Unknown Enemy: Chapter 16

RobRob Unknown Enemy Join Date: 2002-01-24 Member: 25Members, NS1 Playtester
in Fan-Fiction Forum
<div class="IPBDescription">Phew...</div> Well, here it is: the second half of the Bast part of my story. Let me know what you think!

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  • GwahirGwahir Join Date: 2002-04-24 Member: 513Members, Constellation
    edited December 2002
    You have made me a happy man
    I'll go read it now.

    edit: ominous ending. It was a good read, though I get the feeling other chapters were better... Still, I enjoyed it.
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  • SilverHorseSilverHorse Join Date: 2002-11-12 Member: 8291Members
    edited December 2002
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  • WindelkronWindelkron Join Date: 2002-04-11 Member: 419Members
    Evil marines!! Winning every time!!! <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

    nice story, full o' action = win
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  • ArbyArby Join Date: 2002-11-17 Member: 9039Members
    God I loved this chapter. But one point of criticism... ***SPOILER***









    Wouldn't the acid scar his face if it ate through armor like it did to another guy?
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  • RobRob Unknown Enemy Join Date: 2002-01-24 Member: 25Members, NS1 Playtester
    Thanks all.
    Arby: the lower half of a marine's face is exposed, there friend. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • Llama_KillerLlama_Killer Join Date: 2002-07-30 Member: 1029Members
    woot! For a second i tought this post my have been lost in the swarm of new posters! Glad i found it!
    Great story rob!
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  • RobRob Unknown Enemy Join Date: 2002-01-24 Member: 25Members, NS1 Playtester
    Thanks, LK!
    While I'm at it, I might as well suck all the exposure I can outa this thread...
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  • ThePhilipsThePhilips Join Date: 2002-09-09 Member: 1302Members
    I always like game releated stories. Can't wait to read this chapter cuase the rest = cool.
    When does chapter 17 come out? <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • RobRob Unknown Enemy Join Date: 2002-01-24 Member: 25Members, NS1 Playtester
    I've been taking a little break, just too much writing lately. But I got started on the next chapter and I know what I'm doing. Thanks for the comments!
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  • ScytheScythe Join Date: 2002-01-25 Member: 46NS1 Playtester, Forum Moderators, Constellation, Reinforced - Silver
    Mighty good rob, the best one of the more recent ones I think.

    --Scythe--
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  • AdvisorAdvisor Join Date: 2003-01-10 Member: 12104Members
    Nice story... It took me a bit of time to read all sixteen chapters, but still it was a very good story. Do you have lots of time on your hands? And how often do you post a new chapter?


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  • RobRob Unknown Enemy Join Date: 2002-01-24 Member: 25Members, NS1 Playtester
    Thanks fellas.

    Advisor:
    I don't think I've got much more time on my hands than anyone else, writing's just a hobby of mine. As for how often I get out chapters...well, it all depends on how long it takes me to write them <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • AdvisorAdvisor Join Date: 2003-01-10 Member: 12104Members
    <!--QuoteBegin--Nomble+Jan 9 2003, 11:55 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Nomble @ Jan 9 2003, 11:55 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->I always like game releated stories. Can't wait to read this chapter cuase the rest = cool.
    When does chapter 17 come out? <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--><!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    For those, that haven't been to his web site lately, chapter 17 is up so read. <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> It has been up before January 22, 2003... that when I saw it.
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