Cataclysm

spinviperspinviper Join Date: 2003-05-08 Member: 16151Members
edited June 2003 in Fan-Fiction Forum
<div class="IPBDescription">When Starcraft and NS combine</div> The Zerg and the Kharra have formed an alliance.

The joint forces of the TSA and the Outer Rim Marines Have pushed them back to Planet Zer'Kha, the aliens last stand. The fate of Mankind Depends on this Battle.


<b><span style='color:red'> <span style='font-size:14pt;line-height:100%'> Thus the Cataclysm begins.......</span></span></b>





Comments on intro pls <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • spinviperspinviper Join Date: 2003-05-08 Member: 16151Members
    <span style='color:green'> "I am General Zayl. I will be leading the offensive on planet Zer'Kha." "You boys are the finest the TSA and the Outer Rim Marines have to offer. You shall be forming a special forces group called BlackStorm." "And I shall be the leader of that group." I said There was several snorts of dissaproval from the team. "Just to let you know, I am an ex-RavenClaw, ex-TigerShark, ex-Black Panther member"I replied. There were taken by surpirse. RavenClaw was an Elite Air and Space attack group, TigerShark was an Elite UnderWater Attack force and Black Panther was an Elite Ground attack force. " Hudson and Tiber you have been chosen for your skills as an Field Engineer, Karma, Leon and Jack you have been chosen for your skills fighting both the Kharra and the Zerg. Raistlin, Caramon and I are all rounders, skilled in everything.



    "The Boys in the R&D Lab have cooked up some stuff for us." "This is the Gauss Rifle II , it has 16 MM Titanium X tipped Spikes. Once they hit they also release Anti-Bacterium nanobots into the targets system." "And over here is the Devesator 3 sidearm, its basicly a standard TSA pistol fitted with a laser sight and 6mm Anubis slugs" "Oh and before I forget each clip features sate of the art <i>LimitLess</i> Tecnology basicly a mini black hole allowing you to place massive amounts of ammo in each clip"</span>
  • spinviperspinviper Join Date: 2003-05-08 Member: 16151Members
    edited June 2003
    "As for the armour you shall be wearing the Powered Combat suite MK II. It features Stim Pack/Medpack injection system, Life Support, Motion and audio tracking, Auto Targeting Systems,Infra Red, Nightvision, Neural Enhancement System, AI implementation, and right out of the R&D labs Shield Tecnology so it can sustain Massive amounts of dammage"





    <b>UNFINISHED WILL CONTINUE I SUDDENLY FEEL REALLY TIRED</b>


    EDIT: OMG ITS 2 AM NO WOUNDER!!!
  • PFCNublarPFCNublar Join Date: 2003-04-23 Member: 15792Members
    edited June 2003
    fack! poor hydralisks/fades! they are gonna get pwned good!
    ...
    and only because my male ego organ is really **** me to do this. i don't mean it but i can't resist

    <span style='font-size:21pt;line-height:100%'>4hhh! jo0 H4X0R! I+"S mEH 1DE4! Meh 1d34 9O+ H4x0RED! </span>
    <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> j/k its nice, but i don't htink these forums like the starcraft/ns mix <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo--> look at my story, chapter 4 and its pretty empty <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    hey delta already had this idea (never would have guessed that)

    the NS/starcraft fusions are a nice twist on these forums

    keep pounding them out
  • spinviperspinviper Join Date: 2003-05-08 Member: 16151Members
    edited June 2003
    Karma you and Leon will be using the <b><i>Chaos</i></b> FireBat Heavy Support Suite, featuring Perdition <i><b>Plasma FlameThrower</b></i> and Dual Valves allowing you to switch between the plasma flamethrower and an Anti-Biotic Foam, supercharged with Anti-Bacterium nanobots. "And now for our trainning" I said rubbing my hands. "Training? What Training? You yourself said we were the best of the best! We dont need training!" "Oh yes you will with your new physically augmented body!"I replied. At this I quickly put on my gas mask on and pushed the button to release the sleeping gas. All of them dropped to the floor in deep unatural sleep................
  • spinviperspinviper Join Date: 2003-05-08 Member: 16151Members
    edited June 2003
    Each Team Member including me was put in a MedTank to undergo our Physical Alteration........



    <i>1. Carbide ceramic ossification: advanced material grafting onto skeletal structures to make bones virtually un-breakable.

    2. Muscular enhancement injections: protein complex is injected intramuscularly to increase tissue density and decrease lactase recovery time.

    3. Catalytic thyroid implant: platinum pellet containing human growth hormone catalyst is implanted in the thyroid to boost growth of skeletal and muscle tissues.

