An Angel Sketch
Wilkins
Join Date: 2003-03-15 Member: 14556Members
<div class="IPBDescription">Not the TV one :P</div> Today in class, and I have no specific reason why, but I was doodling away, and somehow came a finished product looking like, this, which is, in fact, a sad angel, or she at least appears sad. <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->
Anyway, I like it a lot more for some reason, partially because I just drew it for myself, for fun, instead of for some sort of specific reason (i.e. concept sketches of marines <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->).
Anyway, critique away, because I always like to know what to improve on.
Also, I'm halfway done kharaaising the Alien concept I did. All that has to occur is coloring <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->
Anyway, I like it a lot more for some reason, partially because I just drew it for myself, for fun, instead of for some sort of specific reason (i.e. concept sketches of marines <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->).
Anyway, critique away, because I always like to know what to improve on.
Also, I'm halfway done kharaaising the Alien concept I did. All that has to occur is coloring <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->
Comments
Well..its 2 but eh its close enough
Amazing artwork <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> Keep up to good work man
Wow....
make her smile
once i get back into my linux environment, i'll start doodling ontop of it.... mostly so i can learn how to use 'The Gimp'
keep up the awsome artwork!
Anywho, I might make the noise a bit smaller, but, that's a big maybe <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->
Thanks for the comments. The more the merrier <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
Really , in all honestly, dont think it needs anything. And angels dont always have to be happy lol
Personally I think its a great drawing <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> GJ
make <span style='color:RED'>her</span> smile <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
Wait, what?
Wilkins, I think it looks very nice, but it's a plain drawing.
Hopefully I can get this girl colored by the end of the night, but homework and people (i.e. friends :\) would rather I be distracted enough to not get it done <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
Nice strong lines and stuff, though you might want to lighten up the muscle contours you've put in the neck area =3
But its still nice. <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
ignore the names, i just posted the pic just because its a nice reference for a generic bird wing
Thanks for the refrence, Blood <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
It looks likes shes starving to death, just look at them bones
again ,the wings are the best evarr!
TIP: Fix the mouth a little...straighten it out a tad...
I lurk the PA art forums.
I don't like all the light. I think it detracts from the work itself. I think you ought to tone it down. And something about the eye bugs me, but I can't put my finger on it. It might be nothing though.
[edit: I forgot to say that I really like it. heh.]
W()W
The wings look great
that pic is the win
All in all this angel reminds me of something from the x-men comic books I read. Perhaps give him a uniform and put like balls of psi around his hands.
Wilkin, your angel is awesome also. I like the style your are trying to present in this drawing. The wings and legs seem on target; the legs would look more real if they were not so darkly outlined. She seems to be starving to death, give her some flesh and fat hehe. The face could do some revamping. You know what would be cool? Curly hair, realistic eyes, and whatnot. But anyway, you guys can probably draw better than I could, but you wanted constructive criticism and now I am giving it.
lol just kidding..this i made long time ago <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
First one looked <b>a lot</b> like spawn, I'd take a guess it's where you got your inspiration? His left arm is a little less muscley than his left.
Wilkins. She looks a bit like she's hung over <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--> It has the effect that you wanted (a not so ordinary angel) but it doesn't look like she is "upset." Looks nice though <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
I really need to improve my muscle drawing <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo-->
about the left arm....i tried to make it far away looking.....i guess i didnt do a good job eh <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif'><!--endemo-->
sorry for posting my pics in someone else's thread....but i thought it was a good place to put my angels.....i got many of them....mostly Spawn inspired