Ns_poseiden backstory

Comprox

<div class="IPBDescription">Hosted by the hive</div>Hey guys, I made my NS_Poseiden backstory, <b>many</b> thanks to rob6264 and MrBlonde for their help in fixing my insane amount of mistakes <!--emo&:)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'><!--endemo--> You can check it out <a href="http://hive.readyroom.org/writing/files/poseiden.html" target="_blank">at The Hive</a>. Hope you guys like it!

Rob

I suggest you go read it, before I send bob to attack you!

RhoadsToNowhere

Errr...one more mistake, the Greek god of the sea spells his name Poseid<b><i>o</b></i>n.  <!--emo&:p--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':p'><!--endemo-->
Other than that, it's pretty good, although I think the first "present" section should be moved to just before the second "present" section for better continuity.  Good job.  <!--emo&:)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'><!--endemo-->

Comprox

And I knew that too, man I am stupid <!--emo&:)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'><!--endemo--> Thanks for the pointer though, I will update it sometime soonish

realityisdead

Great read, Comprox. <!--emo&:)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'><!--endemo--> I love how you did switcheroo things between past and present...

SentrySteve

Yeh, I must agree with ken, that was very entertaining.  If possible you could have an easter egg somewhere that has the body of your firend <!--emo&:)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'><!--endemo-->