New Web Site And A Wallpaper

F4F_EnderF4F_Ender Join Date: 2003-05-01 Member: 15976Members
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<div class="IPBDescription">need your opinion and critics</div> Hi all,

Can you visit my web site and give me your opinion? Please be critics and dont hesitate to tell me the truth, I need honest opinion. All of this has been done with NS official Web designer pack, so thanks to them, and I hope that you will recognise the graph they gave and how i used them.
If you use the Wallpaper later, please dont Remove the title because it tooks me a long time to do it and i would be upset to see it on other clan web site without my autorisation, but use it as much as you want for you (if you like it of course)

Here is the URL: <a href='http://www.fight4freedom.clan.st' target='_blank'>http://www.fight4freedom.clan.st</a>

PS: cant upload the file because it is 500KB so if you want it email me. (i just upload a light version of it)



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  • mikachumikachu Join Date: 2002-11-01 Member: 2782Members
    question: what page links to the armory?

    spelling: hierarchy

    suggestion: set the body font to something sans serif, similar to the menu font.

    suggestion: don't have the forum window automatically pop up but instead have a link. or at least have a link present for those who use browsers that suppress pop ups that the user did not click.

    comment: i like the logo. a lot. the blue color is very attractive to me and the red of the kharaa present a very nice contrast.

    suggestion: on the uppermost image, the one that changes every page, i believe a more interesting glow in the background <two of them, one on each side> would work better. possibly shotting lightening or something. either that or no glow at all.

    criticism: the blue-green band on the left extends too far to the left by one pixel judging by your logo. you wanted criticism right?

    criticism: it looks like you put a good bit of work into the mini icons below the text options.. my commentary is that they 1) are a bit small 2) a bit useless and 3) seem to waste space (i'm not sure that the space could be used anyhow because of the logo on the left but meh) and 4) don't seem to be the right color. i also don't really like the links that hold em together, as well as extends to the top, i think it's a bit superfluous. maybe if you changed it into a wire or something? there's a bunch of good wire tutorials out on the internet for photoshop, btw.

    criticism: the circle that holds the text for different frames (home, etc) should look more 3d, just like the logo's border. just a little bit more, cause they seem quite different.

    i think that's about it. i really liked the page, the buttons just confused me a bit. overall, it's very good. that's just my two cents, of course.

    question:
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  • DocterJDocterJ Join Date: 2003-04-09 Member: 15357Members
    Nice, but the side and top bars could use a bit more detailor something... and change your news text to something that matches.... beautiful logo though... very cool...
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  • F4F_EnderF4F_Ender Join Date: 2003-05-01 Member: 15976Members
    Thank you very much for your criticism and advice that s exactly what i wanted <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->

    Now I will try to make some update, and see what will work better. I already tried some of the advice you gave me but sometime it did not turn out as nice as I thought it would be in my mind.

    As for the Logo it would look much nicer if you could see it full size (1000*1000 about) but i cant add it in this forum, sorry. If you want it, just ask it.

    I'll let you know when I will have the update.

    I also plan to make a Flash introduction, but since I dont want to spend hours on it, and since my personal graphic style is usually quite "cold" (not too many bright color, or too many pictures....) then I think that all it will be is some text without graph and then some sound. BUT, I guess that if you know how to manage it, then you can do something good like that (movie style).

    I did a CS and a DoD web site too in the past but I never used them so never filled them with the menu and text, but if you are interested by what they look like go to see them, because I guess they are quite original.
    CS: www.at-direct-from-france.com/cs/ ( (one of my nicest site i did worked on a real picture with background)
    DoD: www.at-direct-from-france.com/cs/dod/propaganda.html (the site is different if you choose axis or ally, but ally nicer in my opinion)

    Please go visit them because they are different.

    Thanks again,
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  • DocterJDocterJ Join Date: 2003-04-09 Member: 15357Members
    edited May 2003
    I love your intro... its almost perfect... not flashey, and still very cool... could be a bit shorter though... also, teh music once you get to the actuall site is now very annoying.
    it keeps on repeating: nannananna(softly)nananDANANADANNDANNANDANAN(very loud). over and over and over again... please make it stop.
    very nice, but add some more detail and stuff as we have suggested.

    +add a skip intro button
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