The Others-A ns fanfic story.
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Join Date: 2008-05-22 Member: 64309Members
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Officer Takee was scared. He wasn't scared of the Kharra, but he was terrified of the onos. He had been sent out two weeks ago on a scouting mission by Commander Peter, But had wound up trapped in a maintenance room with a hungry Onos hellbent on eating him alive at the door. At that moment, The door started to crack as the Onos's relentless blows started to take their toll. Takee looked around the room desperately for an escape route and spotted a small emergency wall door. "The Onos will be too big to fit in there.." thought Takee. The door shuttered again and a large crack split the middle of it. The decision was made. Takee squeezed himself through the small entryway, Cursing the architects. He squeezed through a short red-lit passageway and came out in another part of the ship, Due to emergency phase-gate processors on his belt. He appeared in a very disturbing scene.
He was standing on a catwalk a few feet above a small Kharra encampment. The area was covered with bacterial growth, And there were DCs and OCs scattered around. Takee tensed himself, But then upon looking closer he found that all of the chambers had been ruined by violent slashes with a extremely long and very sharp object. There were no Kharra around. He leaped down from the catwalk and landed on something soft and squishy. He turned to see what he had landed on and almost threw up. Behind him was a gorge laying on its back, its legs spread at odd angles and its little mouth open in a scream. Its belly had been cut open and its guts were gone. The cut was just like the ones on the structures-swift and clean. Fade? wondered Takee, Knowing in his heart that this was the work of something even more terrible than the kharra. He searched around, trying to find some clues as to what had caused this destruction. He found a Fade and two skulks in a corner. The fade had its claws ripped-they lay next to it with large bites taken out of them. The Fade itself was slumped with its back against the wall and a huge hole burned right through it by acid. Yellow blood was still dripping out of the hole. There was also a gorge with his brains eaten out and his stomach gone. The two skulks had been simply torn in half. Wondering what terrible horror could have been unleashed now, he searched his belt for a radio and called his commander.
His call was answered by the commander in a minute. "Takee, Come in! Do you read me?" "Loud and clear, Commander. Listen, i found a Kharra camp over here and something real weird is going on." "What, is some new kharra showing up?" "No, all the kharra that were here have been killed. Two gorges, a fade and two skulks. Sir, the gorges had their insides eaten, The fade had his chest burned open and his claws eaten, And the skulks were ripped in half. Whatever this is, It isn't the kharra." "Hmm... Did you say the fades claws were EATEN?" "yes, Sir. Chomped away at." "Ok, Stay in touch with me, Im going to place a PG for reinforcements to come through. Over and out."
Takee belted the radio and waited for the Pg to appear. He saw a small shudder of movement in a very dark corner, and upon closer investigation, found a gorge hiding there underneath a small overhang. The gorge saw him and backed against the wall. Knowing the tactics of gorges, Takee flashed his light around and saw several strands of webbing. He took a small pocket torch and burned them away, Then picked up the gorge. It tried to run away, but it was in a corner and failed. The pg appeared and a crate with weapons and ammo in it. He emptied the crate and put the gorge in the crate. He walked to the PG and started to build it. The PG came on with a metallic Whoosh. He heard a small noise behind him, like wood breaking. He spun around, Lifting his HMG high. The crate's top was broken. He approached it and saw that the gorge was gone. In his place was a spatter of yellow blood and one leg.
The Commander's radio came on and he vaguely heard screams from Takee. Then he heard a horrible gurgling noise, a gutsy, grisly sound, and flesh being torn out. Then there was only static. He immidiately dispatched a squad of 7 heavily armed marines through the PG. The marines came through the PG and found the body of Takee. His throat was ripped out. The top of his head had a gaping hole through the skull down to his brain-which was gone. His lower body had been eaten and ripped. He lay in a puddle of blood. One of the marines called the Commander and informed him of the things they had found.
"Well, what do you think.....OH MY GOD WHAT THE **** IS THAT? GET YOUR ASSES BACK THROUGH THE PG-Spark-NOW OR ELS-Spark-static-ssssssssssssssssssssssss"
"Get back through the PG! Hurry!" The marines ran to the pg but it would not teleport them. They had been stranded.
