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RenegadeRenegade Old school Join Date: 2002-03-29 Member: 361Members
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Lt. Stark: Hang on guys, we're going to drop in 3...2...1... Contact.
Pvt. Romerez: Woo! Express elevator to hell, goin' down!
S. Sgt. Matthews: Ugh, oh god.
[Vomiting]
Pvt. Clark: Heh heh, let it all out Sarge, 'cause we ain't done yet!
S. Sgt. Matthews: Uhn, shouldn't have eatin those pancakes. Ugh.
Pvt. Meyers: I've gotta bad feeling about this mission...
Pvt. Clark: You say that about every mission.
Lt. Stark: Hold on to your breakfast guys; we're in for some chops.
[Rumbling]
Pvt. Romerez: Hah! Too late for Matthews!
S. Sgt. Matthews: Ugh, #### you Romerez.
Lt. Stark: We're approaching the landing zone, prepare to deploy.
2nd Lt. Gerro: APC prepped and ready to roll.
Lt. Stark: Roger... We've reached the landing zone, you guys are on your own from here.
Pvt. Colbern: Deploy APC.
2nd Lt. Gerro: APC deployed, heading for drop zone 1... Drop zone reached. This is your stop Alpha Team.
F. Sgt. Briggs: Okay team, lets move out!
Pvt. Romerez: I hear that!
PFC Salvonivich: Alpha Team has deployed, awaiting orders.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Alpha Team, proceede to the forward Air-Lock and await orders.
PFC Salvonivich: Roger.
2nd Lt. Gerrp: Approaching drop zone 2... Drop zone reached, you know the drill Bravo team.
S. Sgt. Matthews: Okay Bravo team, lets go.
Cpl Shephard: Hell Yeah!
2nd Lt. Gerro: Stay sharp marines; the last team sent down here disapeared, we suspect that whatever got the colonists got them as well.
Cpl. Shephard: So this is another search and rescue mission?
2nd Lt. Gerro: Do you have a problem with that Corporal?
Cpl. Shephard: No Sir!
PFC Salvonivich: Sir, Alpha team has reached the forward Air-Lock, awaiting orders.
2nd  Lt. Gerro: Alpha Team, proceede through the forward Air-Lock until you reach medical, and keep your motion trackers on hand.
PFC Salvonivich: Roger.
Cpl. Shephard: Sir, Bravo Team has arrived at the rear Air-Lock, awaiting orders.
2nd Lt.: Bravo Team, proceede through the rear Air-Lock until you reach ops, and keep your motion trackers on hand.
Cpl. Shephard: Roger.
PFC Salvonivich: Sir, this Alpha Team, the Air-Lock door won't budge, it looks like it's been welded shut, please advise.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Alpha Team, use your power welders to open the Air-Lock door.
PFC Salvonivich: Roger.
Cpl. Shephard: This is Bravo Team, we have cleared the rear Air-Lock, proceeding to ops.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Affirmative Bravo Team, proceede with caution.
Cpl. Shephard: Roger.
PFC. Salvonivich: Sir, this is Alpha Team, we've cleared the forward Air-Lock, proceeding to medical.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Affirmative Alpha Team, proceede with caution.
PFC. Salvonivich: Roger.
Pvt. Clark: Damn, the lights are out.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Briggs, send one of your men down to Level 3, there sould be a tertiary power uplink in sub-section D.
F. Sgt. Briggs: Roger, Douglas; you know what to do.
Pvt. Douglas: Yes sir.
Pvt. Romerez: Jesus Christ, what happened here?
PFC Salvonivich: Looks like someone waged a war in here...
F. Sgt. Briggs: Come on people, keep it moving; we've got an objective to accomlish.
Cpl. Shephard: Holy #### on a stick...
Pvt. Clark: Woo, someone died.
S. Sgt. Matthews: Keep moving people, we havn't reached ops yet.
Pvt. Ericson: Sir, I'm picking up movement, 27 meters up.
S. Sgt. Matthews: What? Let me see that... Lieutenant, this is Bravo Team, we've got movement, multiple subjects, they're heading our way, please advise.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Briggs, is your team on Level 2?
F. Sgt. Briggs: Negative, we're all on Level 1, except Douglas.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Douglas, what's your 20?
Pvt. Douglas: I'm on Level 3, sub-section A.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Acknowledged, Matthews, send one of your men to investigaite.
S. Sgt. Matthews: Roger, Shephard; you know what to do.
