Ns_kiroka (screnshots)
Tiskaite
Join Date: 2002-11-12 Member: 8269Members
<div class="IPBDescription">A new colony map under construction</div> Well, here i am, [I]Tiskaite[/]. I´ve been workin on this map for like, 3 days now, and im progressing good. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
Anyway. The map is set on a planet in space (duh) and on the planet there is a colony that the Frontiersmen has set up. As in the movies something goes wrong, and the colony is not contactable. So the Frontiersmen sends a unit there and to check the status. Then this happens:
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and some:
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Here´s a link to the screenshots <a href='http://www.thelostrealm.com/~deepflame/Tiskaite/' target='_blank'>CLICK ME!!</a>
Anyway. The map is set on a planet in space (duh) and on the planet there is a colony that the Frontiersmen has set up. As in the movies something goes wrong, and the colony is not contactable. So the Frontiersmen sends a unit there and to check the status. Then this happens:
<!--emo&::asrifle::--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html/emoticons/asrifle.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='asrifle.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&::onos::--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html/emoticons/tiny.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='tiny.gif'><!--endemo-->
and some:
<!--emo&::siege::--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html/emoticons/siege.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='siege.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&::gorge::--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html/emoticons/pudgy.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='pudgy.gif'><!--endemo-->
Here´s a link to the screenshots <a href='http://www.thelostrealm.com/~deepflame/Tiskaite/' target='_blank'>CLICK ME!!</a>
Comments
im redoing alot atm.. so it looks even sexier <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
and im gonna redo alot alot more and add more tomorrow since i have no school then! WOOTAGE!
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Gorge owns.
I wrote a nice long post full of complements and constructive criticism, and the page screwed up and it was lost forever <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo-->
Here's what I remember:
-Interesting use of textures in some places, in some areas the texture use needs more work... like that plain metal floor texture, its <i>way</i> overused.
-Good, solid brushwork! You know what you're doing.
-Lighting is excellent in some areas, needs serious work in others... some areas are too full of huge ambient light, not enough smaller light sources
-Architecture needs more <i>detail</i>... some rooms have FLAT walls, we need bumps and nooks and and crannies and DETAIL! And some of the corners, especially... they rarely work as just a 90 degree corner, so work on making them better-looking and interesting.
-Nifty!
That be all for now. Good work.
Rite.. well its pretty old shots now :O again.. im changin lights all the time along with the textures.. i´ve always felt that a texture could fit with a special light color, so more sexy light will come!
<b>-Architecture needs more detail... some rooms have FLAT walls, we need bumps and nooks and and crannies and DETAIL! And some of the corners, especially... they rarely work as just a 90 degree corner, so work on making them better-looking and interesting.</b>
No fear, im on it already. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--> at first i made flat walls, just to try textures, (since im new to ns.wad), later on i tend to bend the walls... anyway it´l turn out nice for the final..
thanks for the cool comments, now im more eager to finish it!