Operation: Revival

DemiguiseDemiguise Marks Servers Reg Join Date: 2004-01-19 Member: 25462Members
edited January 2004 in Fan-Fiction Forum
<div class="IPBDescription">This is on a planet. Yay!</div> <span style='font-size:14pt;line-height:100%'>The Beginning of the End</span>


Soldier James Lewis of the 3rd Infantry was scared when the shuttle entered the atmosphere of Triton.
This was the place where his Best Friend had died trying to save three of his buddies.
The Shuttle Shuddered and the doors opened to what seemed to be a jungle.
"Third Infantry reporting!" said the commander of the group.
James didnt like him and niether did anyone, but they had signed up to do one job and that was to eradicate the aliens who had landed on this planet. It was a routine at first; go here, get ammo, watch this place. James though he could get used to this and he felt comfortable with the 90 turrets surronding the outpost. Every-now and again James would inspect his weapon, it was a standerd LMG with 250 rounds of ammo. Just in case.

A month passed and james now felt bored sitting doing nothing, several more infantrys had joined this operation and he didnt know what to make of it. Then an alarm sounded.
"all personnel please report to the forward base!" said the speaker.
"finally" He thought, "some action".
James raced towards the forward base, he was the first one there but saw what appered to be a small dog. He smiled at it and in its own twisted way it smiled back. IT jumped at him and james screamed but before it could even touch him, it exploded.
"Watch yourself Rookie, Your gunna get yourself killed" Said the commander in his bulky armor.
James loved him at that point, but he got back up, picked up his gun and then watched the base.
2, 3, 4 hours passed and he was still there. Watching, Waiting for a little creep to come.
He knew something was there, he just didnt know what. He felt as though he was bieng watched.
A small sound echoed down the hallways. He turned and fired his gun, He had killed a small Skulk that had the ability to cloak.
James ran down to the Microphone and Shouted "Look out, The blighters can Cloak!"
Although he repeated it again and again, he heard nothing, no guns firing, no body shouting.
At that point James reliased what had happened...
He was all alone...



Ok Part Two coming later but you can decide what happens to him.
Does he Die?
Does he win and become a Commander himself.

Comments

  • DemiguiseDemiguise Marks Servers Reg Join Date: 2004-01-19 Member: 25462Members
  • NuubNuub Join Date: 2004-01-05 Member: 25059Members
    The story started cool. Lets see some more <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • DemiguiseDemiguise Marks Servers Reg Join Date: 2004-01-19 Member: 25462Members
    why thank you.
    i really need to know what U would like to happen next.
    Does he die a really horrible death?
    Or does he conquer the Aliens and get a nice shiny medal?
  • DrVirusDrVirus Join Date: 2004-01-13 Member: 25282Members
    If he would die the story would possibly end (unless he is not the main character). I guess he does something and gets a large medal for it. By mistake blowing up a whole alien base, or something...

    BTW Good story.
  • DemiguiseDemiguise Marks Servers Reg Join Date: 2004-01-19 Member: 25462Members
    i reckon he sets off the Antimatter chamber in the Outpost and blow the entire planet up <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • DemiguiseDemiguise Marks Servers Reg Join Date: 2004-01-19 Member: 25462Members
    <span style='font-size:14pt;line-height:100%'>The Realisation</span>

    James had now wet himself in terror as he now faced his own death. He was sure of it, a couple of days and he would be dead and being eaten to serve the aliens he had came to destroy. Though somehow he found the will to go on, he thought he must go on, had to try and at least stop the aliens from taking permanent fixture upon this planet. For the first couple of minutes he went around looking for survivors, anyone who could help. He opened what he assured himself was the commenders quarters. though he could not see the label as it was smeared in blood.

    He opened the door ever so quietly and slowly. Then he saw the commander, sitting there, peacefully on the floor. He didnt know what to make of it. Is he alive? is he dead? Is he..... Bait! He heard the small squeal of a lerk and ducked down to the floor, turned and filled the lerk with around 20 bullets. His gun was now out of ammo and he felt that tingling at the back of his neck which was of course. His fear.

    As he began searching the quarters, he came across several Porn mags, a lighter and cigars and then it a brief interlude where luck smiled upon him, A Heavy Machine gun with Several clips. Though he found it too hard to lift and in a fit of panic took the commanders suit which had Muscle Enhancors. He walked through what used to be the cafeteria, skulks and human alike laying on the floor. He went on looking for signs of life or anything, and all the time, he had the feeling of bieng watched.
  • DrVirusDrVirus Join Date: 2004-01-13 Member: 25282Members
    I wonder whats watching him... <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

    ( OFFTOPIC: I actually noticed that most stories dont include anything about the colonists of stations, planets,etc.)
  • noobynooby Join Date: 2003-04-21 Member: 15717Members
  • DemiguiseDemiguise Marks Servers Reg Join Date: 2004-01-19 Member: 25462Members
    <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • QuadieQuadie Join Date: 2003-01-05 Member: 11862Members
    Nice story, I want more now! <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • DemiguiseDemiguise Marks Servers Reg Join Date: 2004-01-19 Member: 25462Members
    wow
    some replies
    If you read the other one, it is a bit of a spoiler cause it tells you whats gunna happen on titan...