    4. Occipital capilliary reversal: submergence and boosted blood vessel flow beneath the rods and cones of subject's retina. Produces a marked visual perception increase.


    5. Superconducting fibrification of neural dendrites: alteration of bioelectrical nerve transduction to shielded electronic transduction. Three hundred percent increase in subjects reflexes. Nerual increase in subjects intelligence, memory and creativity.

    6. Neural-modification: Optimum use of subject's oxygen intake. Allowing subject to stay alive without oxygen intake for longer peridods of time.</i>


    <span style='font-size:21pt;line-height:100%'>HOW IS STORY SO FAR???</span>
  • spinviperspinviper Join Date: 2003-05-08 Member: 16151Members
    BUMP... some 1 post!!!
  • PFCNublarPFCNublar Join Date: 2003-04-23 Member: 15792Members
    its good <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->. But lets to the story already...this is nice and all, but i would like to see some character action <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--> good work. some creative stuff.
  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    sweet

    I saw the word flame thrower ^_^

    looks to be good, lets have some more
  • spinviperspinviper Join Date: 2003-05-08 Member: 16151Members
    <u>The Approach</u>

    The <i>USS Pertheon</i>. My personal ship. It is a<i> Merzon </i>class ship, the latest. It is a cross-breed between a Destroyer and a Carrier. The ship also was fitted with the latest of reactor technology. The Pertheon was the first ship to get it. The two smaller fusion reactors come online to supercharge the main reactor. Their overlapping magnetic fields can temporally boost power by three hundred percent. There are also no coolant pipes. The reactor uses a laser-induced optical slurry of ions chilled to near-abosolute zero to neutralize the waste heat. The more we crank up the power, the more juice we have to cool the system. It is very efficient.

    For weponry it has five <i>Cataclyist</i> nuclear-warheads , 40 <i>Malice</i> anti-matter missile pods, fifteen <i>Hyleon </i>heavy pulse cannons customized so they are hidden within the ship's hull , 80 seventy-millimeter cannons for point defence and sixty medium pulse turrets.

    For its armour it had three layers of Titanium A reinforced plates and heavily improved shield technology. Should the shields fail, the ship will activate a defence matrix, thus minimising damage.


    The assault fleet was the largest in humankind's history, hundreds of battlecrusiers, carriers including the <i>USS Pertheon</i>.
    <i>Zer'Kha </i>had been bombarded for over a week now. Salvo after salvo of nuclear missiles detonated on <i>Zer'Kha</i> in hopes to soften the aliens defences. As the assault fleet neared <i>Zer'Kha</i> they launched serveral reconnaissance probes to check out their aerial defences. But the probes did not return suggesting massive resistance............
  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    hmmm this looks to be good, I would watch out, to go to OMG WE HAVE HUGE WEAPONS crazy, just be sure to check yourself, but you did a good job, keep up the work

    can I have a free plug in your thread?

    (go read SE)
    ~_^
  • spinviperspinviper Join Date: 2003-05-08 Member: 16151Members
    Which one?<!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif'><!--endemo--> gimme linky!! im LAAZY!! <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • spinviperspinviper Join Date: 2003-05-08 Member: 16151Members
    Why no one besides Kid and Terran posts here? Is my work all for nothing?<!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif'><!--endemo-->



    Or is it The SCORPIAN THAT HOVARS WITHOUT FLYING!!!!!!!
  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    lots of people post here....

    <a href='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/index.php?act=ST&f=6&t=36405' target='_blank'>SE six</a>

    if you want to actually read the other chapters you can check out hte offical release topic that is stickied

    ^_^

    thanks for the plug
  • spinviperspinviper Join Date: 2003-05-08 Member: 16151Members
    edited June 2003
    Removed da scorpians that HOVAR WITHOUT Flying... erm i mean flappin....
  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    I take it you found <i>the thread</i>

    -_- that has lost interest with me becuase smart_bomb has returned and is trying to gain from his stupidity, thats the only reason I try not to hovar much these days, it's still pretty funny though
  • Lumberjack_WannabeLumberjack_Wannabe Join Date: 2003-03-11 Member: 14404Members, Constellation
    It was a fairly good read. Just thought that you gave the soldiers way too much firepower.
  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin--Lumberjack Wannabe+Jun 26 2003, 11:54 AM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Lumberjack Wannabe @ Jun 26 2003, 11:54 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> It was a fairly good read. Just thought that you gave the soldiers way too much firepower. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    see, me and lumberjack are both =/ at the prospect of insane amounts of firepower

