Technological Genocide

AfrixAfrix Join Date: 2003-07-03 Member: 17910Members
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<div class="IPBDescription">Chapter 0ne</div> Im got bored this summer hoilday, so I've produced the first chapter of a story, please comment on it.

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  • Iced_EagleIced_Eagle Borg Engineer Join Date: 2003-03-02 Member: 14218Members
    <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--> good read... cant wait for the next chapters
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  • GlissGliss Join Date: 2003-03-23 Member: 14800Members, Constellation, NS2 Map Tester
    <!--QuoteBegin--briguy992+Jul 3 2003, 01:28 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (briguy992 @ Jul 3 2003, 01:28 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--> good read... cant wait for the next chapters <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Yeah, me either.
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  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    I recall one typo, but it's inconsequencial

    I'm waiting anxiously for the next chapter
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  • GlissGliss Join Date: 2003-03-23 Member: 14800Members, Constellation, NS2 Map Tester
    <!--QuoteBegin--That Annoying Kid+Jul 4 2003, 12:39 AM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (That Annoying Kid @ Jul 4 2003, 12:39 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> I recall one typo, but it's inconsequencial <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    That's a typo, too! Inconsequencialis'nt a word! Pwndid.
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  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin--Pjofsky+Jul 4 2003, 12:41 AM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Pjofsky @ Jul 4 2003, 12:41 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin--That Annoying Kid+Jul 4 2003, 12:39 AM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (That Annoying Kid @ Jul 4 2003, 12:39 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> I recall one typo, but it's inconsequencial <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    That's a typo, too! Inconsequencialis'nt a word! Pwndid. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    I was making a play on the fact that they typo didn't matter just as my misspelling didn't as well, as long as the message is gotten across it's fine
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  • GlissGliss Join Date: 2003-03-23 Member: 14800Members, Constellation, NS2 Map Tester
    <!--QuoteBegin--That Annoying Kid+Jul 4 2003, 12:52 AM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (That Annoying Kid @ Jul 4 2003, 12:52 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin--Pjofsky+Jul 4 2003, 12:41 AM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Pjofsky @ Jul 4 2003, 12:41 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin--That Annoying Kid+Jul 4 2003, 12:39 AM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (That Annoying Kid @ Jul 4 2003, 12:39 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> I recall one typo, but it's inconsequencial <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    That's a typo, too! Inconsequencialis'nt a word! Pwndid. <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    I was making a play on the fact that they typo didn't matter just as my misspelling didn't as well, as long as the message is gotten across it's fine <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    You don't even make sense!
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  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin--Pjofsky+Jul 5 2003, 07:28 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Pjofsky @ Jul 5 2003, 07:28 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin--That Annoying Kid+Jul 4 2003, 12:52 AM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (That Annoying Kid @ Jul 4 2003, 12:52 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin--Pjofsky+Jul 4 2003, 12:41 AM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Pjofsky @ Jul 4 2003, 12:41 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin--That Annoying Kid+Jul 4 2003, 12:39 AM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (That Annoying Kid @ Jul 4 2003, 12:39 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> I recall one typo, but it's inconsequencial <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    That's a typo, too! Inconsequencialis'nt a word! Pwndid. <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    I was making a play on the fact that they typo didn't matter just as my misspelling didn't as well, as long as the message is gotten across it's fine <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    You don't even make sense! <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    least I'm not eleven <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
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