Poem About The Sensory Chamber

BirdyBirdy Join Date: 2003-05-29 Member: 16825Members, Constellation
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<b>Lonely Sensory Chamber</b>

I'm with my friends
But not really
They are all here
But I'm not

Their laughter
Mindless chatter
Rolls over my head
Dissolves into the air

Their smiles mean nothing
Their presence means nothing
I'm still alone

I shiver
But no one offers me a jacket
No one notices the draft
They don't feel what I feel

They can't reach me
Their happiness can't penetrate my bubble of isolation

Why can't I reach out?
Why can't I touch someone?
Why am I alone?

Each smile, word, that I'm not a part of...
A paper cut on my heart appears
Gushing blood from the inside
A wound that gorges can't heal
A pain that will never leave

Crying is not an option
Crying can't erase loneliness
It only feeds the fact that no one will notice
What good is an aching heart worn from tears

People running about
Walking around me
Through me
Why can't they feel me?

I wish that someone would notice
My hurt....
My pain....
My existence....

No matter how many people there are
I'm always alone
No one to comfort me
The forgotten chamber

Comments

  • tankefugltankefugl One Script To Rule Them All... Trondheim, Norway Join Date: 2002-11-14 Member: 8641Members, Retired Developer, NS1 Playtester, Constellation, NS2 Playtester, Squad Five Blue
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    That's it. From to day on, I'm only dropping sensory chambers.
  • WheezerWheezer Join Date: 2002-11-02 Member: 3926Members, Constellation
    edited December 2003
    That's just so sad...
    The poor things

    <span style='color:blue'>*Swooosh*</span> <!--emo&::lerk::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/lerk.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='lerk.gif'><!--endemo-->
    <!--emo&::skulk::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/skulk.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='skulk.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&::fade::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/fade.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='fade.gif'><!--endemo--> <img src='http://130.236.229.149/chamber_s.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'> <!--emo&::gorge::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/pudgy.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='pudgy.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&::onos::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tiny.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tiny.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • esunaesuna Rock Bottom Join Date: 2003-04-03 Member: 15175Members, Constellation
    I want to hug one now. <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • SitherSither Join Date: 2002-12-04 Member: 10462Members
  • PithlitPithlit Join Date: 2003-05-07 Member: 16120Members, NS1 Playtester, Constellation
    Happy Christmas Sensory, you´ll get a nice present from me!
  • noobynooby Join Date: 2003-04-21 Member: 15717Members
    The poem is poignant
    The meaning piquant
    The sensory sage
    The solo servant
    The overlooked chamber
    The feelings distant
    Next time you play
    Think of
    The Birdy lament.
  • LastLast Join Date: 2003-10-06 Member: 21463Members
    poor sensory <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo-->.

    P.S. that was amazing nooby =-o.
  • MajinMajin Join Date: 2003-05-29 Member: 16829Members, Constellation
    edited December 2003
    Your Poem was sad and warmed up my heart
    Sensories should always be placed at the start

    They have a bad rap and dont get much love
    they're shot at, knifed and sieged from above

    All they want is a friend, some res to up soak
    they thank you so much by giving you cloak

    next time someone asks what chamber is first
    remember the kindness that Sensories let burst

    evolve to a gorge and shout "your not alone"
    Cause everyone knows that SCs = teh pwn!
  • MeanMrMustardMeanMrMustard Join Date: 2003-11-23 Member: 23456Members
    very well wrote..
    but then I realised it was about a sensory chamber...

    Still...only a bit of fun. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
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