Situational Ethics

That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
edited April 2003 in Fan-Fiction Forum
<div class="IPBDescription">the begining</div> Situational ethics
By Steven Daubert AKA th@ annoying kid

“Commander, I need ammo.....commander?! hey guys, where did the Markins go?”
Suddenly, he saw his HUD flashing the letters: the commander has been ejected.
“Are you guys insane? why did you eject him? were going to have our forward positions overrun since we don’t have a comm”
A crackling sound followed by the voice of a marine two corridors over was the only reply...
“that guy was a n00b, he actually used a turret”

Charlie awoke with a start, sweating profusely, he glanced around his bunk. He slowly realized that he had been dreaming. The real Dan Markins walked up to him, looking concerned at his friends sudden awakening. “you been dreaming again haven’t you?”
Charlie glanced away, and eventually mumbled a grunt of acknowledgment.
“Charlie, if you keep dreaming then you know that I can’t send you in to the field, those TSA sleep nanites should be completely removing your dreams, we need all of the squad to be all that it can be if were going to actually get some field action, what were you dreaming about this time?”
Dan stood over Charlie, a quizzical look on his face.
Charlie strained to recall the details, the dull humming of the massive engines on the rather nimble assault frigate strained against the soupy nebula it was pushing through.
“Beta squad was in the middle of an engagement with massive Kharaa forces...and...and they ejected you! from the comm chair! for no ****ing reason....thats all I can really recall...”
Darkins stood for a second, then broke out into guffaws that had many heads popping out of bunks, trying to locate the source of the laughter.
“Charlie, you know that I’m one of the top 3 commanders in the TSA, a vote to eject me would never pass!”
his voice suddenly dropped to a whisper “and even if a vote passed, the comm chair wouldn’t kick me out, I’ve got enough skill to override those little subroutines”
They both stared at each other for a second, then simultaneously broke out into huge grins.
Charlie got out of his bunk and started to change into uniform, but not before making sure that his small area of personal space was tidy and tucked in, not a wrinkle in the covers, and not a thing unorganized in his section of bunk.
“Remember Dan, we got a briefing at 14:33”
Markins simple gave a nod, and the sharply turned and walked out of the room, but not before yelling at a bunch of recruits for having there bunks messy. Charlie could have sworn that he had seen a faint smirk in his commanders eyes as he was telling the recruits “be like that man over there, his bunk is square and in order”
Charlie mused to himself for a few minutes all the while getting dressed, preparing for the days mission, he knew little details of it, all that he knew was that it was a recovery missions one some station called "Bast" but he had heard rumors that there might be someone from comprox division showing up at the briefing, it struck his as odd that one of the most secretive and harsh TSA divisions would bother with a simple infiltrate and recover mission, he dismissed these thoughts, and as soon as he was finished suiting up, he announced to his sleeping squad mates “GUYS! we got sit rep for mission in 15! you all had better know the drill”
“SIR YES SIR MR. LIOC SIR!” was the resounding response from the seemingly half asleep marines arrayed in various places of the living quarters.
Charlie stood there for a second, the TSA had never ceased to amaze him, and this wasn't an exception.
most of the marines who had only a second ago nearly knocked him down with the force of there reply were back to being half asleep. As he turned to leave the marines sleeping quarters, he gave a faint chuckle.

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Comments

  • Lumberjack_WannabeLumberjack_Wannabe Join Date: 2003-03-11 Member: 14404Members, Constellation
    LOL!

    Awesome! The humor is entertaining...
  • DeepShadowsDeepShadows Join Date: 2003-02-11 Member: 13408Members, Constellation
    That be much pretty <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> I R very happy-lishious. Nice intro


    Course, I'm a picky wanker:
    The brain can't function without dreaming. You dream every night, no matter what. You don't remember it because you wake up at the end of the dream, usually. If your dream is interrupted and you awaken, you'll remember it. Those who have sleeping disorders or for some reason don't dream begin to hallucinate after only a few days without it.

    Other than that <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> Tis grand! (Does the grandness dance)
  • RobRob Unknown Enemy Join Date: 2002-01-24 Member: 25Members, NS1 Playtester
    Good work! My other comments are in the PM.
  • CanadianWolverineCanadianWolverine Join Date: 2003-02-07 Member: 13249Members
    edited April 2003
    Mmm, short fan fiction goodness. A few mistakes here and there, could use better spacing, but over all I found this to be an enjoyable read about a marine just doing his thing in the middle of space and the thoughts and feelings that came with that. I feel all "reading satisfied", thanks "th@ annoying kid".

    Hehe, the no dreaming thing could be needed because of the type of sleep you would need in deep space (nebulae), what kind of affects dreaming might have on someone in a Rip Van Winkle sleeping bunk or while traveling at speeds closer to the speed of light than any human has in real life no one really knows, and thus why fiction is so cool, there's no way to proove it wrong unless the author chooses to let you proove it wrong. <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • UnderDOGUnderDOG Join Date: 2003-04-05 Member: 15221Members
    <!--QuoteBegin--DeepShadows+Apr 10 2003, 06:26 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (DeepShadows @ Apr 10 2003, 06:26 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> The brain can't function without dreaming. You dream every night, no matter what. You don't remember it because you wake up at the end of the dream, usually. If your dream is interrupted and you awaken, you'll remember it. Those who have sleeping disorders or for some reason don't dream begin to hallucinate after only a few days without it. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    shhhh, nanites can do anything!
  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin--UnderDOG+Apr 10 2003, 07:00 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (UnderDOG @ Apr 10 2003, 07:00 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> shhhh, nanites can do anything! <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    he's right you know!

    I'm actually considering doing part of it from the Kaharaa POV, which would be cool
  • S_T_A_R_S_BarryS_T_A_R_S_Barry Join Date: 2003-03-17 Member: 14624Members
    yea its great oh i passed my GCSE drama with Oil wars the examiner actualy cried and fell over cluching his sides hen i did the tommy copper spoon jar jar spoon jar jar spoon.

    I like the story funny as people say and i forgot the eject commander thing il have to use it in mine somewhere
  • Mr_Radical_EdMr_Radical_Ed Join Date: 2002-09-05 Member: 1285Members
    I'd really like to see more on this story. I like the dynamics going on between the characters a lot.
  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    have you read the other thread: more of the begining?
  • eedioteediot Join Date: 2003-02-24 Member: 13903Members
  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin--eediot+Apr 21 2003, 06:25 AM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (eediot @ Apr 21 2003, 06:25 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> again, LARKINS?! <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    me no understand...

    if you wondering why his name is Larkins, It just popped in to my head becuase it seemed like a good last name for a "Dan"
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