Chapter 1: warm welcome
Right_Behind_You
Join Date: 2002-04-23 Member: 501Members
Join Date: 2002-04-23 Member: 501Members
*thud* its ending...*thud* How did i get here? *THUD* i thought i knew *thud...Crack* seems different now *thud....Crackkkkkle*
---2 days ago---
Too scared, thats all i felt... fear. Although i should have listened, this was our 3rd time having this breifing.
"...Stott!"
"Yes sir!" i replied.
"Follow...CC..."
I couldnt hear. The dropships droning engine drownded any sounds out. But i knew what i had to do.
"Yes sir!"
All i have to do is get into the cc room and weild the doors shut...all i have to do...all i have to do... it made me feel better to repeat anything reasuring in my head...all i have to do...T loaded up expecting the worst but i didnt expect this
*THUD*
The dropships landing made it worse. The gate way to my new hell seemed to drop in slow motion. The time had come for me to fight. The squad had split up in two, one for cover, and i was squad two. I got to the cc room with all but one problem, it was too quiet.
"CLEAR!"
In the distance i heard "Squad one move out!"
Footsteps filled the dessolated science facility alive with noice.
"Sir, CC up and running! Permission to weild the doors!"
"Permission granted!"
"Weilding squadron move out!"
I had one door to weild since Arris was weilding the other two. Halfway done and i heard a noise. A noise which brought us back to reality. A noise that took us far away from a dream that we might survive the next 30 minutes. The commander signaled at the vents enterance. Three men of the 1st squad moved torwards the vent enterance. It had just started...
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So tell me what you think and if you like it i will make more chapters! <!--emo&:D--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':D'><!--endemo-->
---2 days ago---
Too scared, thats all i felt... fear. Although i should have listened, this was our 3rd time having this breifing.
"...Stott!"
"Yes sir!" i replied.
"Follow...CC..."
I couldnt hear. The dropships droning engine drownded any sounds out. But i knew what i had to do.
"Yes sir!"
All i have to do is get into the cc room and weild the doors shut...all i have to do...all i have to do... it made me feel better to repeat anything reasuring in my head...all i have to do...T loaded up expecting the worst but i didnt expect this
*THUD*
The dropships landing made it worse. The gate way to my new hell seemed to drop in slow motion. The time had come for me to fight. The squad had split up in two, one for cover, and i was squad two. I got to the cc room with all but one problem, it was too quiet.
"CLEAR!"
In the distance i heard "Squad one move out!"
Footsteps filled the dessolated science facility alive with noice.
"Sir, CC up and running! Permission to weild the doors!"
"Permission granted!"
"Weilding squadron move out!"
I had one door to weild since Arris was weilding the other two. Halfway done and i heard a noise. A noise which brought us back to reality. A noise that took us far away from a dream that we might survive the next 30 minutes. The commander signaled at the vents enterance. Three men of the 1st squad moved torwards the vent enterance. It had just started...
_
So tell me what you think and if you like it i will make more chapters! <!--emo&:D--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':D'><!--endemo-->
Comments
<!--EDIT|ken20banks|May 23 2002,14:48-->
its an introduction and a rough draft... this is gonna be mostly stott trying to stay alive for 2 days in a cc room, but you wont know whos gonna die next...hehehe
---2 days ago---
and the SFX of *thud* *crackale*
makes it more real. I like it, has good potential.