Unknown Enemy: Chapter 17
Rob
Unknown Enemy Join Date: 2002-01-24 Member: 25Members, NS1 Playtester
Unknown Enemy Join Date: 2002-01-24 Member: 25Members, NS1 Playtester
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thank you much!
N O M U S T N O T D I S O B E Y F L A ....
Will do, advisor.
1) when the Zerik becomes a platoon leader (in charge of a few squads), a sarge but in reality, a part of a rebel group, or Victor, under his order now, could start a mutiny during an attack. A good way to end Victor with court-martial or something.
2) you still haven't talked about the aliens attacking a city, an outpost, or a main base that has people/civilians inside.
3) another human force, which has the normal LMG, pistol, and knife, but has a sniper rifle, plasma flamer, and an upgraded Hellfire (I liked your idea of the Hellfire; maybe you can suggest these weapons to the NS head; people want NS to have human vs. human thing)
4) introduce some medics; the commander can't be everywhere
Mostly they run too far from where I want to take it that I can't incorperate them, nor comment without handing out spoilers. But don't let that stop you. Keep throwing ideas around or start work on your own story: there's plenty of room!
However, the main reason I've not written about anything getting attacked is that the TSA, as told by the backstory, is essentially clearing out already held alien positions. Original ideas for NS gameplay involved a freeze time to let aliens get into position before the marines started, or letting the marines view a introduction scene during this time.
I actually started stories for Tribes 2 and Diablo 2, but either gave up or didn't get a good flow going. If you're looking for RTS stories, there's a pretty good one on PlanetTA.com.