    <span style='font-size:14pt;line-height:100%'>The Awakining</span>
    James was now sure of no survivors and had to figure out a way of communicating with home. This made his first priority to get to communications. That was 4 floors up, proberly where they would start their hive. On his way to the elevator, he found many strange bodies, Skulks with half thier bodies cloaked, men with bites and thier bodies cloaked. He decided to take some samples of thier blood and see if there was any correlation. But he main task was Communications. He entered the blood filled elevator and went up. The evevator left a small gap between the walls and so he could hide thier and wait to see what could happen.

    The doors opened, he didnt know what to expect, so he chucked a smoke grenade which showed a sensory chamber, and serveral offensive chambers. He didnt want to alert the hive that much so he chucked a small Flashbang which put off the sensors of the Chambers. He quickly ran past and managed to get into the Small communication room. He then proceeded to contact earth with a message.

    "This is the Outpost Alpha on Titan, Requesting assitance"

    He hoped marines would arrive within the hour, but they cant do, they onlyhave sub-light engines which cant do much.
    *BEEP* *BEEP* *BEEP*
    "WARNING INCOMING SPACESHIP"
    He didnt know what to make of it.
    Had they come already?
  • NineteenNineteen Join Date: 2003-12-23 Member: 24701Members
    Nice work keep it commin
  • DemiguiseDemiguise Marks Servers Reg Join Date: 2004-01-19 Member: 25462Members
    Final Bit
    I would like some reviews <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    <span style='font-size:14pt;line-height:100%'>The End </span>

    James looked at the monitor, he couldn?t be certain but he thought it was a TSA ship. He then stared up into the sky through the bloodied window and saw 'It'. IT was huge, it was green. He knew that it was the mother ship. He was reminded of what the commander said in his first week at the outpost.
    "This is one of the places that the Aliens want, and we have to protect it with our lives"

    Then he saw a second, much farther away ship. It was smaller but not that much and he wondered what it could be doing. He grabbed a Portable Sensor array to track the altitude of the Mother ship and set off in search of how to destroy it. The constant bleeping of the Array put him off, he couldn?t think, until he came across an Outpost Schematic.

    He saw the entire place, from the quarters to the power relays. Then it hit him. If he could make it so the power relays to the Anti-matter Station overload, then he could destroy the ship, but also himself in the process. James didn?t think twice and began going down the long flight of stairs, down to the cellar area, where the Station was. What was there he didn?t really know, but he had a feeling that it wasn?t going to be such easy thing to overload those relays. But still he went on.

    The door to the cellar was old and frail, it screeched as he forced it open. He looked around, turned on his flashlight and laser pointer, and carefully trudged on. He heard things that he didn?t want to, like footsteps. He put them down to stress but he didn?t really want to think of it like that. He just wanted it to go away. Unaware of what was directly in front of him, he tripped and fell into a lot of green stuff. It was bacterium. And where there is bacterium, there is a hive. He suddenly went trigger happy and began firing everywhere to make sure there was no hive. One shot managed to hit the sensory chamber and the entire of the cellar lit up with chambers and an onos standing there, looking straight at him.

    He unloaded a clip straight at head, but it just bounced off his armoured hide. The onos Stomped in rage and knocked him down to the floor, then standing over him, he saw a sort of mouth which was opening to eat him. He got out his knife and began cutting profusely to stop it. The onos collapsed and crushed James. Luckily his armour had saved him, he managed to climb out and press on. His next problem was the Chambers and the hive. He had to get rid of it before reinforcements came. He got out his only grenades and chucked them into the Fray, hoping that the hive would be gone.

    Since His HMG was too heavy he was left with his last weapon, a measly pistol. The controls of the Anit-matter Reactor were only a stones throw away. He was sure that once it started, it could not be stopped. He made himself ready for the last moments of his life and ran. He didn?t stop for anything, he jumped over the remains of the Sensory chamber and kept on going. His mind was focused. He got to the controls and began setting the controls for overload. At that point he heard dozens of chuckling Skulks, he turned around and heard the Powering up of the antimatter Core.
    ?Hey ****, Just thought u might like to know, Ur all buggered.? James said in a calm voice, He smiled as the Skulks Raced at him. He didn?t care.
    10?
    9?
    8?
    7?
    6?
    5?
    4?
    3?
    2?
    1?
    Core overload.
    James let out his Arms and Laughed as the antimatter engulfed him and the other skulks. The mother ship hovering above was destroyed in the most spectacular array of lights. The people of earth remember his bravery and courage.

    We will miss you James?

    Huh?
    Huh?
    What did you think?
  • DemiguiseDemiguise Marks Servers Reg Join Date: 2004-01-19 Member: 25462Members
  • NuubNuub Join Date: 2004-01-05 Member: 25059Members
    Quite short story, but cool. You should try to make a longer story next.
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