Length of ss chapters

Yolmer

<div class="IPBDescription">Who thinks they're way too short?</div>I know the main reason SW isn't as popular as any of the other stories is the length. They are obviously way too short, and I have planned to rewrite the entire story, making it longer, adding more detail, etc, even before I started writing it. But, I'd still like everyone's oppinion. This might even help me know what I need to add when I rewrite SW.

*EDIT* heres a link:

<a href="http://tzarcon.100free.com/miscellaneous/literature/secretswithin.html" target="_blank">http://tzarcon.free100.com/miscellaneous/literature/secretswithin.html</a>

Rob

The length of chapters shouldn't be much of a concern, it just means you have more.  Writing style is a unique thing for everyone, you just have to find a way to write that's comfortable to you.

Greedo

However much you wanna write down for us doesn't really matter.  Sure, your chapters are shorter than mine or Rob's, but that doesn't mean that your story is isn't just as good ours.  You just need to get more story out to the public.  If you want to add more detail, definitely do so.  Detail is always welcome.  If you want to do a complete rewrite, well, that's up to you.