Ello Ello!
<div class="IPBDescription">help a brother out</div> i guess i should start off by saying that im new, that i like what ive seen, and that i think this is a great forum....
then i'll get right down to what i want to ask
i need someone to turn this into a song, cause i cant right them, i can right what i want to say, i just cant make it into a song, so i was hoping that if someone turned this into a song i could learn from it and do so by myself, give a man a fish and he eats for a night, teach a man to fish and etc etc...
Hustled
embarrassed and ashamed
you left me naked and confused
i sat by the phone waiting
for your call, stripped by your words
but i wont fall for your slight of hand again
i wont fall for your change of face
hand after hand you beat me with a trump
i just didnt see what was hidden up your sleave
a few randy smiles and a few kind words were all you needed
to bring me to my knees
but i wont fall for your slight of hand again
i wont fall for your change of face
you had me on your skirt tails
you had me on my knees
you had me flushed and trumped as well
from the moment we started this game
but i wont fall for you slight of hand again
i wont fall for your change of face
ive never been good at the game
but ive never really tried
i always played for fun
and expected the same
now i know better,
you sharks are out to feast
that poker face doesnt fool me any more
you cant hide your feelings
its obvious your not holding ****
so you can quit your pretending,
im not going to fold this time
cause ive played my hand and now im done
i'll save my chips and play with somone else
someone whose just in it for the fun.
then i'll get right down to what i want to ask
i need someone to turn this into a song, cause i cant right them, i can right what i want to say, i just cant make it into a song, so i was hoping that if someone turned this into a song i could learn from it and do so by myself, give a man a fish and he eats for a night, teach a man to fish and etc etc...
Hustled
embarrassed and ashamed
you left me naked and confused
i sat by the phone waiting
for your call, stripped by your words
but i wont fall for your slight of hand again
i wont fall for your change of face
hand after hand you beat me with a trump
i just didnt see what was hidden up your sleave
a few randy smiles and a few kind words were all you needed
to bring me to my knees
but i wont fall for your slight of hand again
i wont fall for your change of face
you had me on your skirt tails
you had me on my knees
you had me flushed and trumped as well
from the moment we started this game
but i wont fall for you slight of hand again
i wont fall for your change of face
ive never been good at the game
but ive never really tried
i always played for fun
and expected the same
now i know better,
you sharks are out to feast
that poker face doesnt fool me any more
you cant hide your feelings
its obvious your not holding ****
so you can quit your pretending,
im not going to fold this time
cause ive played my hand and now im done
i'll save my chips and play with somone else
someone whose just in it for the fun.
Comments
What...
The...
Flap...
(some may also make posts just for +1s/and or ranting)
Im just bringing up some fun... I needed some excuse to post it.
Crazycat if youd like that removed just tell meh, ill get rid of it.
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You might refer to it as "rap" but just stick a c in front and it becomes "crap"
I should rap a song like that.
YOU JERK!
(bad joke I know)
So - does it have emotinal significance to you? If so it is poetry and nothing needs to be changed. If it doesn't communicate your feelings perfectly, then tweak it until it does. What is considered poetry by another is unimportant as long as you yourself consider it important to you.
Of course, if you're going for extra credit, if you can make it mean somthing to both people, you get five bonus points - which is a goal most poets strive for. Don't worry if you can't do it at first. Be satisifed in arraging words in a manner that effectivly communicates your inner feelings which can be nearly impossible given certain situations.
Deep, I know. o.o
as for the flash video
extremely dissapointing, i thought you'd helped me out, and only mildy amusing, but i think it was cleverly placed and as you said you wanted to show it off so no harsh feelings guvner
YOU JERK!
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:*(
Anywho, that was more of a <i>pre-emptive</i> warning, for when the commies come out to play.
but in all serious thanks for the welcome and advice, (though there wasnt too much of that,)
and one last question, whats really the hot spot in this forum? where do the majority go to post?
You must take some time if you want to see everything, lets say 24/7 should be enough.
Off-topic and general discusion are the most active i think.
That was disturbing...
Welcome to the boards crazycat,
I'm usually hanging out in the customization forum, the models and such that people make I find truely amazing. Wish I could model ... *whimper*... someday!
i have so many poems that were meant to be songs, i just cant make a song, it doesnt matter what i do, my brother says it'll help when i learn the guitar, but so far all ive got down is the meow mix song, 5-4-2-0, 5-4-2-0, 5-4-5-6-7-4-2-0 (all on any string)