Ns Comic 3 Here At Last. :d

SupernornSupernorn Best. Picture. Ever. Made. Ever. Join Date: 2002-11-07 Member: 7608Members, Constellation
edited March 2003 in Artwork Forum
<div class="IPBDescription">Natural Rejection 3: Hitbox Bug</div> yes its here.
Enjoy.

And i finally came up with a way for Jeff to be in it <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
He Also delivers the last line, which i'm sure you'll enjoy <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->

Have fun with it.
And dont forget to press the page buttons. Its 3 pages long!

edit: sorry, had to fix a text issue, Just fixed it, and re-uploaded:

<a href='http://groups.yahoo.com/group/making_games/files/hitbox.swf' target='_blank'>Natural Rejection comic 3</a>

I would love to hear some more comments on my work.. I spent quite a few hours drawing it by hand you know... <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • KeksImperiumKeksImperium Join Date: 2002-11-19 Member: 9300Members
    i miss the link to the comic.....

    or didnt i see it?
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  • AllUrHiveRblong2usAllUrHiveRblong2us By Your Powers Combined... Join Date: 2002-12-20 Member: 11244Members
    I liked the first two pages, but by the time the third comes around, the original joke has been lost, and it just seems like you're struggling for an ending.
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  • Suicide_RunSuicide_Run Join Date: 2002-12-17 Member: 10939Members
    well i liked it :/
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  • SupernornSupernorn Best. Picture. Ever. Made. Ever. Join Date: 2002-11-07 Member: 7608Members, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin--Jobabob+Mar 1 2003, 04:50 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Jobabob @ Mar 1 2003, 04:50 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> the last 3 frames are indeed 'tacked on' <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Yup. I struggled with this one alright. <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • JediYoshiJediYoshi The Cupcake Boss Join Date: 2002-05-27 Member: 674Members
    Since someone ruined the teaser, it wasn't as funny as I imagined, very good work though
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  • DunsbyDunsby Join Date: 2002-08-01 Member: 1042Awaiting Authorization
    "Hitbox.swf" Gives it away enough as it is...

    Well, i liked it...
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  • LikuLiku I, am the Somberlain. Join Date: 2003-01-10 Member: 12128Members
    w00t! 10 Points for Supernorn! I loved it!
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  • SurgeSurge asda4a3sklflkgh Join Date: 2002-07-14 Member: 944Members
    Hmmmmm....
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  • SupernornSupernorn Best. Picture. Ever. Made. Ever. Join Date: 2002-11-07 Member: 7608Members, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin--Surge+Mar 1 2003, 07:22 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Surge @ Mar 1 2003, 07:22 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Hmmmmm.... <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    well..looks like my comic has gone into *marmite* mode. You either love it or hate it.
    i must admit, i did rush the ending. I only had a day to finish it, or you would be waiting till NEXT Saturday...which i couldn't live with.
    But oh well.. I shall make it up to you.
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  • LikuLiku I, am the Somberlain. Join Date: 2003-01-10 Member: 12128Members
    Don't worry Supernorn! I still love the comic, and I don't see a difference on Page 3.
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  • reasareasa Join Date: 2002-11-10 Member: 8010Members, Constellation
    lmao.....a bullet. I loved it! keep up the good work
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  • DOOManiacDOOManiac Worst. Critic. Ever. Join Date: 2002-04-17 Member: 462Members, NS1 Playtester
    <!--QuoteBegin--AllUrHiveRBelong2Us+Mar 1 2003, 09:02 AM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (AllUrHiveRBelong2Us @ Mar 1 2003, 09:02 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> I liked the first two pages, but by the time the third comes around, the original joke has been lost, and it just seems like you're struggling for an ending. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    I agree. The first two pages were r00flicious. The third didn't even really need to be there heh. In my opinion it'd be better w/ just a 2 rows/6panels and drop the third page. just my opinion though...

