Elf Sketch Needs Crits
Wilkins
Join Date: 2003-03-15 Member: 14556Members
Join Date: 2003-03-15 Member: 14556Members
<div class="IPBDescription">Doodle from Class today</div> I doodled this up during class today. just a .5mm mechanical pencil, but I like where it's going, so I could use some crits to improve it. Thanks in advance <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
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Transvestite elves? D:
Good sketch though, although the sword looks too small, in my opinion.
Other than that, very nice <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--> I like the hair a lot.
was gonna say the same thing. killer drawing man, the armor is sick
Altho the beastly forearm hair on a female is, um.. <!--emo&:0--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wow.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wow.gif'><!--endemo-->
Yeah, I do have some problems with anatomy still, but hey thats ok, always things that need improving. Course it doesn't help that I've never taken an art course <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo-->
The 'hair' on her forearm is actually my signature. The problem is that I had to size down the picture big time to fit it on here, so some of the things that were very small on there just look like scratches.
As for me not posting anything in awhile, I've just been busy, and FFXI takes a lot out of you <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->
1- the right part of the breast sheild seems more jagged than the left, maybe smooth it out to match the left or change to left to more jagged to fit the right.
2- the right arm shoulder could be rounded a bit more at the top, it seems sorta too thin in a way <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->
3- maybe *maybe* thin the lips slightly, if its female then the neck could be slightly thinner.
those are my crits but rememebr this..
no matter how perfect you try and make ya pic, there will always be someone to critisize it and point something they dont like in it... everyone has different tastes and expectations you cant please everyone. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
- First off, the face looks too masculine, but it can be fixed a bit <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
- Her shoulders are too broad, which made me think that it was a man. After all, even if women get broad shoulders, they can't get as broad as males do.
- And the handle guard on the sword needs to be a bit bigger
- And her right arm looks a bit detached, but I guess it's what you get for wearing armor like that :/
But it is still a good pic anyway, especially with a mech .5 mm pencil.
Me? I'm still figuring how to do female anatomy without fuglifying it :/