First off, sorry if i come across harsh, this isn't intended as a flame, it's just i am a designer myself, and have opinions <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
In my opinion, i think it's too "filter-heavy", if you see what i mean There's nothing that draws your eye anywhere, except the text itself, but if it's just the text, you may as well have left it an entirely flat colour and included the text (minimalism r0x0rz my b0x0r). What i think you need to do is concentrate more on the actual design, where the picture leads your eyes and makes you focus, and less of the overusing filters.
In short: Anyone can use a handful of filters, but a true artist can accomplish more without using any.
Also, if you manage to do something without having to use filters, you'll feel all the more better and more proud for it.
Sorry to be stupid but what s the purpose of this background? is it a wallpaper or for a web site? If it is for a web site, also consider the fact that it is not necessarly easy to read on those kind of graph
But since i dont seem to understand what this graph is for then i wont comment anymore now :-)
<!--QuoteBegin--Sunrise-+May 11 2003, 12:17 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Sunrise- @ May 11 2003, 12:17 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> (dunno how to say "cube" in english so ...=) <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd--> you just said it ^^
blur the C in the middle, it looks like a job from windows paint. im not liking the color theme either. maybe black and red grid would be easier on the eyes or possibly invert the colors and then see what it looks like.
<!--QuoteBegin--Simple Compound+May 13 2003, 07:30 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Simple Compound @ May 13 2003, 07:30 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> blur the C in the middle, it looks like a job from windows paint. im not liking the color theme either. maybe black and red grid would be easier on the eyes or possibly invert the colors and then see what it looks like. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd--> Black and red burns alot...
better, try a hue and saturation on the blue cubes and make them really dark but still blue. And try making the gray blue again after that, and match it to the cubes.
"Flash" as in good or "Flash" as in Flash MX? <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif'><!--endemo-->
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it's too big?
In my opinion, i think it's too "filter-heavy", if you see what i mean There's nothing that draws your eye anywhere, except the text itself, but if it's just the text, you may as well have left it an entirely flat colour and included the text (minimalism r0x0rz my b0x0r). What i think you need to do is concentrate more on the actual design, where the picture leads your eyes and makes you focus, and less of the overusing filters.
In short: Anyone can use a handful of filters, but a true artist can accomplish more without using any.
Also, if you manage to do something without having to use filters, you'll feel all the more better and more proud for it.
If it is for a web site, also consider the fact that it is not necessarly easy to read on those kind of graph
But since i dont seem to understand what this graph is for then i wont comment anymore now :-)
Not sure about the cube though...
<img src='http://users.frailart.net/sbv/Cube.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
What else on the logo?
Any other things?
you just said it ^^
Black and red burns alot...
How about now?
I fixed the E at the top, looked like a u on its side.
<img src='http://www.frailart.net/members/sbv/Cube2.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>