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kawak
Join Date: 2003-01-11 Member: 12160Members, Constellation
<div class="IPBDescription">work in progress</div> Hello!
First, sorry for my english i'm french.
After 2 ns maps not finished due to multiple problems, i'm glad to say that the third one is on the good way. The map is about 60% done and this time no problem with planes/clipnodes/etc..'s limit.
Here is some screens:
<img src='http://membres.lycos.fr/kawaak/ns/nscreen01.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
Corridor next to marine start
<img src='http://membres.lycos.fr/kawaak/ns/nscreen02.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
same corridor but from the other side
<img src='http://membres.lycos.fr/kawaak/ns/nscreen03.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
the crossroad (elevator on the right side)
<img src='http://membres.lycos.fr/kawaak/ns/nscreen05.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
<img src='http://membres.lycos.fr/kawaak/ns/nscreen06.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
(maybe another crate's texture later)
<img src='http://membres.lycos.fr/kawaak/ns/nscreen07.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
<img src='http://membres.lycos.fr/kawaak/ns/nscreen08.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
(little prob with the gamma on this screen)
<img src='http://membres.lycos.fr/kawaak/ns/nscreen09.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
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<img src='http://membres.lycos.fr/kawaak/ns/nscreen10.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
And that's all, any comments are welcome <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
First, sorry for my english i'm french.
After 2 ns maps not finished due to multiple problems, i'm glad to say that the third one is on the good way. The map is about 60% done and this time no problem with planes/clipnodes/etc..'s limit.
Here is some screens:
<img src='http://membres.lycos.fr/kawaak/ns/nscreen01.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
Corridor next to marine start
<img src='http://membres.lycos.fr/kawaak/ns/nscreen02.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
same corridor but from the other side
<img src='http://membres.lycos.fr/kawaak/ns/nscreen03.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
the crossroad (elevator on the right side)
<img src='http://membres.lycos.fr/kawaak/ns/nscreen05.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
<img src='http://membres.lycos.fr/kawaak/ns/nscreen06.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
(maybe another crate's texture later)
<img src='http://membres.lycos.fr/kawaak/ns/nscreen07.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
<img src='http://membres.lycos.fr/kawaak/ns/nscreen08.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
(little prob with the gamma on this screen)
<img src='http://membres.lycos.fr/kawaak/ns/nscreen09.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
<!--emo&::skulk::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/skulk.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='skulk.gif'><!--endemo-->
<img src='http://membres.lycos.fr/kawaak/ns/nscreen10.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
And that's all, any comments are welcome <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
Comments
The only thing I didn't like was the inapropriate use of hazard stripes.
Looks very promising and well done map.
I think caged when I look at it.
I don't want to reapeat how good it is so I try some critics. Well nothing major but could you reallign that texture on the first pic? It is the lower one on the left wall. The top of the texture is cut off. And so it looks. It would look perfect with some details showing of the border of the metal panels. Like those dark stripes that go up from the floor every few meters.
Keep up the good work!
Excellent stuff, great atmosphere. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
Hohooo
Finish that
Turn them down alittle.
For papercutt, i gonna change the lighting in there (but i gonna increase them..).
For KungFuDiscoMonkey, thanks for the bast compliment. i have a lots of inspiration from ns_Bast (1 of the best looking ns map for me) ..But i have some others inspirations too (like aliens movie).
The map is a kind of colony (or outpost). There isnt any backstory for the moment, gonna think for it at the end..
For chromeangel, i gonna post the layout later (i have to "clean" it up before).For the hazard stripes That didnt "shock" me, but u are right. maybe i gonna change thoses textures.
Sorry if i dont answer to all, but it's hard for me to wright in english.. <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif'><!--endemo-->
Thanks again <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->