Poem About The Sensory Chamber
Birdy
Join Date: 2003-05-29 Member: 16825Members, Constellation
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<b>Lonely Sensory Chamber</b>
I'm with my friends
But not really
They are all here
But I'm not
Their laughter
Mindless chatter
Rolls over my head
Dissolves into the air
Their smiles mean nothing
Their presence means nothing
I'm still alone
I shiver
But no one offers me a jacket
No one notices the draft
They don't feel what I feel
They can't reach me
Their happiness can't penetrate my bubble of isolation
Why can't I reach out?
Why can't I touch someone?
Why am I alone?
Each smile, word, that I'm not a part of...
A paper cut on my heart appears
Gushing blood from the inside
A wound that gorges can't heal
A pain that will never leave
Crying is not an option
Crying can't erase loneliness
It only feeds the fact that no one will notice
What good is an aching heart worn from tears
People running about
Walking around me
Through me
Why can't they feel me?
I wish that someone would notice
My hurt....
My pain....
My existence....
No matter how many people there are
I'm always alone
No one to comfort me
The forgotten chamber
<b>Lonely Sensory Chamber</b>
I'm with my friends
But not really
They are all here
But I'm not
Their laughter
Mindless chatter
Rolls over my head
Dissolves into the air
Their smiles mean nothing
Their presence means nothing
I'm still alone
I shiver
But no one offers me a jacket
No one notices the draft
They don't feel what I feel
They can't reach me
Their happiness can't penetrate my bubble of isolation
Why can't I reach out?
Why can't I touch someone?
Why am I alone?
Each smile, word, that I'm not a part of...
A paper cut on my heart appears
Gushing blood from the inside
A wound that gorges can't heal
A pain that will never leave
Crying is not an option
Crying can't erase loneliness
It only feeds the fact that no one will notice
What good is an aching heart worn from tears
People running about
Walking around me
Through me
Why can't they feel me?
I wish that someone would notice
My hurt....
My pain....
My existence....
No matter how many people there are
I'm always alone
No one to comfort me
The forgotten chamber
Comments
That's it. From to day on, I'm only dropping sensory chambers.
The poor things
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The meaning piquant
The sensory sage
The solo servant
The overlooked chamber
The feelings distant
Next time you play
Think of
The Birdy lament.
P.S. that was amazing nooby =-o.
Sensories should always be placed at the start
They have a bad rap and dont get much love
they're shot at, knifed and sieged from above
All they want is a friend, some res to up soak
they thank you so much by giving you cloak
next time someone asks what chamber is first
remember the kindness that Sensories let burst
evolve to a gorge and shout "your not alone"
Cause everyone knows that SCs = teh pwn!
but then I realised it was about a sensory chamber...
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