Cpl. Shephard: Yes Sir... This is Corporal Shephard of the TSA Marine Corps, identify yourself, now... I repeat, identi - who the hell - oh ####!
[Gunfire]
S. Sgt. Matthews: Shephard, hold your fire!
Cpl. Shephard: It ain't me sarge!
[Gunfire]
S. Sgt. Matthews: Well then who's shooting then?!
Cpl. Shephard: I don't know!
2nd Lt. Gerro: Get your men out of there now, Matthews!
[Gunfire]
S. Sgt. Matthews: What about Shephard?!
2nd Lt. Gerro: Now sergeant!
S. Sgt. Matthews: Yes Sir... Fall back!
[Gunfire]
Pvt. Clark: What about Shephard?!
S. Sgt. Matthews: Fall back Private!
Pvt. Clark: Yes Sir.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Bravo Team, rendevous with Alpha Team in medical.
S Sgt. Matthews: Yes Sir.
PFC Salvonivich: Alpha Team has arrived at medical, awaiting orders.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Alpha Team, set up a parameter around medical, Bravo team was attacked by an unidentified hostile force and is heading your way, so keep sharp.
PFC Salvonivich: Roger.
Pvt. Douglas: This is Douglas, I've found the tertiary power uplink, please advise.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Okay listen up Douglas; you don't have much time, there should be a numerical key-pad to the left of the uplink, on it I want you to press 6-5-5-9.
Pvt. Douglas: Uh, the code isn't working Sir.
2nd Lt. Gerro: What?
Pvt. Douglas: The code Sir, it's not working.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Try it again
Pvt. Douglas: I've tried it 3 times Sir, it's not working.
2nd Lt. Gerro: ####, alright, break the pannel open with the butt of your rifle.
Pvt. Douglas: Done.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Okay, you should see a red an blue striped wire, and white wire.
Pvt. Douglas: I see them.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Okay, connect them, the proceede to medical on the double Private!
Pvt. Douglas: Yes Sir!
2nd Sgt. Matthews: This is Bravo team, we've reached medical, awaiting orders.
2nd Lt. Gerro: Roger Bravo team, I want you to help Alpha team set up a parameter around medical.
Cpl. Shephard: This is Shephard I'm at [Static] I'm going to access the [Static] and find out [Static] the Hell happened here!
2nd Lt. Gerro: Negative Corporal, retreat to mediacal, I say again, retreat to medical!
Cpl. Shephard: Yes Sir, pro- [Static]
F. Sgt. Briggs: What the Hell?!?! [Gunfire] Sir! [Gunfire] We're under attack!
2nd Lt. Gerro: By who?!
F. Sgt. Briggs: I don't know! [Gunfire] But they're not human! [Gunfire]
Pvt. Clark: What are these things?!?!
[Gunfire]Pvt. Romerez: Oh this is loco, man!
[Gunfire]
PFC Salvonivich: #### this ####! I'm outta here!
[Gunfire]
F. Sgt. Briggs: Get the Hell back here, Private! [Screaming] Private? PRIVATE!!! Sir, they got Salvonivich!
2nd Lt. Gerro: ######! Alright, get your men outta there, now!
F. Sgt. Briggs: Negative, negative! [Gunfire]  We're pinned down, we can't [Unknown Noise] ####! [Gunfire]
Pvt. Romerez: I could use some help over here, muchacho's!
2nd. Lt. Gerro: Get outta th-
*ERROR* Unknown Soldier: I'll take care of this, Lieutenant.
2nd. Lt. Gerro: Sir... But I thought-
*ERROR* Unknown Soldier: Don't worry; I'll get your men out of there
2nd. Lt. Gerro: Good luck, Sir. Okay people, Listen up! I want you to keep fighting until reinforcments arrive, then get your ##### back here!
F. Sgt. Briggs: Understood! Alright men, you heard the man; keep you mouthes shut and your guns blazing!
[Gunfire]
Pvt. Romerez: This is loco, man! We're all gonna die!
[Gunfire]
Pvt. Davis: What the hell are these things m- [Unknown Noise] Holy ####! [Gunfire] Get away from me you fr- [Unknown Noise] GAAAAAARGH!!!
[Gunfire]
Pvt. Clark: Davis! Sir, they got- [Unknown Noise] GAAAAAARGH!!!
2nd Lt. Gerro: God-######! Get your men outta there Sergeant!
F. Sgt. Briggs: Easier said than done Lieutenant!
[Gunfire]
Pvt. Douglas: This is Douglas, I'm with Shephard, we're on or way outta this Hell-hole!
2nd Lt. Gerro: Roger, move your ##### gentlemen, we're evacuating!
Pvt. Douglas: Roger, Sir!
2nd Lt. Gerro: Listen up men, I n - [Unidentified Noise] ####! I - GAAAAAAGH!
*ERROR*: Feed from recording device has been cut. [WND/INCAP/DTH?] [Recording ended at 15:48:22]

