Fan Fiction Comp

amckernamckern Join Date: 2003-03-03 Member: 14249Members, Constellation
edited July 2003 in Fan-Fiction Forum
<div class="IPBDescription">Win HL2, and subs to NS Constellation</div> <span style='color:red'><span style='font-size:14pt;line-height:100%'><span style='font-family:Arial'>The comp will be open for 7 more days, if you can't get your story done by then post your Work In Progress (WIP), and we will consider it, meaning that the comp will close on the 11th July 2003</span></span></span>

Hey there

The SP NS Team is running a comp for the story line of this NS add-on in the form of some Fan Fiction

<b>First prize is a copy of HL2, and paid subscription to the NS Constellation

While second and third winners get the choice of a copy of HL2, or official inclusion in the SP NS beta team</b>

The story must be of good spelling, and good grammar, though international ns community people can enter as long as they state that there first language is <b>not</b> English

<b>Rules</b>

Posting of full story’s can be made though if the story is longer then the 102400 Char limit of these forums, supply a link the either the forum post that you have, or a web url to the page on a web site, such as geocities

Winners will be notified by email - asking for postal address, so HL2, can be shipped from their local EB store (or if no local EB then <a href='http://dstore.com.au' target='_blank'>http://dstore.com.au</a> Australia will ship it for us)

The story <b>must</b> be of good spelling, and good grammar, though international ns community people can enter as long as they state that there first language is <b>not</b> English
So no teher instead of there

The more deatil in the story the more chance you have of wining, such as
"The APC, had 2 doors, one that opend show the drivers cabin, the other to show the Static Hibernation Pods, of the TNC. The APC Had rusted parts around the small hub caped wheels, and the roof had mold, so if you stod on it you where likely to fall off."

- the detail turns into what the APC in the map will look like, and also react like, so if stand on the roof, in the map, you would slip off the APC

Rules can change with out notice though rule changes will be posted here with in the first forum thread

<b>Guidelines</b> <i>thanks <b>SCARS</b></i>

well i think as far as the guidelines go:

its going to be a sp game and the whole idea us asking you people to write a story for us is so that we have a plot to follow, so its important that you don't just talk about feeling about going into battle etc.

basically what you say is how the game is going to be played, so we will need stuff like:
a location,
how the marines got there,
important areas to be noted when mapping,
and key events,
who the player is,

obviously your still writing a story, so im not saying give us a list of info (i hope no one is confused at this point) tell us what the enviroment is like and how it feels to be there, just think of it as inventing a game and include all the details that would be needed to create it. try and make it a bit more intresting than just one mission, otherwise you might as well be playin multiplayer, try and come up with a sequence of events, like the ship gets grounded and reinforcements must be called in! objectives! etc.

and its important to make sure the story can be expanded on incase for any reasons certain things cant be done or are limiting, eg. the game only lasts half and hour.

<b>Info</b>

To keep the latest news on SP NS, keep your eyes on this forum post - <a href='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/index.php?act=ST&f=4&t=31967' target='_blank'>http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/in...=ST&f=4&t=31967</a>

Or for major news updates, read up the <a href='http://www.commchair.com' target='_blank'>http://www.commchair.com</a>, and <a href='http://www.thehivemind.org' target='_blank'>http://www.thehivemind.org</a>

<b>ConCon</b>

So get your brain into gear, and the spell checker out, and start on a story line, get your self a free copy of half-life 2, and inclusion in the NS Constellation

amckern
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Comments

  • Mr_HeadcrabMr_Headcrab Squee&#33;~ Join Date: 2002-11-20 Member: 9392Members, Constellation
    !!! Wicked!

    /me opens up notepad and gets crackin'!
  • esunaesuna Rock Bottom Join Date: 2003-04-03 Member: 15175Members, Constellation
    One thing i might add, my 2c if you will, it's about "winning" a subscription to constellation. I somehow find this bad and wrong. Dispite the fact that Flayra's still getting the money, it's about personal sacrifice and contribution. And showing you're there and you want to help NS stay alive.

    By "winning" it, it proves nothing except that you just want that icon and don't much care for NS's survival.
  • tbZBeAsttbZBeAst Join Date: 2003-01-26 Member: 12755Members
    I think it shows that constellation memberhood is worth the effort.

    /me also opens DTP type stuff.
  • esunaesuna Rock Bottom Join Date: 2003-04-03 Member: 15175Members, Constellation
    Myself, i'm just going to shell out my £20 and feel all warm and glowy inside that i've actually made a sacrifice to help the game i love survive, and making a personal difference.