    but it's totally up to you becuase it's your story
  • Lumberjack_WannabeLumberjack_Wannabe Join Date: 2003-03-11 Member: 14404Members, Constellation
    Yeah, I agree with TAK. Just don't give 'em too much... like low yield auto nuke cannons. That sort of overdoes it.
  • PFCNublarPFCNublar Join Date: 2003-04-23 Member: 15792Members
    and don't *under any circumstances* give them scorpians that hovar witout flaping to ride~!!!!11oneone

    they will be too powerful, with the powah of teh scorpian that hovars witout flapineh! <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • 343_guilty_spark343_guilty_spark Join Date: 2003-06-18 Member: 17462Members
    no super power weapons, like a 100 round machine gun that shoots nukes and has a fax machine on it with a toaster aswell
    also i don't really like the idea of star craft and NS mixing together
  • ElectricSheepElectricSheep Join Date: 2003-04-21 Member: 15716Members
    <b>
    <Excerpts from the "History of Battleroids">

    In 2194, a war was fought between the Independent Asteroid
    Government of Icarus and its neighbor, the Republic of
    Thermopylae on the asteroid of Onicis 492. These two small
    governments soon became the testing grounds for new weapons.
    Dead soldiers were recycled in makeshift battleroid factories.
    Easy to manufacture chips enhanced the fragile human brain,
    and genetically enhanced muscles and titanium bones replaced
    the fragile human form. The modern battleroid was born. Of
    course, the war was short. Battleroids got onto both
    asteroids and killed almost everyone.

    The rampage of the Battleroid was short lived.

    Twenty years later, the United Interplanetary League set up
    rules for the appropriate use and storage of Battleroids. Of
    course, any nation that used them for the allowed purpose,
    also had them lying about in stasis chambers in case of war.</b>

    From Marathon its alot like ur enchancement thing.
  • PFCNublarPFCNublar Join Date: 2003-04-23 Member: 15792Members
    oh come on guys...don't discourage him. we'll see how this story plays out before we start to really give critisism. we're still in the prolouge areas and your clicking the "fire flame cannon" button till your hearts explode. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--> not very nice <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    hehe, it's his story and he can do with it as he pleases <i>but</i> if he snaps into massive overkill mode some people might be =/


    so when exactly is there going to be the next installment?
  • spinviperspinviper Join Date: 2003-05-08 Member: 16151Members
    Dont worry ill at a twist <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->........
  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    ad a twist?

    you speak bush speak

    bush speak hard understand


    <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • spinviperspinviper Join Date: 2003-05-08 Member: 16151Members
    I mean ill ADD a twist!
  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    thats what I thought


    I anxiously wait to see what it is
  • spinviperspinviper Join Date: 2003-05-08 Member: 16151Members
    edited June 2003
    Heres the action! <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

    <i>The Engagement</i>
    The multaisk's Glave Wurms ripped through layers of titanium plating of the USS DeathBringer, it had multiple deck breaches and most of the crew had already escaped. Another ship down, this unacceptable! "Regroup!" "and give em hell!"

    From out of no where a swarm of multaisks flanked USS Lunitari, her pulse turrets ripping through carapace like a hot knife throught butter. She was sustaining multiple hull breaches, LifePods jettisoning form her. A group of multaisks launched their glave wurms at the general area of her reactor, cutting through a reinforced layer of titanium A plating. She Exploded. "Damn!" "Sir, sensors picking up more alien life forms on the way" "Hey wait a mintue! Sir i think you better take a look at this" A single Protoss Arbiter appeared on the sensors. "When theres an Arbiter theres sure to be a whole goddam army"I said. As to futher my words, 10 Protoss carriers <b>backed up</b> with hundereds of scouts un-cloaked.

    The protoss Carrier Per'Zhol hailed us. "Put them on mainscreen"
    "May I be of accistance General?" asked Ze'Kohn "Sure hell you will"I said grinning

    Ze'Kohn was a friend of mine. We have fought together againts the Zerg many times. "Just like old times
    huh?"I said
    The protoss carriers released their unmaned attack craft, to support the protoss scouts who were already engaging the multaisks firering their dual photon cannons.

    With the help of the protoss we wiped out the entire swarm that attacked us. Gaining a vital foothole we called in reinforcements and started preperations for the ground assault........


    Edited! Added more depth hope u like it!
  • spinviperspinviper Join Date: 2003-05-08 Member: 16151Members
    edited June 2003
    <!--QuoteBegin--Lumberjack Wannabe+Jun 26 2003, 02:51 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Lumberjack Wannabe @ Jun 26 2003, 02:51 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> like low yield auto nuke cannons. <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    They dont have auto nuke cannons!!! are you crazy??? I said WARHEADS 5 of them.... not AUTO NUKE CANNONS!!!
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