    Also, its interesting that you used Shockwave for the comic rather than a JPEG or GIF. Was the comic done w/ the vector art stuff in it (so it shows up really clear regardless of res?) ?
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  • CyborgguineapigCyborgguineapig Join Date: 2002-11-01 Member: 3233Members
    I liked them <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • TunskaTunska Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14176Members
    Nice work! <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

    I have good idea for comic, but I'm pretty crappy drawing things. <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • BattousaixBattousaix Join Date: 2002-06-25 Member: 822Members
    lol all 3 pages are classics ^^x
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  • SupernornSupernorn Best. Picture. Ever. Made. Ever. Join Date: 2002-11-07 Member: 7608Members, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin--DOOManiac+Mar 1 2003, 09:53 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (DOOManiac @ Mar 1 2003, 09:53 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> [QUOTE=AllUrHiveRBelong2Us,Mar 1 2003, 09:02 AM]
    its interesting that you used Shockwave for the comic rather than a JPEG or GIF. Was the comic done w/ the vector art stuff in it (so it shows up really clear regardless of res?) ? <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    yes i drew it all in the main Flash program.

    I have also been thinking of making a music video of "Gorges just want to have fun"
    But that would take me some time. <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • DY357LXDY357LX Playing since day 1. Still can&#39;t Comm. England Join Date: 2002-10-27 Member: 1651Members, Constellation
    I like it. Keep up the good work and produce some more <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • Amped1Amped1 Join Date: 2003-02-08 Member: 13287Members
    Suggestion - Cut off the last page and use it in another comic. It's good, and I think you should keep it, but it doesn't fit into this comic too well.
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  • def_onedef_one Join Date: 2002-05-21 Member: 641Members, Retired Developer, NS1 Playtester, Contributor
    thats great <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • SupernornSupernorn Best. Picture. Ever. Made. Ever. Join Date: 2002-11-07 Member: 7608Members, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin--DeAtH_tO_gOrDoN+Mar 2 2003, 10:43 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (DeAtH_tO_gOrDoN @ Mar 2 2003, 10:43 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Suggestion - Cut off the last page and use it in another comic. It's good, and I think you should keep it, but it doesn't fit into this comic too well. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    i thought of that idea, but you've already seen it now <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • NightfireTGNightfireTG Join Date: 2002-12-24 Member: 11508Members
    sweet stuff
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  • KeyserKeyser Join Date: 2003-02-15 Member: 13591Members
    Well I like it, good work, hopefully see a few more sooner or later
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  • SupernornSupernorn Best. Picture. Ever. Made. Ever. Join Date: 2002-11-07 Member: 7608Members, Constellation
    you can count on it <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
    By the way...I'm interested in making some animated toons of Natural Rejection...anyone interested in providing voices for Jeff or the other characters?
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  • GordonGordon Join Date: 2003-01-01 Member: 11707Members
    Really cool, happens all the time <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->

    -GF
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  • RicoRico Join Date: 2003-02-23 Member: 13888Members
    lol whats in the next issue?
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  • PaqPaq Join Date: 2002-12-15 Member: 10876Members
    LOL
    That is great <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
    Last page ins't that good, but so what?
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  • SupernornSupernorn Best. Picture. Ever. Made. Ever. Join Date: 2002-11-07 Member: 7608Members, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin--Paq+Mar 15 2003, 10:13 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Paq @ Mar 15 2003, 10:13 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> LOL
    That is great <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
    Last page ins't that good, but so what? <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    yeah, the last page of that will be the comic number 4 on the NS Archives
    I removed it because it didnt really fit, and was pretty good on its own.
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  • Gimpy_Doodly_DooGimpy_Doodly_Doo Join Date: 2003-03-15 Member: 14521Members
    Funny stuff
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  • Q_estQ_est Join Date: 2003-03-16 Member: 14586Members
    very smart humor <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

    "whats the last thing....a bullet"

    very good punch line!
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  • masterswordmanmasterswordman Join Date: 2002-12-21 Member: 11303Members
    I liked it too. Especially the bender skulk
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