Monster - Part 13

DeepShadowsDeepShadows Join Date: 2003-02-11 Member: 13408Members, Constellation
edited June 2003 in Fan-Fiction Forum
<div class="IPBDescription">Web page fixed too -</div> Hey. Part 13 is up. I uploaded it to my web page. Rather than repost it here, I'll just give you the direct link. All the other parts are updated too.

If you do take the time to read it, please put your comments here. The more, the better. Good, bad, all useful. Thanks a bunch! <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->


<a href='http://mobianwarrior.tripod.com/monster/part13.html' target='_blank'>Part - 13</a>




<a href='http://mobianwarrior.tripod.com/monster/main.html' target='_blank'>The general web page</a>
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  • MouseMouse The Lighter Side of Pessimism Join Date: 2002-03-02 Member: 263Members, NS1 Playtester, Forum Moderators, Squad Five Blue, Reinforced - Shadow, WC 2013 - Shadow
    I must say, Boom Jacket is such a damn cool name. The story is pretty damn good too.
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  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    good job on getting it fixed


    Rob probably would have hosted it on wayward, oh well


    nice work <!--emo&::marine::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/marine.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='marine.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • BadKarmaBadKarma The Advanced Literature monsters burned my house and gave me a 7 Join Date: 2002-11-12 Member: 8260Members
    Now that was one damn fine piece of writing. Have you ever read a book by Stephen King called Black House? There is a death scene that is very reminiscent of the one in your story. Your writing has a flavour that I enjoy very much. While im anxiously awaiting more, I despair because it will end eventually.
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  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    so Deepshadows. whats next?

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  • DeepShadowsDeepShadows Join Date: 2003-02-11 Member: 13408Members, Constellation
    Well, currently the aliens are completely blocked off from getting to the marines... but the marines are absent a comm chair and infantry portals. What's going to end up happening is the marines r going to have to venture upstairs, so to speak.... wait, why am I saying anything? There WILL be more, trust me: the story is not even half finished.


    btw, nobody ever has any critisisms.... why is that? the story can't be THAT good


    <!--emo&::asrifle::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/asrifle.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='asrifle.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&::nerdy::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/nerd.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='nerd.gif'><!--endemo--> Automatic grenade launcher?
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  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    *clears throat*

    the lerk fight amoung the hanging meat was good, and the skulk pushing the dead body was intersting as well

    this last chapter was action packed, and then this one just kinda ended the action without any action

    it was more of recap... <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • DeepShadowsDeepShadows Join Date: 2003-02-11 Member: 13408Members, Constellation
    Get over it <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    I think I shall

    [shameless plug]
    go read SE 5
    [/shameless plug]
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