New Ns Song (need Performer!)

TractorCowTractorCow Join Date: 2003-01-12 Member: 12231Members
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<div class="IPBDescription">I will buy you a new hive</div> I've had this song running through my head for a while... and after a week of singing it through my head, altering it as I went, I decided to write it down and put my work before the community to throw rotten cabbages at.

It is a take off from the Everclear song "I will buy you a new life". It's a story about the love a gorge has for another gorge, a love complicated by the actions of those aliens around them. There are various criticisms of certain gameplay styles pointed out in the song... but for the point of finding words that rhyme properly and fit in I ignored being politically correct. o_O

Please tell me why it's crap... and how I can make it less crap. Download and listen to the orginal song first though, if you have it. That would be lovely. ^_^ Also, if anyone is interested in performing/mixing/producing an actual audio recording based on this song... could you send me a personal message?



TractorCow – I will buy you a new hive

Uh, Yeah

Here are the D.C.s that I owe you
Yes you can get regen
I will get one more
When I get res again

I hate those people who love to tell you
Whoring is the way to get your kills
They have never been gorge
They have never had the joy of a healspray gorge rush

Yeah
Oh, I know we will never skulk back
Yeah

You say you gestate crying
Yes and you don’t know why
You climb up and you go lay down
In Viaduct red room

Oh, Yeah
I guess I’m doing ok
I gested with the strangest guy
Can you believe he actually wants
Sens at only one hive

I will buy you a garden
Where your O.C.s can shoot
I will buy you some movements,
Perfect shiny and new
I will buy you that R.T.
Way up in West Access
I will buy you a new hive
Yes I will

Yes, I know all about that other gorge
Who likes to spam webs around the hives
I know all about the times before
With that obsessive little res ****

They might make you think you’re happy
Yeah maybe for a minute or two
They can’t make you stuff,
No they can’t build upgrades the way that I do

I will buy you a garden
Where your O.C.s can shoot
I will buy you some movements,
Perfect shiny and new
I will buy you that R.T.
Way up in West Access
I will buy you a new hive
Yeah
I will buy you a new hive
Oh, Yeah

I know we can never skulk back

Yeah, Oh
Will you please let me gest the night
Will you please let me gest the night
Onos will ever know
Yeah

Ooh, I will buy you a garden
Where your O.C.s can shoot
I will buy you some movements,
Perfect shinny and new
I will buy you that R.T.
Way up in West Access
I will buy you a new hive
Oh Yeah

I will buy you a garden
Where your O.C.s can shoot
I will buy you some movements,
Perfect shinny and new
I will buy you that R.T.
Way up in West Access
I will buy you a new hive

(Fade)
I will buy you a new hive
I will buy you a new hive
I will buy you a new hive
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  • MulletMullet Join Date: 2003-04-28 Member: 15910Members, Constellation
    lol

    That would be cool if someone actually sang it and stuff..... <!--emo&:0--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wow.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wow.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • nightdragonnightdragon Join Date: 2003-01-05 Member: 11848Members, Constellation
    Lol i kinda jus sung it to myself and i reminded myself of sean paul.......I wont be doing it therefore!
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  • MoquiaoMoquiao Join Date: 2003-05-09 Member: 16168Members
    ill do it... <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->


    but bearin mind.. when i try to sing it slips into angry rapper mode loi dont mean to it just sounds rapperish,.
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  • TractorCowTractorCow Join Date: 2003-01-12 Member: 12231Members
    Hell... I'm happy if anyone has enough skill just to find the raw music, add the vocals in a way that sounds realistic, and successfully produce a mp3. Maybe we could begin by finding the music without the vocals?
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  • MoquiaoMoquiao Join Date: 2003-05-09 Member: 16168Members
    i got Onyx - last days instrumental...

    that works..

    or there is one track around which i downloaded perfectly legally cos i used to try a bit of mcing..

    Beatfeast - sickest battle beat
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  • ChookzChookz Join Date: 2003-09-13 Member: 20814Members, Constellation
    Very Good <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> i am TractorCow's mate, sent it off to the [FFT] see if they can make a mix on it <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • TractorCowTractorCow Join Date: 2003-01-12 Member: 12231Members
    It's a parody... so it should be the same music as the original "Everclear - I will buy you a new life".

    If that's what you're referring to... I apologize.

    ~ Cow

    PS: Chookz is so cool!! Thanks. ^^
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  • MoquiaoMoquiao Join Date: 2003-05-09 Member: 16168Members
    erm ok i think i have the cd lying around <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • KaMiKaZe1KaMiKaZe1 Join Date: 2002-11-18 Member: 9196Members
    edited January 2004
    Heh, I could see that having potential. I'll make sure to bring it to Fangs and Moogle's attention.

    Edit: I kin tyep gudlee>
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  • ANeMANeM Join Date: 2003-05-13 Member: 16267Members, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin--KaMiKaZe!!!+Jan 22 2004, 04:48 AM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (KaMiKaZe!!! @ Jan 22 2004, 04:48 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Heh, I could see that having potential. I'll make sure to bring it to Fangs and Moogle's attention.

