End Of A Dream.
<div class="IPBDescription">A poem by me.</div> <i><b>End of a dream</b></i>
<i>On this one night, I gazed at the dark sky,
A tear of sorrow falling down my cheek.
This old dream was ending with a long sigh.
I heard you whisper “Was it all a lie?”
It faded away before I could speak.
Pray for me, please ask me to be reborn.
Close my eyes, in yours I saw the twilight.
Lone fool lost in a storm in the shadows.
I became but a heart frozen in time,
Engulfed in the flames of a blazing rose.
Walking to my demise, my soul arose
Asking for one more chance to be sublime.
Pray for me, please ask me to be reborn.
Close my eyes, in yours I saw the moonlight.
In my despair, they’ve shown me their delight,
They in the dark have granted your prayer.
On my soft wings, I went for my last flight,
They told me “May this be your final night.”
I breathed my last with my hands in your hair.
Pray for me, please ask me to be reborn.
Close my eyes, in yours I saw the sunlight.</i>
<span style='font-size:8pt;line-height:100%'> Paul “Tresth” Nicollet</span>
A little something I made yesterday, thought I might share it with you aswell.
Feel free to comment.
Oh. I have the strong feeling that it's complete, so I won't make changes to it.
<i>On this one night, I gazed at the dark sky,
A tear of sorrow falling down my cheek.
This old dream was ending with a long sigh.
I heard you whisper “Was it all a lie?”
It faded away before I could speak.
Pray for me, please ask me to be reborn.
Close my eyes, in yours I saw the twilight.
Lone fool lost in a storm in the shadows.
I became but a heart frozen in time,
Engulfed in the flames of a blazing rose.
Walking to my demise, my soul arose
Asking for one more chance to be sublime.
Pray for me, please ask me to be reborn.
Close my eyes, in yours I saw the moonlight.
In my despair, they’ve shown me their delight,
They in the dark have granted your prayer.
On my soft wings, I went for my last flight,
They told me “May this be your final night.”
I breathed my last with my hands in your hair.
Pray for me, please ask me to be reborn.
Close my eyes, in yours I saw the sunlight.</i>
<span style='font-size:8pt;line-height:100%'> Paul “Tresth” Nicollet</span>
A little something I made yesterday, thought I might share it with you aswell.
Feel free to comment.
Oh. I have the strong feeling that it's complete, so I won't make changes to it.
Comments
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<i>My friends wonder why I call you all of the time
What can I say
I don't feel the need to give such secrets away
You think maybe I need help, no, I know that I'm right
I'm just better off not listening to friends' advice
When they insist on knowing my bliss
I tell them this
When they want to know what the reason is
I only smile when I lie, then I tell them why
(Because your kiss) your kiss is on my list
(Because your kiss) your kiss is on my list
Because your kiss is on my list of the best things in life
(Because your kiss) your kiss is on my list
(Because your kiss) your kiss I can't resist
Because your kiss it's what If miss when If turn off the lights
I go crazy wondering what there is to really see
Did the night just take up your time, 'cause it means more to me
Sometimes I forget what I'm doing, I don't forget what I want
Regret what I've done, regret you? I couldn't go on
And if you insist on knowing my bliss
I'll tell you this
If you want to know what the reason is
I'll only smile when I lie, then I'll tell you why
(Because your kiss) your kiss is on my list
(Because your kiss) your kiss I can't resist
Because your kiss it's what If miss when If turn off the lights
(Because your kiss) your kiss is on my list
(Because your kiss) your kiss is on my list
Because your kiss is on my list of the best things in life
(Because your kiss) your kiss is on my list
(Because your kiss) your kiss I can't resist
Because your kiss it's what If miss when If turn off the lights</i>
It had to be done.
Shape Of My Heart
Hmm, yeah, yeah
Baby, please try to forgive me
Stay here don't put out the glow
Hold me now don't bother
If every minute it makes me weaker
You can save me from the man that I've become, oh yeah
Lookin' back on the things I've done
I was tryin' to be someone
I played my part
And kept you in the dark
Now let me show you the shape of my heart
Sadness is beautiful
Loneliness is tragical
So help me I can't win this war, oh no
Touch me now don't bother
If every second it makes me weaker
You can save me from the man I've become
Lookin' back on the things I've done (back on the things...)
I was tryin' to be someone (tryin' to be...)
I played my part
And kept you in the dark (in the dark)
Now let me show you the shape of my heart
I'm here with my confession
Got nothin' to hide no more
I dont know where to start
But to show you the shape of my heart
I'm lookin' back on things I've done
I never wanna play the same old part
I'll keep you (keep you in the dark) in the dark
Now let me show you the shape of my heart
Lookin' back on the things I've done
I was tryin' to be someone (tryin' to be someone)
I played my part
Kept you in the dark
Now let me show (Now let me show you the true)
you the shape (shape of my heart) of my heart
Lookin' back on the things I've done
I was tryin' to be someone
I played my part
And kept you in the dark
Now let me show you the shape of
Show you the shape of my heart
/obligatory.
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On the other....
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- Shockwave
P.S Wub Tresth, you know I wub you.
Groan.
I got love in my tummy,
And I feel like a-lovin you:
Love, you're such a sweet thing,
Good enough to eat thing
And that's just a-what I'm gonna do.
Ooh love, to hold ya,
Ooh love, to kiss ya,
Ooh love, I love it so.
Ooh love, you're sweeter,
Sweeter than sugar.
