Blazing freedom - iii - of love and loss

Greedo

<div class="IPBDescription">Chapter 3 in the contuinuing story</div>Alright, Chapter 3, "Of Love and Loss" is ready for consumption.  I've kept the chronology a bit more stable in this chapter, but I feel I've step over to a more "24" style narrative.  I hope it won't confuse anyone.

<a href="http://blazingfreedom.tripod.com/blazingfreedom/id3.html" target="_blank">Blazing Freedom - III - Of Love and Loss</a>

Rob

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What a way to end it...
I like the <span style='color:black'>friction between Vox and the Captian, since the Captian is what he says Cool Hand was, if you get what I'm saying...</span> A great chapter, keep it going.



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Greedo

Alright, I don't know.  I guess maybe people just don't like my story.  Should I stop writing, or what?

Rob

NO!  Definantly don't do that!  I like it.  But I'm gonna go out on a limb here and act all self-rightous.  We write because we like to do it.  That should be the major factor.  But, you should ask MonsE to mention your story today in the "Big Release".  Assuming he's listening.

MonsieurEvil

As a matter of fact, I am listening. Look for a Fan Fiction Fanatics posting placed precariously post-PHL's present pimpage.

Ehh... at <a href="http://www.readyroom.org" target="_blank">RR.org</a>. Tonight.

pielemuis

Can you believe i just don't get that sentence?
Djees maybe i should study some english?

pielemuis

BTW i liked your story it's well written, though i think you can put somewhat more depth in your characters, you know let the readers find out more 'bout what they really think, and some more descriptions would be nice 2, i like lot of descriptions sucks you right in the story. Oh well good work keep it up.