    Edit: I kin tyep gudlee> <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    I thought Fangs left NS.. So.. I would assume he also left making NS songs?
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  • Mr_JeburtOMr_JeburtO Join Date: 2003-08-29 Member: 20340Members
    ask kenichi he made like 5 ns songs a while back, well its more of just the music so he would be alot of help
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  • lljkWhimsylljkWhimsy Join Date: 2003-04-25 Member: 15829Members
    Here's a parody I made a while ago, with an NS theme. Never posted before.


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    If I Had a Million Res Nodes
    Sung to: If I Had a Million Dollars

    If I had a million Res Nodes

    If I had a million Res Nodes
    If I had a million Res Nodes
    I'd buy you a hive
    I'd buy you a hive
    If I had a million Res Nodes
    If I had a million Res Nodes
    I'd buy you some defence with the hive
    (Maybe sensory or movement)
    If I had a million Res Nodes
    If I had a million Res Nodes
    I'd buy you level 2 armour
    (A nice relient kevlar vest)
    If I had a million Res Nodes
    I would have your skill

    If I had a million Res Nodes
    I would build a t-farm near a hive
    If I had a million Res Nodes
    You could help, and we would thrive
    If I had a million Res Nodes
    Maybe we could put like a couple sieges there somewhere
    You know, we could just go up there and hang out
    Like take a phase and stuff
    There would be already laid out guns for us
    and maybe an observatory and armoury


    If I had a million Res Nodes
    If I had a million Res Nodes
    I'd buy you a new gun
    And my be level 3 ammo
    If I had a million Res Nodes
    If I had a million Res Nodes
    I'd buy an exotic pet
    Like a Gorge... Or a Lerk

    If I had a million Res Nodes
    If I had a million Res Nodes
    I'd buy myself carapace
    Or maybe redemption so I could go home
    If I had a million Res Nodes
    I'd buy your looooooooove

    If I had a million Res Nodes
    We woulden't have to gain any more
    If I had a million Res Nodes
    I woulden't be called a resource ****
    If I had a million Res Nodes
    I woulden't have to eat the commander
    (We'd eat the commander!)
    (Of course we would, we'd just eat more!
    And buy really expensive upgrades with it
    Like all the... Sensory upgrades!
    Mmmmmm!)


    If I had a million Res Nodes
    If I had a million Res Nodes
    I'd buy Grenade Launchers
    But not without HA, that's cruel
    If I had a million Res Nodes
    If I had a million Res Nodes
    I'd buy you some mines
    I'd get tripmines, but they're all proxies!
    If I had a million Res Nodes
    If I had a million Res Nodes
    I'd buy you a wielder
    Cause all you ever wanted was a wielder
    If I had a million Res Nodes
    I'd buy Jet Packs!


    If I had a million Res Nodes
    If I had a million Res Nodes
    If I had a million Res Nodes
    If I had a million Res Nodes
    If I had a million Res Nodes
    We would win
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  • ANeMANeM Join Date: 2003-05-13 Member: 16267Members, Constellation
    edited January 2004
    [lljk]Whimsy, First of all, its been done. Second of all, the other version (Done by FFT Fangs and FFT Space Moogle 5) was a lot better than your version.
    That and.. Well, they actually have an MP3 out. You don't. <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • ZunniZunni The best thing to happen to I&amp;S in a long while Join Date: 2002-11-26 Member: 10016Members
    To find all of [FFT] (our) parodies, you can check our website out at:

    <a href='http://www.fftclan.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=314' target='_blank'>http://www.fftclan.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=314</a>

    My personal fav. is (Stuck in the middle with) Noobs, but of course I'm biased since I wrote it..

    But they are all there, plus all our skits from "The Show"....

    As for Fangs, he's made a recovery into NS, and is continuing with his music so he will still be doing parodies..

    The big problem is finding songs enough people know for them to get the joke.. I've never heard the above EverClear song but if others feel it's a good match, they may be able to work their magic with it.

    But check out what's there....
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  • aaarrrghaaarrrgh Join Date: 2003-10-20 Member: 21812Members
    edited January 2004
    nah, Back Um Down is the best NS song ever, hands down. Took ages for Fangs to complete it as well <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • EpidemicEpidemic Dark Force Gorge Join Date: 2003-06-29 Member: 17781Members
    OMG ZUNNI NOOB, HAXTSA PWNS!
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  • FangsFangs Join Date: 2003-02-13 Member: 13506Members
    edited January 2004
    I was looking over the song I like it alot. Besides Everclear is from Portland Oregon just a few miles north of Salem Oregon where I live. I think I feel anouther song comming on.

    XD

    And watch out for the brand new "The Show" CD. Flayra will be selling in his NS store soon. Its packed with skits and goodness from "The Show" on nsradio.net. ETA 2-3 weeks.
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  • ChookzChookz Join Date: 2003-09-13 Member: 20814Members, Constellation
    edited January 2004
    Thanks Fangs for overlooking my Mates song ^^ I hope you do pick it for a song, he will literally hit his head on pluto <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->. I <3 [FFT] <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • TractorCowTractorCow Join Date: 2003-01-12 Member: 12231Members
    Hey, I think we'll all get along just fine. ^_^

    Not sure what I can do to help... apart from giving advice I'm happy to leave it up to you to produce. FFT has done a great job in the past... really great. I'm sure this will be another good song. Thanks.

    ~ TractorCow
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