My Story

DrVirusDrVirus Join Date: 2004-01-13 Member: 25282Members
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<div class="IPBDescription">Welcome to Space Station Gamma.</div> My head is close to be bursting with ideas, so I will post one of my stories here. Well... Actually that will take some time because I still have something to do, but very soon (1 hour) I will post the introduction.
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  • DrVirusDrVirus Join Date: 2004-01-13 Member: 25282Members
    The long awaited Introduction has come. A few things about the whole story. There are a few things that are not in the game but which have something to do with it. I will try to explain everything as good as possible.

    Enemy Within

    Introduction

    The transport vessel no.1549 was this time transporting something special. A rescent marine mission managed to "capture" an alien hive. It was laying in the load at the back, incubated. They headed to Space Station Gamma. The stations purpose was research on alien lifeforms. But that information was secret. Only the highest authorities knew hwta was done there. the small vessel (compared to the wrest of the station) slowly came to the hangar. The gate opened and the vessel slowly entered the hangar. At the place where the vessel was suppose to land stood four squads of assult droids, these robots are in fact humans who were modified after specimen no.15623 got out of its containment. From that moment normal men were specially modified to satisfy security neads. As the vessel landed teams of workers went out from one end of the hangar. While from the windows above the hangar scientists looked as the new specimen was unloaded. The knew that very soon they will have a chance to discover the secrets of the alien hive, perhaps they will be able to use it for their purpose. But they didnt know what awaited them...

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  • noobynooby Join Date: 2003-04-21 Member: 15717Members
    Potential, but do spell checks please, e.g - A rescent marine should be recent. hwta was done - should be what.

    Small mistakes, true, but annoying.
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  • DrVirusDrVirus Join Date: 2004-01-13 Member: 25282Members
    Those spelling problems ... I hate them...

    A little about the Heroes

    Starship Behemoth was as always patrolling the perimiter. Thankfully there were no attacks on any station, or planets. On this very ship was one of the few squads which stationed on it. This one is in particular important, you know later why...

    Leader of Group
    Commander: Alex Bielski
    Age: 35
    Height: 180cm
    Weight: 60kg
    Hair: Brown
    Eyes: Green
    Notes: Lost brother during mission GH5067
    Weapons: LMG, Pistol, tactical combat knife
    Armour: Tactical officer armour.

    Second in Command:
    Sarge:Jhon Helman
    Age:20
    Height: 178cm
    Weight: 67kg
    Hair: Bald
    Eyes: Blue
    Notes: Claims that he beat a fade using only his tactical knife.
    Weapons: Shotgun,Pistol,Jungle knife
    Armour: Reinforced tactical armour.

    The rest will come later...
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  • Fire_EelFire_Eel Join Date: 2003-08-19 Member: 19950Members
    Behemoth again?

    R u including the Behemoth from my story?

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