Miles across the ship, in the command center, Lay the infantry portal,ruined-the command counsel-ruined, and the PG, Ruined. And in a corner, in a pool of his own blood lay Commander Peter, sliced in half.
~thats all for now,part 2 coming soon! <img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/asrifle.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid="::asrifle::" border="0" alt="asrifle.gif" />
He was standing on a catwalk a few feet above a small Kharra encampment. The area was covered with bacterial growth, And there were DCs and OCs scattered around. Takee tensed himself, But then upon looking closer he found that all of the chambers had been ruined by violent slashes with a extremely long and very sharp object. There were no Kharra around. He leaped down from the catwalk and landed on something soft and squishy. He turned to see what he had landed on and almost threw up. Behind him was a gorge laying on its back, its legs spread at odd angles and its little mouth open in a scream. Its belly had been cut open and its guts were gone. The cut was just like the ones on the structures-swift and clean. Fade? wondered Takee, Knowing in his heart that this was the work of something even more terrible than the kharra. He searched around, trying to find some clues as to what had caused this destruction. He found a Fade and two skulks in a corner. The fade had its claws ripped-they lay next to it with large bites taken out of them. The Fade itself was slumped with its back against the wall and a huge hole burned right through it by acid. Yellow blood was still dripping out of the hole. There was also a gorge with his brains eaten out and his stomach gone. The two skulks had been simply torn in half. Wondering what terrible horror could have been unleashed now, he searched his belt for a radio and called his commander.
His call was answered by the commander in a minute. "Takee, Come in! Do you read me?" "Loud and clear, Commander. Listen, i found a Kharra camp over here and something real weird is going on." "What, is some new kharra showing up?" "No, all the kharra that were here have been killed. Two gorges, a fade and two skulks. Sir, the gorges had their insides eaten, The fade had his chest burned open and his claws eaten, And the skulks were ripped in half. Whatever this is, It isn't the kharra." "Hmm... Did you say the fades claws were EATEN?" "yes, Sir. Chomped away at." "Ok, Stay in touch with me, Im going to place a PG for reinforcements to come through. Over and out."
Takee belted the radio and waited for the Pg to appear. He saw a small shudder of movement in a very dark corner, and upon closer investigation, found a gorge hiding there underneath a small overhang. The gorge saw him and backed against the wall. Knowing the tactics of gorges, Takee flashed his light around and saw several strands of webbing. He took a small pocket torch and burned them away, Then picked up the gorge. It tried to run away, but it was in a corner and failed. The pg appeared and a crate with weapons and ammo in it. He emptied the crate and put the gorge in the crate. He walked to the PG and started to build it. The PG came on with a metallic Whoosh. He heard a small noise behind him, like wood breaking. He spun around, Lifting his HMG high. The crate's top was broken. He approached it and saw that the gorge was gone. In his place was a spatter of yellow blood and one leg.
The Commander's radio came on and he vaguely heard screams from Takee. Then he heard a horrible gurgling noise, a gutsy, grisly sound, and flesh being torn out. Then there was only static. He immidiately dispatched a squad of 7 heavily armed marines through the PG. The marines came through the PG and found the body of Takee. His throat was ripped out. The top of his head had a gaping hole through the skull down to his brain-which was gone. His lower body had been eaten and ripped. He lay in a puddle of blood. One of the marines called the Commander and informed him of the things they had found.
"Well, what do you think.....OH MY GOD WHAT THE **** IS THAT? GET YOUR ASSES BACK THROUGH THE PG-Spark-NOW OR ELS-Spark-static-ssssssssssssssssssssssss"
"Get back through the PG! Hurry!" The marines ran to the pg but it would not teleport them. They had been stranded.
Miles across the ship, in the command center, Lay the infantry portal,ruined-the command counsel-ruined, and the PG, Ruined. And in a corner, in a pool of his own blood lay Commander Peter, sliced in half.
~thats all for now,part 2 coming soon! <img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/asrifle.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid="::asrifle::" border="0" alt="asrifle.gif" />
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