Members, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin-[BoS]LOBO+Aug 14 2004, 12:04 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> ([BoS]LOBO @ Aug 14 2004, 12:04 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> but i have only 4 MB memory for texture :/ <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Still means that you can choose better textures. Use some more ns2.wad textures.
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  • Lt_GravityLt_Gravity Join Date: 2003-04-28 Member: 15909Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-[BoS]LOBO+Aug 14 2004, 06:04 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> ([BoS]LOBO @ Aug 14 2004, 06:04 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> but i have only 4 MB memory for texture :/ <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    tststs....
    and why do <b>I</b> have 8 mb texture limit? <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
    you should use the up-to-date compile tools. mappping forum stickied thread. and using ns2.wad textures instead of the ns.wad textures is recommended to achieve a more detailed style, even with the same geometry. try it.
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  • AlignAlign Remain Calm Join Date: 2002-11-02 Member: 5216Forum Moderators, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin-Kaine+Aug 14 2004, 11:06 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Kaine @ Aug 14 2004, 11:06 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> i'd like to see a bit more contrast in the lighting. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    <img src='http://www.giantninjarobots.net/stuff/rolleyes.gif' border='0' alt='user posted image' /><img src='http://www.giantninjarobots.net/stuff/rolleyes.gif' border='0' alt='user posted image' /><img src='http://www.giantninjarobots.net/stuff/rolleyes.gif' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
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  • SlayerXSlayerX Poland Join Date: 2004-03-01 Member: 27028Members
    You got very good architecture there but try to work on texture alligment. I know it's kinda hard but the result will satisfy not only you <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo--> People just love to see perfect textures etc.

    Overall is not bad at all :> Keep up the good work man!
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  • CarNagE1CarNagE1 Poland Join Date: 2003-05-14 Member: 16298Members, NS2 Playtester, Reinforced - Shadow, WC 2013 - Supporter, Subnautica Playtester
    I hope you gone finish that map and you are not gone end like all mapers that wanted to do ns map and ended making combat out of it :/ good luck mate <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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