Unknown Enemy: Chapter 20

RobRob Unknown Enemy Join Date: 2002-01-24 Member: 25Members, NS1 Playtester
in Fan-Fiction Forum
<div class="IPBDescription">Falling Stars</div> I know I've said this before, but I really am close. This is the second to last chapter. That's right, story finale next chapter; let's hope it turns out better than farscape's finale. <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif'><!--endemo--> Hmph.

As always, let me know what you think:

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  • GwahirGwahir Join Date: 2002-04-24 Member: 513Members, Constellation
    well, you've certainly secured a hook until the ending, jeez.
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  • SpecterSpecter Join Date: 2003-02-05 Member: 13159Members
    cant believe next one is the last! please dont... or are u gonna write a new story?
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  • RobRob Unknown Enemy Join Date: 2002-01-24 Member: 25Members, NS1 Playtester
    I doubt I'll be writing more NS fiction. <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo--> Although there are some extras for UE that I want to do before I call it "done."

    Thanks all
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  • pardzhpardzh Join Date: 2002-10-25 Member: 1601Members
    Don't kill Zerik, rob! crei...

    I just finished catching up, and I love it. <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    W00t w00t! FANTASTIC story there!
    more please <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • Llama_KillerLlama_Killer Join Date: 2002-07-30 Member: 1029Members
    *snif*

    that was damn good!
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  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    I just read the whole thing, and you seemed to change your writing style around the bast chater, you stopped calling them leve 3, level 5, etc, and used JP and HMG's, any reason for th@?
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  • RobRob Unknown Enemy Join Date: 2002-01-24 Member: 25Members, NS1 Playtester
    edited March 2003
    Basically, when UE was started, the aliens did not have names, and the equipment wasn't finalized. I started UE WAY back in december of 2001. This is also the reason for the almost outrageous number of aliens in the earlier chapters.

    Just one more thing on the list to fix before I call it done, <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->

    Thanks, guys.
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  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    it all makes sense now....
    and you have a mighty fine peice of work there, good job.
    and no problem, thats what the loving caring NS community is for <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • KhazModanKhazModan Join Date: 2003-04-14 Member: 15500Members, Constellation
    i was hooked, even took time outta studying and... inbelievably, playing NS to read it. took me 3 days of sporadic reading though... i love it <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->, i like the missions on maps like nothing, bast, hera etc allowed me to know exaclty what the setting looked like almost
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  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    Khaz brings up a good point, I really like it when people use maps in the game becuase then I can understand in hy head exactly what is going on
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  • Llama_KillerLlama_Killer Join Date: 2002-07-30 Member: 1029Members
    YOU ... killed... Z E R I K and masson and everyine you are no longer my hero!

    jk

    nice story...
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  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    pssssssssst


    *****************spoiler***************


    they don't die until next chapter....


    I think
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  • X_StickmanX_Stickman Not good enough for a custom title. Join Date: 2003-04-15 Member: 15533Members, Constellation
    hey, i know this is almost dead now (the topic) but...... HOW CAN YOU KILL THEM YOU NONE-CARING PERSON YOU!!!!!!!!
    or ARE they dead? maybe they formed their own colony inside the ship that was completely missing without any sign. or maybe they just died.
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  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    I think there dead <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • AdvisorAdvisor Join Date: 2003-01-10 Member: 12104Members
    I don't think they can reproduce with a female and cloning is a bit hard when all the ship's systems are down. It would be a funny race, though... an entire race of males. (Sarah wasn't on-board, right?)
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  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    errr


    right....


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    **********************spoiler**************************



    (there ALL DEAD)
    (we well don't really know but the odds favor it)
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  • 84n44n84n44n Join Date: 2003-05-11 Member: 16207Members
    u rock! hail u man. wonderful story. Sad u had to kill em <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> i really liked how i could follow them on Hera... wonderful. Printed the whole thing to read before sleeping <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    Rob, since you won't make a sequel, can you go lucas style and make a prequil?
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  • RobRob Unknown Enemy Join Date: 2002-01-24 Member: 25Members, NS1 Playtester
    O_o

    I don't think so...
    There's a bunch of backstory already!
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  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    okay then, I just had to toss it out there


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    it's still a damn fine story

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