Triton Force
Xiao
Join Date: 2003-03-18 Member: 14664Members
Join Date: 2003-03-18 Member: 14664Members
<div class="IPBDescription">Another Fan Fiction by Xiao</div> <!--emo&::asrifle::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/asrifle.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='asrifle.gif'><!--endemo--> <u>May 23, 2678 - 4:32PM</u> <!--emo&::asrifle::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/asrifle.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='asrifle.gif'><!--endemo-->
The crew felt a rumble as the Triton II set down on Monkana, the Kaharaa home world. The elite Triton Force was getting ready in the armory. Suiting up with Heavy Armor, Heavy Machine Guns and jetpacks, this team of elite marines was armed like a small army.
"OK troops, listen up." said Sgt. Gordon.
"We're about to storm Hive AC2 in the Kristop region of Monkana." he said.
"This is a very dangerous mission, but I have confidence in every one of you." he continued.
"If anyone is to <i>wimpy</i> to take this thing on, please say so now."
The armory was as quite as a graveyard. No one spoke a word.
"Alright then. Let's go!" yelled the Sarge.
There was a unanimous chorus of wooting from the marines.
A voice came over the intercom then and told the marines to get ready for deployment. The marines stood at the door, waiting for it to open. Not knowing what suprises lay on the other side of the door, they were nervous.
"DEPLOYMENT IN 5...4...3...2...1..."
When the doors opened on "1" it was a picture of horror. It was like a dejavu of D-Day Normandy. Immediately after exiting the ship, 2 men died. The troops found out that fades were attacking them from a cliff. They then got behind a large boulder to regroup. Two troops were missing. The fades continued to pound the marines unmercifully. What were they going to do?
TO BE CONTINUED
The crew felt a rumble as the Triton II set down on Monkana, the Kaharaa home world. The elite Triton Force was getting ready in the armory. Suiting up with Heavy Armor, Heavy Machine Guns and jetpacks, this team of elite marines was armed like a small army.
"OK troops, listen up." said Sgt. Gordon.
"We're about to storm Hive AC2 in the Kristop region of Monkana." he said.
"This is a very dangerous mission, but I have confidence in every one of you." he continued.
"If anyone is to <i>wimpy</i> to take this thing on, please say so now."
The armory was as quite as a graveyard. No one spoke a word.
"Alright then. Let's go!" yelled the Sarge.
There was a unanimous chorus of wooting from the marines.
A voice came over the intercom then and told the marines to get ready for deployment. The marines stood at the door, waiting for it to open. Not knowing what suprises lay on the other side of the door, they were nervous.
"DEPLOYMENT IN 5...4...3...2...1..."
When the doors opened on "1" it was a picture of horror. It was like a dejavu of D-Day Normandy. Immediately after exiting the ship, 2 men died. The troops found out that fades were attacking them from a cliff. They then got behind a large boulder to regroup. Two troops were missing. The fades continued to pound the marines unmercifully. What were they going to do?
TO BE CONTINUED
Comments
Develop your story
make it longer, add more characters, give background, go nuts!
nice work, let's see more of shall we?