Tar 21 75%

CaptainChetCaptainChet Join Date: 2003-04-21 Member: 15737Members, Constellation
<div class="IPBDescription">assault rifle replacement</div> Im finishing up the mesh of a replacement for the assault rifle. NOT futurisitc, just a gun made in the late 90s (i think.) Heres a pic:

<img src='http://home.earthlink.net/~ilink109/render.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>

Heres a pic of the real rifle:

<img src='http://aster.iespana.es/aster/Library/tavor/tar21.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>

Tell me what u think.

Comments

  • Duo_MaxwellDuo_Maxwell Join Date: 2002-11-02 Member: 4631Members
    edited May 2003
    Nice , but a little undetailed .But hey, it's only 75% complete <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • -Drake--Drake- -dn ʎɐʍ sıɥʇ- Join Date: 2003-04-02 Member: 15125Members
    Tar 21

    IMI workshop starting mass producing these babys in 1996 after 3 years of testing.

    nice model the holo sight should be well holo and the other sight looks a bit flat needs to be rounded more
  • -Drake--Drake- -dn ʎɐʍ sıɥʇ- Join Date: 2003-04-02 Member: 15125Members
    other than that looking good
  • DuhflyinlerkDuhflyinlerk Join Date: 2002-11-27 Member: 10071Members
    Wow, thats an awsome lookin model. Cant wait till its finished.
  • RotA_PlagueRotA_Plague Join Date: 2002-11-03 Member: 6768Members
    The scope needs a little work but nice so far. Even though I cannot stand this gun.
  • Jack_HandeyJack_Handey Join Date: 2002-12-14 Member: 10786Members
    Um, why is it just one extruded shape? If i'm not mistaken, scopes are round, and so is the foregrip and the pistol grip.
  • CaptainChetCaptainChet Join Date: 2003-04-21 Member: 15737Members, Constellation
    Dont worry, the scope will be cirular and formed when its done. Remember i said 75% <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo--> Jack handey; why do you say PISTOL grip when this is an assault rifle...w.e its also not ONE shape its around five. One for the trigger, one for each section of the gun (divided by the line that kinda runs through) and one for each part of the scope. THx for the comments and criticsms.
  • JaegerJaeger Join Date: 2002-11-28 Member: 10202Members
    [history lesson]
    He called it a pistol grip because that indeed is what it's called. Sub-machine guns, assault rifles, doesn't matter what type of weapon it is, that type of handgrip and trigger is called a pistol grip. Think of it like a tradition, sort of how commanding officers are always referred to as "Sir", regardless of gender.
    [/history lesson]
  • CaptainChetCaptainChet Join Date: 2003-04-21 Member: 15737Members, Constellation
    lol thx. sry i made the mistake. Im not quite an expert on guns lol.
  • xexexexe Join Date: 2003-03-27 Member: 14921Members
    This model has great potenial
    keep it up <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • MalambisBZMalambisBZ Join Date: 2002-11-21 Member: 9559Members
    Trigger is tick, but i'm sure you already know that. LOL.
  • CrouchingHamsterCrouchingHamster Join Date: 2002-08-17 Member: 1181Members
    Quite like that. Looks a bit like the unpopular but stylish SA-80's they issue to the British army.

    Not my sorta thing, but I'll bet it'll look cool when it's finished.
  • CaptainChetCaptainChet Join Date: 2003-04-21 Member: 15737Members, Constellation
    Thx for your opinions and comments. Here's pretty much the final model:

    <img src='http://home.earthlink.net/~ilink109/render2.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
  • DocterJDocterJ Join Date: 2003-04-09 Member: 15357Members
    edited May 2003
    I think the but and the actual body of the gun could use some more detail... it just looks flat. Otherwise, very good. Like the scope. Also take out the lines in the ammo clip, that should be skinned on to save poly count.
  • PFCNublarPFCNublar Join Date: 2003-04-23 Member: 15792Members
    i think that if you added some of those ventilation vents int he gun's barrel area in the submitted reference pics, it would greatly increase the model's "badass" factor.
  • WindelkronWindelkron Join Date: 2002-04-11 Member: 419Members
    yeah, take the polies out from the clip lines and make the ventilation holes in the barrel. That would pwn even more than this model is already pwning.
  • MalambisBZMalambisBZ Join Date: 2002-11-21 Member: 9559Members
    The scope and barrel should only have like 8 - 12 sides. Looks like they are 18+ on your picture.
  • CaptainChetCaptainChet Join Date: 2003-04-21 Member: 15737Members, Constellation
    Yea i think im gonna remake scope and TRY to make cuts in barrel (didnt work last time) and that should reduce poly count considerablly. Thx for the advice.
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