Metal Melts, Flesh Screams Part 1

KRQShipPagan

<div class="IPBDescription">Part one of my Fan Fiction is done.</div> Okay here is part one from the same fan fic I placed a sample of up here a few days ago. This still isn't in final stage, but this is about the final draught stage. So anything I do change shouldn't change the story, just more or less detail here and there. I hope you enjoy it.

Here's a link to it.

<a href='http://www.geocities.com/cpt_margos/ns/ns1.htm' target='_blank'>http://www.geocities.com/cpt_margos/ns/ns1.htm</a>

If you read it, please let me know what you think. I like feedback, it helps me to know I'm doing something right, or how I may improve.

Windelkron

very cool, but the font is a little hard to read. Light green background/black letters would be so much easier to read....

other than that... nice.

Advisor

I liked the change in font whenever there is a change of character. I think white might be a better font colour. Dark on dark is harder to read.