ns2_Crash

bcarrotbcarrot Join Date: 2012-02-15 Member: 145962Members
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<div class="IPBDescription">My first map Crash</div>Threw it together the first weekend the editor came out just been updating things what do you guys think? I know it's dark first off I think since its appropriate for the game and in the pics its darker than it is in game. The theme of the map if you can't tell is a marine ship crashed into an alien hive. I also have some question about how some things work to make the map work fully so if someone could answer a few questions that would be awesome.

Crash Top Lit

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Crash Top Unlit

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Engineering Top Lit

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Engineering Top Unlit

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Engineering Lit

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Engineering Unlit

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  • bcarrotbcarrot Join Date: 2012-02-15 Member: 145962Members
    Bridge Top Lit

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    Bridge Top Unlit

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    Bridge Lit

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  • bcarrotbcarrot Join Date: 2012-02-15 Member: 145962Members
    Cargo Top Lit

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    Cargo Top Unlit

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    Cargo Lit

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  • bcarrotbcarrot Join Date: 2012-02-15 Member: 145962Members
    Mess Top Lit

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    Mess Top Unlit

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    Mess Lit

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  • bcarrotbcarrot Join Date: 2012-02-15 Member: 145962Members
    Ready Room Top Lit

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    Ready Room Lit

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  • bcarrotbcarrot Join Date: 2012-02-15 Member: 145962Members
    Loading Bay Top Lit

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    Loading Bay Top Unlit

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    Loading Bay Lit

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  • bcarrotbcarrot Join Date: 2012-02-15 Member: 145962Members
    Cave Top Lit

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    Cave Lit

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  • bcarrotbcarrot Join Date: 2012-02-15 Member: 145962Members
    Med/Capt Top Lit

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    Med/Capt Top Unlit

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    Med/Capt Lit

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  • LV426-ColonistLV426-Colonist Space Jockey Join Date: 2011-08-05 Member: 114269Members, Constellation
    edited March 2012
    Definitely some unique designs but it looks more like a work in progress.
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  • bcarrotbcarrot Join Date: 2012-02-15 Member: 145962Members
    Thank you for the feedback. I actually just added many props because it seemed barren without something going on. I felt more of them were put in functional locations to block sight in some cases but I will have to take another look. Thanks again!
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  • LPCLPC Join Date: 2002-04-07 Member: 384Members, Reinforced - Diamond
    Your lightning seems ok, but the brushwork is too boxy. for starters you could maybe try to make some base construction (columns) for your hovering walkways, that would make it look a lot more realistic.

    and I think that the cave area looks hidious, can't you use the rock props that are also used in the official maps?
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  • bcarrotbcarrot Join Date: 2012-02-15 Member: 145962Members
    Thank you I'll definitely add supports for the walk ways thank you. I used some of the pre-made rocks but I supposed I could always use more thank you.
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  • bcarrotbcarrot Join Date: 2012-02-15 Member: 145962Members
    Hey thanks a lot man columns make a huge difference and I went into caves with a completely wrong mind set. Thanks again for the suggestions.
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  • swalkswalk Say hello to my little friend. Join Date: 2011-01-20 Member: 78384Members, Squad Five Blue
    Hey, interesting room layouts.
    When you're ready to make a release, I hereby encourage you to use our map/mod database.
    All you need to do is sign up on our homepage, and wait for me to change your membergroup.
    After that, you will be able to go to "Admin" in the topleft, then "Downloads", then the "Maps" button to add a map.
    Link in my signature. All mappers and modders are welcome to use it. Just notify me if you want access.
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