Unknown Enemy: Chapter 18

RobRob Unknown Enemy Join Date: 2002-01-24 Member: 25Members, NS1 Playtester
in Fan-Fiction Forum
<div class="IPBDescription">Almost there...</div> The end is really in sight... I'm serious...
Well anyway, here's the first Nothing chapter, thanks to Ken for letting me use his map. Great place for what happens.
Let me know what you think.

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  • AdvisorAdvisor Join Date: 2003-01-10 Member: 12104Members
    edited January 2003
    All right!!!!!!!!!!!
    Finally, another chapter of the Unknown Enemy.

    By the way, I sometimes have trouble downloading your stories. Can you check it out and see if it is just me (I use Internet Explorer). <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->

    Rob, you are a forum moderator... Whoa!!! I just notice!!! Holy Cow!!!
    (too much Clearly Canadian Drinks)

    <span style='color:white'>Please stop doing multiple posts in a row.</span>
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  • Llama_KillerLlama_Killer Join Date: 2002-07-30 Member: 1029Members
    good one!
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  • GwahirGwahir Join Date: 2002-04-24 Member: 513Members, Constellation
    edited February 2003
    ***SPOILER***


    well done indeed. I somehow get the feeling that stone is still alive though.
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  • xectxect Join Date: 2002-11-24 Member: 9807Members
    edited February 2003
    EDIT: Thanks for fixing that spoiler
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  • RobRob Unknown Enemy Join Date: 2002-01-24 Member: 25Members, NS1 Playtester
    Thanks all. Any crits?
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  • GwahirGwahir Join Date: 2002-04-24 Member: 513Members, Constellation
    in crits... I really feel the bend towards mystic happenings isn't helping too much. I did prefer the earlier chapters in this regard.
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  • RobRob Unknown Enemy Join Date: 2002-01-24 Member: 25Members, NS1 Playtester
    Yeah, most people seem to <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • SpecterSpecter Join Date: 2003-02-05 Member: 13159Members
    edited February 2003
    great work! want more! dont end it!

    but i didnt get the gypsy part... think im too tired, but could anyone explain me, why the cutted the wires and killed the gypsy?!

    btw: just subscripted to post in this thread <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • HoBoPoLiCeHoBoPoLiCe Join Date: 2003-01-18 Member: 12425Members
    OMG GOD PLEASE NOOOOOO! I WAS LIKE HALFWAY THRU AND I HAD TO RESTART MY COMP AND NOW THE SITE ISNT WORKING GAHHHHH! /me shoots himself in suspense <!--emo&:angry:--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/mad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='mad.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • xectxect Join Date: 2002-11-24 Member: 9807Members
    <!--QuoteBegin--Specter+Feb 5 2003, 10:10 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Specter @ Feb 5 2003, 10:10 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> but i didnt get the gypsy part... think im too tired, but could anyone explain me, why the cutted the wires and killed the gypsy?! <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Thats the horror of continued stories, all the things no one tells(though i have my suspicions, but 'nuff 'bout that). We'll just have to arrive at rob's hopuse with mólotov cocktails and force him to finish today.

    anyways, good work.
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  • RyanRyan Join Date: 2003-01-07 Member: 11969Members
    *Bows donw to the pur greatness of it*. That is the best story i have ever read (i kid you not) I laughed. I cried. My heart began pumping as i gripped my mouse in antcipation. WOW! You seriously need like publish it or something. And are you a writer, cuse if you arent you sure as heck would be a popular one.
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  • RobRob Unknown Enemy Join Date: 2002-01-24 Member: 25Members, NS1 Playtester
    Naw, I'm not a writer, this is the first story I've actually stuck with. Thanks though. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • SpecterSpecter Join Date: 2003-02-05 Member: 13159Members
    what about the next episode?
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