His face and hairstyle are great, his clothes are good too. You need to work on drawing the body though, download reference pictures or checkout an anatomy book from the library. Most of the muscles are off target and some folds of skin seem to be out of place because he is young.
Colour it if you want <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> Thanks for the comments!
<!--QuoteBegin--Beast+Jul 14 2003, 05:48 AM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Beast @ Jul 14 2003, 05:48 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> part of his head looks a little slanted <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd--> Looks more like he has a raised eyebrow (hes being a cocky marine ****!).
<!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--QuoteBegin--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->His legs look a little too straight.<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd--> Generally your legs are straight if you're stood up <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> If you mean they are drawn too straight, I'd have to disagree. His left leg is fromt straight on, so it would be pretty straight, seen asthough he is wearing baggy trousers. His right like shows some basic contours, thigh and calf.
<!--QuoteBegin--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->Bah! I just don't like the way he looks at me combined with his fly being open ...<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd--> The way he looks is just the style of the character <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> Plus his flies are open because as somebody mentioned, he's getting dressed/undressed after/before a battle.
Not meant to sound bitchy, because all comments are welcome. I just wanted to clarrify a little <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
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Nice style too.
Looks more like he has a raised eyebrow (hes being a cocky marine ****!).
Generally your legs are straight if you're stood up <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> If you mean they are drawn too straight, I'd have to disagree. His left leg is fromt straight on, so it would be pretty straight, seen asthough he is wearing baggy trousers. His right like shows some basic contours, thigh and calf.
<!--QuoteBegin--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->Bah! I just don't like the way he looks at me combined with his fly being open ...<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
The way he looks is just the style of the character <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> Plus his flies are open because as somebody mentioned, he's getting dressed/undressed after/before a battle.
Not meant to sound bitchy, because all comments are welcome. I just wanted to clarrify a little <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
And yeah, I think he looks great (technically speaking, of course.)