Ooh love, I wont let you go.
Yummy, Yummy, Yummy,
I got love in my tummy,
And as silly as it may seem;
The lovin' that you re giving,
is what keeps me livin'
And your love is like
Peaches and cream.
Kind-a like sugar,
Kind-a like spices,
Kind-a like, like what you do.
Kind-a sounds funny.
But love,honey
Honey. I love you.
Yummy, Yummy, Yummy,
I. got love in my tummy,
That your love can satisfy;
Love, you're such a sweet thing,
Good enough to eat thing
And sweet thing, that ain't no lie.
I love to hold ya,
Oh love, to kiss ya,
Ooh love, I love it so.
Ooh love, you're sweeter,
Sweeter than sugar.
Ooh love, I wont let you go.</i>
World: 0
This thread is art, if not for Coleman's post alone.
Allowing our thoughts, our thinking in rhyme
We see deep inside the hearts of each other
And inside ourselves, a father and mother
Maybe our dreams, which speak of unrest
Need to be spoken, simply a test
To see if our love, is more than skin deep
If so great rewards are what we will reap
Maybe our eyes, longing and dire
A gateway to our soul, our own inner fire
They show us the way, allowing us peace
And sometimes deceive us, showing a beast
Maybe our love, spoken today
Is guiding our future, showing the way
It helps us live on, when day turns to night
It helps us forgive, each little fight
Our children will go, and live on tomorrow
So swallow our pride, tell of our sorrow
I see pain inside you, a deep wounding scar
Unhealed and unheard, it’s followed thus far
It won’t go away, not on its own
You’re heart is its place, its own little home
Don’t let it control you, you are its boss
Allow me to take it, and help bear you’re cross
Maybe you’re fond, of hearing me say
How dear I love you, in each little way
I wish I could help you, relinquish you’re fear
Cause the love that we have, I hold it dear
Maybe it’s you, that’s showed me the way
And helped me find light, in every day
You saved my life dear, your love as it would
And you’ve helped me to see, all that is good
Maybe it’s me, holding you close
Through every day, the love is a rose
It hurt only one way, deep down in my heart
Maybe, some day, we won’t be apart
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I know it sucks... no need to tell me...
falling
dropping
my dark soul cries out but no one listens
I saw the eyes of Death...
the blade kisses me deeply
though i breathe i am not truly alive
the blood that i have bleed for thee
screaming
i am fallen and will never rise
life is my blood
endless bleak night
masterpiece
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So true ... so true.
Eh?
<!--QuoteBegin--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->My heart as black
As my grandmas toenails
Deep under
Buried with grandfather
My heart bleeds
Red
Like a tampon
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Ohhhh yeah. I am such a genius.
As my grandmas toenails
Deep under
Buried with grandfather
My heart bleeds
Red
Like a tampon
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Excellent!
I got love in my tummy,
And I feel like a-lovin you:
Love, you're such a sweet thing,
Good enough to eat thing
And that's just a-what I'm gonna do.
Ooh love, to hold ya,
Ooh love, to kiss ya,
Ooh love, I love it so.
Ooh love, you're sweeter,
Sweeter than sugar.
Ooh love, I wont let you go.
Yummy, Yummy, Yummy,
I got love in my tummy,
And as silly as it may seem;
The lovin' that you re giving,
is what keeps me livin'
And your love is like
Peaches and cream.
Kind-a like sugar,
Kind-a like spices,
Kind-a like, like what you do.
Kind-a sounds funny.
But love,honey
Honey. I love you.
Yummy, Yummy, Yummy,
I. got love in my tummy,
That your love can satisfy;
Love, you're such a sweet thing,
Good enough to eat thing
And sweet thing, that ain't no lie.
I love to hold ya,
Oh love, to kiss ya,
Ooh love, I love it so.
Ooh love, you're sweeter,
Sweeter than sugar.
Ooh love, I wont let you go.</i> <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
Obvious / 10.
As my grandmas toenails
Deep under
Buried with grandfather
My heart bleeds
Red
Like a tampon
Used<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
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Good use of Imagery and Sentence Structure.
Zerobyte gets an A.
Put it in the soul of everyone
Do you know what you want? You don't know for sure
You don't feel right, you can't find a cure
And you're gettin' less than what you're lookin' for
You don't have money or a fancy car
And you're tired of wishin' on a falling star
You gotta put your faith in a loud guitar
God gave rock and roll to you, gave rock and roll to you
Gave rock and roll to everyone (oh yeah)
God gave rock and roll to you, gave rock and roll to you
Put it in the soul of everyone
"Now listen"
If you wanna be a singer, or play guitar
Man, you gotta sweat or you won't get far
Cause it's never too late to work nine-to-five
You can take a stand, or you can compromise
You can work real hard or just fantasize
But you don't start livin' till you realize - "I gotta tell ya!"
God gave rock and roll to you, gave rock and roll to you
Gave rock and roll to everyone
God gave rock and roll to you, gave rock and roll to you
Put it in the soul
God gave rock and roll to you (to everyone he gave the song to be sung)
Gave rock and roll to you, gave rock and roll to everyone
God gave rock and roll to you (to everyone he gave the song to be sung)
Gave rock and roll to you, saved rock and roll for everyone
Saved rock and roll
"I know life sometimes can get tough! And I know life sometimes can be a drag!
But people, we have been given a gift, we have been given a road
And that road's name is... Rock and Roll!"<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->