A Skulk's Memories

Stakhanov

<div class="IPBDescription">Deep investigations in the Kharaa mind</div> This story has been mostly thought out during vacation , parts of it may not be as brilliant as expected (too lazy to actually write it down)
It is meant as the inverse of Macguyvok's beautiful and sad story where an enslaved underling expresses its nostalgia of the innocent old times. This time the minions are perfectly happy with their bacterial colleagues and form some sort of brotherhod.

Vragnor

9/10
+ Great point of view
+ Great story line

- The format was a little distracting (all that time scrolling left to right)

PFCNublar

Very nice POV. One of the more original ones with nice effort.

Bogglesteinsky

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open it, select all, copy.

go into notepad, paste Edit--> wordwrap

sorted

its a very nice story, especially when he parasites the jp+hmg to death

Stakhanov

Thanks for the feedback !... come to think it just needed a bit of pimping.

I should have found a way to host this , .txt file isn't the best format indeed...

Next story will involve n00b aliens who failed the Kharaa cause <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->

Deathclaw

Great story.

Sarisel

Very interesting. Perhaps work a bit on organization and flow of the story.

nooby

different format would be better, keep it up.

Foxtrot_Uniform

Very interesting indeed. Parts sounded less like an alien's point of view, however, but overall, great writing.