School Brochure

VecdranVecdran Join Date: 2002-11-01 Member: 2323Members
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<div class="IPBDescription">Ebola</div> What do you think? It's for a school Biology project. Had to make a brochure, and this is what I plan on having for the front.
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  • AllUrHiveRblong2usAllUrHiveRblong2us By Your Powers Combined... Join Date: 2002-12-20 Member: 11244Members
    /me runs away and puts tissue boxes on feet in phear of teh dreaded ebola

    that makes the microscopic world look so badass.
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  • ThansalThansal The New Scum Join Date: 2002-08-22 Member: 1215Members, Constellation
    the 'glow'/drop shadows are sorta obnoxious, it might just be b/c of viewing it on a comp scrn though
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  • VecdranVecdran Join Date: 2002-11-01 Member: 2323Members
    <!--QuoteBegin--Thansal+Apr 20 2003, 11:44 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Thansal @ Apr 20 2003, 11:44 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> the 'glow'/drop shadows are sorta obnoxious, it might just be b/c of viewing it on a comp scrn though <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    What would you suggest then?

    Thx all ure hive.
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  • mikachumikachu Join Date: 2002-11-01 Member: 2782Members
    my sugg... remove motion blurred layer from "the sheppards crook".. it loks great nonetheless.

    just my personal thing to have title diff from title description/ second part of title.

    that is more than sufficient for high school. if we're talking college here, maybe make the fade near the ebola virus grow differently, as a more slight change.

    i personally like it. good jorb
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  • VecdranVecdran Join Date: 2002-11-01 Member: 2323Members
    <!--QuoteBegin--mikachu+Apr 21 2003, 12:27 AM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (mikachu @ Apr 21 2003, 12:27 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> my sugg... remove motion blurred layer from "the sheppards crook".. it loks great nonetheless.

    just my personal thing to have title diff from title description/ second part of title.

    that is more than sufficient for high school. if we're talking college here, maybe make the fade near the ebola virus grow differently, as a more slight change.

    i personally like it. good jorb <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Thanks, I'll do the Shepheard's Crook thing. BTW, for High School.
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  • ThansalThansal The New Scum Join Date: 2002-08-22 Member: 1215Members, Constellation
    personaly I just feel like I am going blind when ever I read the title (personal issue) I would say play with having only one of the dropshadows(Is that the proper term? I have read like 1 PS tut and that name is sticking <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->)

    (that was aimed at the "EBOLA: The Shepherds Crook")

    as for text below it (the "data") I would personaly say lower te glow (just a tad) so it is more legible.

    again, this may all just be b/c I am viewing this at 1280*1024 and not on paper.

    again, my personal prefs (oh, and I like the genral idea, the layout is very well done etc, just prefs with extras <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->)
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  • EplekongenEplekongen Join Date: 2002-11-16 Member: 8915Members
    I like it.

    But the "EBOLA: The Shepherds Crook" tite should not have a drop like that, make it more of a blur and a tad less visible, as in, transparency check.
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