Off Topic Fiction - Point Twelve
Lumberjack_Wannabe
Join Date: 2003-03-11 Member: 14404Members, Constellation
Join Date: 2003-03-11 Member: 14404Members, Constellation
<div class="IPBDescription">Something Out of Boredom</div> <!--emo&:0--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wow.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wow.gif'><!--endemo--> If your confuzzled... your not the only one. I just felt like writing today. Enjoy.
Charades and masquerades of light and steam poured unto the walkway. Darkness crept through the hallway, masking the hideous nature of the site. There, in front of the sea of depression, stood three hunched figures, cursing under their breath at the misfortune of the day. One of the figures suddenly turned and faced the others.
?This is where the signature came from? Seems like a hell hole ? a secluded part of this damnable space ship,? the figure said, with words of red. The figure sighed, looking around. ?Well,? said another figure, ?at least we get paid overtime for this. Maybe we could take another quick round.?
The light within the room suddenly shifted. All the figures quickly pulled out their weapons, searching around the room. Ghastly cries filled the room. Dimly lit laughter echoed through the hallway. Clashes of sinew and metal rang loudly, defying the light. Then it sunk into the figures? heads.
<i>The Hunters Become the Hunted</i>
?Stay cool. Fear will only escalade the situation. Call for reinforcements! Quick!?
<i>The Hunters Become the Hunted</i>
?It won?t go through! We?re friggin? screwed!?
<i>The Hunters Become the Hunted</i>
A shadowy fiend suddenly emerged from the misty depression ? its pitted, gleaming red eyes staring into infinity. One of the figures started firing at the fiend with its weapon. The fiend just smirked back. Surrounding the figures was blackness -blackness, the fiend, and its diabolical eyes.
Charades and masquerades of light and steam poured unto the hallway. The mist cleared, revealing bloody drag marks. Charred black cluttered the walkway. As the steam poured out again unto the walkway, a sign dangled from the ceiling. It read:
Welcome to Point Twelve
Security is Guaranteed
Charades and masquerades of light and steam poured unto the walkway. Darkness crept through the hallway, masking the hideous nature of the site. There, in front of the sea of depression, stood three hunched figures, cursing under their breath at the misfortune of the day. One of the figures suddenly turned and faced the others.
?This is where the signature came from? Seems like a hell hole ? a secluded part of this damnable space ship,? the figure said, with words of red. The figure sighed, looking around. ?Well,? said another figure, ?at least we get paid overtime for this. Maybe we could take another quick round.?
The light within the room suddenly shifted. All the figures quickly pulled out their weapons, searching around the room. Ghastly cries filled the room. Dimly lit laughter echoed through the hallway. Clashes of sinew and metal rang loudly, defying the light. Then it sunk into the figures? heads.
<i>The Hunters Become the Hunted</i>
?Stay cool. Fear will only escalade the situation. Call for reinforcements! Quick!?
<i>The Hunters Become the Hunted</i>
?It won?t go through! We?re friggin? screwed!?
<i>The Hunters Become the Hunted</i>
A shadowy fiend suddenly emerged from the misty depression ? its pitted, gleaming red eyes staring into infinity. One of the figures started firing at the fiend with its weapon. The fiend just smirked back. Surrounding the figures was blackness -blackness, the fiend, and its diabolical eyes.
Charades and masquerades of light and steam poured unto the hallway. The mist cleared, revealing bloody drag marks. Charred black cluttered the walkway. As the steam poured out again unto the walkway, a sign dangled from the ceiling. It read:
Welcome to Point Twelve
Security is Guaranteed
Comments
good work
I like the whole "hunters has become the hunted"
and even though it's not NS, it soooooooooo could be
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its a little bit too "Diablo II" fanfic like, in the alien description. but its still good. <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
who's hunting who, etc
I'm curious as to some minor details
and hey, if you don't know, just make something up <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
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One word... Tarik... (only TAK will get this so don't worry)
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anyway
i like it lumberjack. its short and sweet and leaves lots to my imagination
I thought that it was cool. It tells you just enough to get you interested. I hope there is more about Point Twelve... I like the Security is guaranteed thing. Nice bit of humor.
good point Vash
did your forum question get answered? <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
(no more hijacking this thread mmkay?)