Razor Rifle (drake Concept)

RapierRapier Join Date: 2004-09-12 Member: 31631Members
edited October 2004 in NS Customization
<div class="IPBDescription">My First :D</div> Other then the leg i made in a tutorial ths is my first model WOOT!!
As you go about pointing out the models flaws please tell me how to fix and avoid the mistakes.
Drakes Concept
<img src='http://home.iprimus.com.au/rjlory/Razorrifle.JPG' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

Go Go Milkshape!
<img src='http://home.iprimus.com.au/rjlory/razor0.JPG' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
<img src='http://home.iprimus.com.au/rjlory/razor1.JPG' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
<img src='http://home.iprimus.com.au/rjlory/razor2.JPG' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

Looks kinda like a sniper rifle now that i look at it...
Doh!! forgot to put the lil circle thingson the scope >_<... bugger it
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Comments

  • TheUdderOneTheUdderOne Join Date: 2004-05-04 Member: 28471Members
    A very good first model. One thing you should think about is the width of the gun, it is very thin at the moment.

    Also i know smoothing is an avoided subject in milkshape, but I think the gun would look a lot better with some smoothing.
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  • TheritesTherites Join Date: 2004-09-08 Member: 31525Members
    edited October 2004
    i like it just never smoothshade your guns post a flat shade. MUCH better than my first model, excelent work for start.

    *EDIT* now that i read his post that is conficlting what i mean is dont just post it smoothshaded if your not gonna "smooth" it, i didnt know if he knew about that.

    *EDIT* *2* can you tell us polycount? that would be good.
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  • RapierRapier Join Date: 2004-09-12 Member: 31631Members
    Polly count... hermmm it has 863 triangles which i think is same as polly count?
    i belive the reason for this is A. nublar modeler B. used box's and didnt remove unvieable faces (cuz its fidly and anoying <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->)

    I'mn ot sure what u mean by smoothing. I can display as smoothed of flat shaded but u said smooth it and i dunno what ur on about lol.
    do u mean to make it less boxy??
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  • drealiTdrealiT Join Date: 2004-08-30 Member: 31041Members
    IMO dont even bother posting a smoothshaded model pic if u haven't properly smoothed it.

    to answer your question on what smoothing is... <a href='http://curv.net/dlcss/deadlok/smoothing/' target='_blank'>http://curv.net/dlcss/deadlok/smoothing/</a>
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  • HellspawnUKHellspawnUK Join Date: 2004-08-07 Member: 30437Members
    To find out the poly count in Milkshape open your model, ctr+a to select all then under tools select SelPolycount
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  • phoenix911phoenix911 Join Date: 2004-09-27 Member: 31953Members
    very thin, in fact too thin for my liking but nice all the same
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  • wascally_wabbitwascally_wabbit Join Date: 2003-09-09 Member: 20701Members
    Me likes a lot.

    You're right about the sniper rifle thing, you can try shortening the front a bit, but either way, looks awesome.

    Unfortunately, since it's such a long gun, it'll look like it's stretching out a few meters in HL, which is probably why I won't be using it.

    v. nice model though.
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