    To me, that's far better than winning some competition. It's almost as good as winning the cheese lottery.
  • amckernamckern Join Date: 2003-03-03 Member: 14249Members, Constellation
    edited June 2003
    EDIT

    changed prizes, to stop uneeded spam about the NS Const

    amckern
  • tbZBeAsttbZBeAst Join Date: 2003-01-26 Member: 12755Members
    edited June 2003
    A quick question - what are submission guidelines?

    /edit

    I'm disappointed constellation membership is no longer being offered. If I win (yeah right) can I have that instead of HL2?, and apologies if this is considered spam <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • esunaesuna Rock Bottom Join Date: 2003-04-03 Member: 15175Members, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin--amckern+Jun 24 2003, 08:26 AM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (amckern @ Jun 24 2003, 08:26 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> EDIT

    changed prizes, to stop uneeded spam about the NS Const

    amckern <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    I'm not spamming about it. But do sit back and think logically here. It's supposed to be a donation. How can you win a donation?
  • tbZBeAsttbZBeAst Join Date: 2003-01-26 Member: 12755Members
    You can win Amkern paying for your donation - as above its a good motivator for me, at least.
  • BogglesteinskyBogglesteinsky Join Date: 2002-12-24 Member: 11488Members
    there is a mention of the constellation near the end of your post, you had better get rid of that as well
  • SpiritMasterSpiritMaster Join Date: 2002-11-07 Member: 7580Members, Reinforced - Shadow
    edited June 2003
    the link for TheHiveMind.Org is entered as TheHiveMind.Com on your first post, and as such doesnt work.
  • Lumberjack_WannabeLumberjack_Wannabe Join Date: 2003-03-11 Member: 14404Members, Constellation
    One question. What are you looking for in a story line?
  • Jerry1Jerry1 Join Date: 2003-06-18 Member: 17453Members
    Hmm, I'll think about it.

    Obviously the stories will have to have the limits of what the modders can actually do, in mind.

    IN a way, I think you people would be better off waiting for HL2.
  • Iced_EagleIced_Eagle Borg Engineer Join Date: 2003-03-02 Member: 14218Members
    edited June 2003
    I am writing one right now. There better not be a length limit <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> so we dont get constellation then???

    Edit: My story can be found <a href='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/index.php?act=ST&f=6&t=36281&st=0&#entry491362' target='_blank'>here</a> I can make revisions and such if you like.

    Edit2: my email address is briguy992@sbcglobal.net and please do not spam that you guys.
  • tbZBeAsttbZBeAst Join Date: 2003-01-26 Member: 12755Members
    Blimey, I'm at 873 words already, and nothing has happened yet.

    Again, are there submission guidelines?
  • Foxtrot_UniformFoxtrot_Uniform Join Date: 2003-06-12 Member: 17328Members
    edited June 2003
    Shouldn't there be a sign up somewhere?

    I think they should have an official sign up.

    I'm in.]
  • ParhelionParhelion Join Date: 2003-05-29 Member: 16821Members, NS1 Playtester
    Hmm, I have read through the SP NS thread and this one, and I still don’t have a definitive idea of what you’re looking for. Is it a background story for a map or campaign? Is it a general overview delving into the past of the TSA/Kharaa confrontation? Is it an actual story, like the <a href='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/index.php?act=ST&f=6&t=33417' target='_blank'>one</a> I have begun already?

    Subject to what you want, and depending on the time I can spare, I’ll think about it.
  • Lumberjack_WannabeLumberjack_Wannabe Join Date: 2003-03-11 Member: 14404Members, Constellation
    edited June 2003
    <!--QuoteBegin--Parhelion+Jun 25 2003, 08:04 AM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Parhelion @ Jun 25 2003, 08:04 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Hmm, I have read through the SP NS thread and this one, and I still don’t have a definitive idea of what you’re looking for.  Is it a background story for a map or campaign?  Is it a general overview delving into the past of the TSA/Kharaa confrontation?  Is it an actual story, like the <a href='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/index.php?act=ST&f=6&t=33417' target='_blank'>one</a> I have begun already?

    <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    The exact same question I was asking...
    Do we do it like a script, story, or background?
  • Iced_EagleIced_Eagle Borg Engineer Join Date: 2003-03-02 Member: 14218Members
    it says a storyline for SP so.... look at other story lines so you at least know what you are writing... im not sure if mine is even applicable but again please check it out <a href='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/index.php?act=ST&f=6&t=36281&st=0&#entry491362' target='_blank'>here</a>
  • scarsscars Join Date: 2002-11-02 Member: 5147Members
    edited June 2003
    <b>well i think as far as the guidelines go:</b>

    its going to be a sp game and the whole idea us asking you people to write a story for us is so that we have a plot to follow, so its important that you don't just talk about feeling about going into battle etc.

