Outpost 59

CForrester

<div class="IPBDescription">A thought on my mind</div> I wrote this while I was really tired but couldn't sleep because I couldn't get the though of what's in the story out of my head. I thought I would show it to you, but please note it is rated R! There's ALOT of blood and a marine dies very horribly at the end. Don't read if you get queasy easily. Don't critisize please, I wrote this when I was VERY tired so it's horrible. Enjoy. ;P

Talesin

Very nicely done. Really brings out the parts of NS that you don't see in the game (thankfully, for some) along with the newbie-type mentality. After all, everyone who dies isn't automatically regenerated.. they're reinforced by different people even if they're played by the same ones.