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End of Mission Log

Comments

  • JedisarJedisar Join Date: 2002-03-03 Member: 264Awaiting Authorization
    interesting play on the fan fiction..but this should be in the fan fiction forum.
  • DarkAssassinDarkAssassin Join Date: 2002-03-17 Member: 326Members
    nice, very nice! <!--emo&:D--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':D'><!--endemo-->
  • RenegadeRenegade Old school Join Date: 2002-03-29 Member: 361Members
    I'm already working on the next installment, so keep your motion trackers on.
  • pielemuispielemuis Join Date: 2002-01-25 Member: 72Members, NS1 Playtester
    erm... it's just bits from aliens put together......
    believe me I saw the movie hundreds of times..
  • JedisarJedisar Join Date: 2002-03-03 Member: 264Awaiting Authorization
    Are you sure? Maybe it just sounds like it?
  • KilltoyKilltoy Join Date: 2002-03-28 Member: 358Members
    I stopped reading when I saw "3... 2... 1... Contact."

    ...but I'm old and I have my eccentric reasons.  <!--emo&:p--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':p'><!--endemo-->
    Looks good tho.
  • RobRob Unknown Enemy Join Date: 2002-01-24 Member: 25Members, NS1 Playtester
    I couldn't help but notice the reference to a Coporal Shepard... <!--emo&:)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'><!--endemo-->
  • RenegadeRenegade Old school Join Date: 2002-03-29 Member: 361Members
    Uhhh, most of these names are those of my friends from the <b>REAL WORLD</b>.
  • TzarconTzarcon Join Date: 2002-02-28 Member: 259Members
    Wow, that dialogue was amazing. MORE! MORE
  • RenegadeRenegade Old school Join Date: 2002-03-29 Member: 361Members
    Well, I'm working on some more, so you'll just have to wait.
  • Nemesis_ZeroNemesis_Zero Old European Join Date: 2002-01-25 Member: 75Members, Retired Developer, NS1 Playtester, Constellation
    Nice. You have to admit that you took much from Aliens, but still pretty good.

    Next time you should maybe try and use textformating to make reading easier, for example bold typos if the comander speaks.
  • MuuMuu Join Date: 2002-01-24 Member: 23Members
    That is good enought to be the aliens script - only problme is the motion tracker - its a little un original - and they make no mention of attempting to set up a command consol, which is a big thing in NS <!--emo&:)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'><!--endemo--> I think if you changed those two things it would really rock - and I'd beg you to do an intro for one of my maps <!--emo&:)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'><!--endemo-->
  • coilcoil Amateur pirate. Professional monkey. All pance. Join Date: 2002-04-12 Member: 424Members, NS1 Playtester, Contributor
    Actually, my only complaint is that it *could* be the script to Aliens.  You've got the wise-cracking private, the hispanic, the dropship pilot ("we're in for some chop"), not to mention "express elevator to hell, goin' down".

    I also would argue against "please advise" - Sure, they're a good team and following orders, but highly trained TSA forces ought to be a little more autonomous than that.

    Yeah, I like to b!tch.  Overall, good stuff. (:
  • HicksHicks Join Date: 2002-04-11 Member: 418Members
    inspired by aliens. but don't let fox see it or your @$$ is grass.
  • TraneTrane Join Date: 2002-02-01 Member: 148Members
    <!--QuoteBegin--Renegade+Mar. 30 2002,00:08--></span><table border="0" align="center" width="95%" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1"><tr><td><b>Quote</b> (Renegade @ Mar. 30 2002,00:08)</td></tr><tr><td id="QUOTE"><!--QuoteEBegin-->Lt. Stark: Hang on guys, we're going to drop in 3...2...1... Contact.
    Pvt. Romerez: Woo! Express elevator to hell, goin' down!
    Pvt. Meyers: I've gotta bad feeling about this mission...
    Pvt. Clark: You say that about every mission.
    Lt. Stark: Hold on to your breakfast guys; we're in for some chops.
    [Rumbling]
    Lt. Stark: We're approaching the landing zone, prepare to deploy.
    2nd Lt. Gerro: APC prepped and ready to roll.
    Lt. Stark: Roger... We've reached the landing zone, you guys are on your own from here.
    Pvt. Colbern: Deploy APC.
    2nd Lt. Gerro: APC deployed, heading for drop zone 1... Cpl. Shephard: So this is another search and rescue mission?
    2nd Lt. Gerro: Do you have a problem with that Corporal?
    Cpl. Shephard: No Sir!
    Pvt. Ericson: Sir, I'm picking up movement, 27 meters up.
    S. Sgt. Matthews: What? Let me see that... Lieutenant, this is Bravo Team, we've got movement, multiple subjects, they're heading our way, please advise.<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span id='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Well, I just edited it a little so we could all see the stuff directly out of aliens  <!--emo&:D--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':D'><!--endemo-->  <!--emo&:p--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':p'><!--endemo-->   I just watched the movie, lol, but give it another shot please, it was still enjoyable to read.
  • HicksHicks Join Date: 2002-04-11 Member: 418Members
    thats cold man...cold
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