Unknown enemy: chapter 11

Rob

<div class="IPBDescription">Evil makes a  comeback</div>After running this by Highlander twice and letting him do a bang up job editing (I'll be damned if I can find mistakes like that), then on to Merkaba for the Hera test read, then to Flay for the final words on some parts, Chapter 11 if ready!  Phew...

So, let me know what you think:
<a href="http://hive.readyroom.org/writing/ue/ue.html" target="_blank">http://hive.readyroom.org/writing/ue/ue.html</a>

Sgt_X

My god that was an interesting twist. U need to make ur chapters longer.  <!--emo&:D--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':D'><!--endemo-->

BTW ur stories probably going to steal plublicity from mine, and it's already had no posts in the tread i posted the link in, but urs is better.

Trane

hey man dont leave us hangin like that!!!! lol, very good stuff

CyonPro

Wow, I had to do a lot of catch-up reading to understand what was going on in this chapter <!--emo&:)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'><!--endemo-->

Great work rob, I love the way you've tied Hera into the whole thing too.

Rob

Thanks guys!

XTS_Highlander

/me huggles rob

Spyder_Monkey

Damn this boy can write...

<span style='color:"black"'>Good god, Rob. I'm sorry this took me so long to get to. Amazingly done. I loved the explanation of the different ammo types, very well-thought out... at least in theory. I've been waiting for Victor's return for awhile now, and I couldn't have ever imagined it would be quite this intense. One thing I will tell you is this... if Mason dies, I will strangle you... a lot. I still have a chill running down my back from the Zerik/Victor showdown. <!--emo&:)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'><!--endemo--> You rock.</span>

So, in closing. Well done, keep it up. <!--emo&:)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'><!--endemo-->



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Rob

Thanks High, Spyder,

**Spoilers**

<span style='color:"#222222"'>I'd been thinking about those bullet and carapace ideas for awhile now, but I wasn't sure if they'd be believable.  You can ask high how frantic I was about making them sound real enough.  It's good to know they're at least half-way understandable and believeable! <!--emo&:)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'><!--endemo--></span>