Unknown enemy: chapter 10

Rob

<div class="IPBDescription">Communication is essiential</div>Here's Chapter 10.  Many thanks to Merkaba for letting me use Hera!!  And lots more thanks to XTS_Highlander for the good and speedy review/proofread!!  Let me know what you think:

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pielemuis

it was a very good read, keep them comming d:)

XTS_Highlander

Rob and his writing, a regular storyteller genius!  <!--emo&:D--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':D'><!--endemo--> Can't wait to proofread chapter 11 for you buddy.

Comprox

Seen as I have played this map, it really added a LOT to the story for me. I got a very clear picture in my head on what was going on <!--emo&:)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'><!--endemo-->

*SPOILERS BELOW*
I really liked the mine sequence, guess you actually did some thinking to come up with that, heh. This one also seemed to...flow better, maybe cause boz had a good read with it, maybe because you knew the level more. I am also interested as why the charging level 5 stopped, got me intruiged!

Keep up the good work! I know Chapter 11 is soon, hurry up, I want to see more <!--emo&:asrifle:--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/asrifle.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':asrifle:'><!--endemo-->

Spyder_Monkey

Very nicely done again, Rob. I've given you all the comment on IRC that I have... not much to say on this chapter, but I'll be waiting patiently for the next installment... (as usual). <!--emo&:)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'><!--endemo-->

Rob

Thanks guys!  Keep em coming...please?

Spyder_Monkey

I've taken a private poll and we all agree that this whole "Cooper and Stone" thing needs to take a backseat to the "Mason and Zerik" thing. haha

humbaba

Cool stuff. First fan fic I read in a while. Cooper likes shottys. Cooper = Coolest character. mmm . . shottys. Good writiing all round.

Sgt_X

I could be wrong but I think u might be slightly biased. <!--emo&:p--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':p'><!--endemo-->

But he is the one in charge of building  <!--emo&:turret:--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/turret.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':turret:'><!--endemo--> s so thats a cool thing.

Kadreal

Hook it up with stone and cooper! woohoo!
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Spyder_Monkey

Stone ain't half as cute as Mason... at least in my mind.

/me drools <!--emo&:p--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/tounge.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':p'><!--endemo-->

Slycaster

mason = win!