    <b>basically what you say is how the game is going to be played, so we will need stuff like:</b>
    a location,
    how the marines got there,
    important areas to be noted when mapping,
    and key events,
    who the player is,

    obviously your still writing a story, so im not saying give us a list of info (i hope no one is confused at this point) tell us what the enviroment is like and how it feels to be there, just think of it as inventing a game and include all the details that would be needed to create it. try and make it a bit more intresting than just one mission, otherwise you might as well be playin multiplayer, try and come up with a sequence of events, like the ship gets grounded and reinforcements must be called in! objectives! etc.

    and its important to make sure the story can be expanded on incase for any reasons certain things cant be done or are limiting, eg. the game only lasts half and hour.

    i hope that helps a bit, obviously i cant speak for amckern im not sure exactly what his guidelines would be but i think the above would apply <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • amckernamckern Join Date: 2003-03-03 Member: 14249Members, Constellation
    scars hit the nail on the head

    sorry but this is the 1st time i have ever had a team to work with, and bein g team leader, is kinda hard for first timers

    but i will add scars post to the rules section as guidelines

    amckern
  • Foxtrot_UniformFoxtrot_Uniform Join Date: 2003-06-12 Member: 17328Members
    Wow... Ok this is so different than i expected. Ok so it's gonne be a game. Gotcha. Time to write.
  • Iced_EagleIced_Eagle Borg Engineer Join Date: 2003-03-02 Member: 14218Members
    lmao that was the whole point of it... a storyline for SP (singleplayer) NS (natural-Selection) <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> there u go if u dont understand the lingo
  • ParhelionParhelion Join Date: 2003-05-29 Member: 16821Members, NS1 Playtester
    edited June 2003
    <!--QuoteBegin--briguy992+Jun 26 2003, 01:18 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (briguy992 @ Jun 26 2003, 01:18 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> lmao that was the whole point of it... a storyline for SP (singleplayer) NS (natural-Selection) <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> there u go if u dont understand the lingo <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    I am aware of what the acronym ?SP NS? stands for ? I was not, however, aware of what is expected from amckern and the other developers. It seems rather strange that you would want us to write the story for you, rather than you having an idea of what you want, and having us write the background story for the scenario/campaign.

    A full storyline, complete with intricate description and an extended plot would take a very long time to write, especially with your focus on detail and ?invention of a game?. I?m not saying it can?t be done, of course, but the time invested (for what appears to be no significant outcome) doesn?t seem worth it. I think that it?s easier for your mappers and development team to create the game, make up a preliminary design of the maps (with screenshots for ambience and layout) and then tell us precisely what you expect.

    I apologise for my insistence ? at present, your expectations are too wishy-washy for my liking, and I would appreciate it if you could clarify a few points of concern and give us more detailed instructions.
  • amckernamckern Join Date: 2003-03-03 Member: 14249Members, Constellation
    ! :? #$%^&!

    takes short 1 day vaction from SP NS i need time out

    i will look back on this later, but you are right, i should have thought of that b4!
    (about time ^^^)

    u c n00b team leads are bad, when they don't know what to do, i might talk to the pr dude, and see if he can help me out of this hole

    amckern
  • ParhelionParhelion Join Date: 2003-05-29 Member: 16821Members, NS1 Playtester
    No problems <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--> If you like, take some time off, think everything through in slightly more detail when you get back, and then let us know what you?ve decided on. There?s no real urgency to write, so just keep us updated periodically <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • tseepratseepra Join Date: 2002-12-11 Member: 10530Members
    Whats the deadline?
  • amckernamckern Join Date: 2003-03-03 Member: 14249Members, Constellation
    open at this stage

    amckern
  • TrojanTrojan Join Date: 2002-11-02 Member: 4611Members
    I'm up for it <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

    Just need to do some exams, then I got a fair few weeks of free time.

    A few questions though, NPC's? How about any character development? All ingame, or are you including any cut-scenes?

    Sure to be some more questions to come <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • scarsscars Join Date: 2002-11-02 Member: 5147Members
    theres gunna be NPC's im sure, obviously your squad members and i think having civilians in there would be pretty cool as well but that will depend on your story line, I dont think we can say either way if there will be cutscenes or not, thats something that can be looked at later on, so i wouldnt concern yourself with it because im sure we can work with both! <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • CrystalSnakeCrystalSnake Join Date: 2002-01-27 Member: 110Members
    <!--QuoteBegin--amckern+Jun 24 2003, 12:25 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (amckern @ Jun 24 2003, 12:25 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->The story must be of good spelling, and good grammar, though international ns community people can enter as long as they state that there first language is <b>not</b> English
    <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    I found a spelling mistake:
    "as long as they state that <span style='color:red'>there</span> first language is not English"
    (English is my second language)
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