Another try...
Mendasp
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EDIT: Currently the whole scene appears too greyish... it needs color in there. A colorful and more detailed texture on the walls (as opposed to that grey metallic one) might help.
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I like it!
Except...
those railings on the ramp should be perpendicular to the floor, not the ramp.
Other than that, sweet
other than that its looking good