My Map: Ns_labs

Silencer9Silencer9 Candidate for B.Sc. Join Date: 2003-08-05 Member: 18967Members, Reinforced - Shadow
edited August 2003 in Mapping Forum
<div class="IPBDescription">does it look good</div> Sorry because the not so clean picture! But, does this look good for my map?!?!?! <!--emo&:0--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wow.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wow.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • KalopsiaKalopsia Join Date: 2003-05-15 Member: 16331Members, Reinforced - Shadow
    cant really tell you much as it is only a vent...
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  • esunaesuna Rock Bottom Join Date: 2003-04-03 Member: 15175Members, Constellation
    If that's just a vent, yeah, sure, it looks fine.

    Otherwise, if that's a corridor i would suggest you spend a lot more time on the lighting, texturing and architecture in general. The textures of the walls and the floor are mismatched and don't "go" well together. The lighing is rather boring and the orange shade is pretty hideous, inmho. The architecture is bland and boring, no detail whatsoever. If this is just a vent you can disregard all of those points since they don't really matter, but, just but, if it is a corridor, it needs a lot of work.
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  • NazulNazul Join Date: 2002-11-17 Member: 9052Members
    wow cool , i would love to play that <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo--> nahh it lokes fine for a vent... show more of ns_labs
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  • NayNay Join Date: 2002-06-09 Member: 741Members
    Is this acutally a vent or a room?
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  • aegixaegix Join Date: 2002-08-31 Member: 1256Members, NS1 Playtester
    A vent, obviously. How can you mistake it for a room?
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  • NayNay Join Date: 2002-06-09 Member: 741Members
    Well just reading above, also why would you promote your map by a picture of a vent?
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  • chubbystevechubbysteve Join Date: 2002-10-14 Member: 1496Members, Constellation
    acceptable vent, unnaceptable room.

    Propergate your map in a more sensible routine next time. Take good screen shots of rooms.
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  • NayNay Join Date: 2002-06-09 Member: 741Members
    yeah i agree, also if you only have little progress on your map, just leave it for a bit then post a more teasing thread, which people will look up to more, i didnt intend to be rude by any of my posts in this thread
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  • XzilenXzilen Join Date: 2002-12-30 Member: 11642Members, Constellation
    If its only a vent, I like it, plus nice choice of color for it, unique <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • Silencer9Silencer9 Candidate for B.Sc. Join Date: 2003-08-05 Member: 18967Members, Reinforced - Shadow
    Thanks @ all!!! I will post more pictures now!!!
    Just wait.....
    some minutes.......
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  • Silencer9Silencer9 Candidate for B.Sc. Join Date: 2003-08-05 Member: 18967Members, Reinforced - Shadow
    Here are the first pictures of the first real room!!! (You will find that vent here too!!!)
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  • Silencer9Silencer9 Candidate for B.Sc. Join Date: 2003-08-05 Member: 18967Members, Reinforced - Shadow
    And 1 more....
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  • Silencer9Silencer9 Candidate for B.Sc. Join Date: 2003-08-05 Member: 18967Members, Reinforced - Shadow
    Wow, an attached image again...
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  • Silencer9Silencer9 Candidate for B.Sc. Join Date: 2003-08-05 Member: 18967Members, Reinforced - Shadow
    Hey! watch my postcount! *g*
    .......
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  • Silencer9Silencer9 Candidate for B.Sc. Join Date: 2003-08-05 Member: 18967Members, Reinforced - Shadow
    Here is the last one, i continue building.....
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  • MavericMaveric Join Date: 2002-08-07 Member: 1101Members
    cool. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • Silencer9Silencer9 Candidate for B.Sc. Join Date: 2003-08-05 Member: 18967Members, Reinforced - Shadow
    <span style='color:green'>I know! <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> </span>
    <span style='color:blue'>Should i make some screenshots from the commander mode, too?!?!</span>
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  • Silencer9Silencer9 Candidate for B.Sc. Join Date: 2003-08-05 Member: 18967Members, Reinforced - Shadow
    And yes!! this yellow way you can see is not really finished yet!!! <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • Silencer9Silencer9 Candidate for B.Sc. Join Date: 2003-08-05 Member: 18967Members, Reinforced - Shadow
    I think before more screenshots in normal mode or commander mode, I continue building!!!
    Just some questions!!!
    1) Is the vent ok???
    2) Are there enough details in the room there the command console is?!?!
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  • MrMojoMrMojo Join Date: 2002-11-25 Member: 9882Members, Constellation
    Well...there arent any details at all, as far as I can see. it's a big bare room. The color also makes things hard to tell apart.
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  • AsranielAsraniel Join Date: 2002-06-03 Member: 724Members, Playtest Lead, Forum Moderators, NS2 Playtester, Squad Five Blue, Reinforced - Shadow, WC 2013 - Shadow, Subnautica Playtester, Retired Community Developer
    looks like a arena.. happy fragging marines. If you can say me how a alien want to survive there..
    But its a good start, but you cannot make the marine start a double res... common, that just doesent work.
    If i would be you.. i would make a new room with a completely other idea.

    (hey.. you asked)
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  • moultanomoultano Creator of ns_shiva. Join Date: 2002-12-14 Member: 10806Members, NS1 Playtester, Contributor, Constellation, NS2 Playtester, Squad Five Blue, Reinforced - Shadow, WC 2013 - Gold, NS2 Community Developer, Pistachionauts
    The architecture and texturing look fine, its a pretty good base and competently made. The thing that really needs work is the lighting. Its constant throughout the whole thing except when it changes color. There needs to be some variation, particularly if you are going to be using that color of lighting heavily. that much of it could be headache inducing.

    I really like the ceiling.
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  • QuaunautQuaunaut The longest seven days in history... Join Date: 2003-03-21 Member: 14759Members, Constellation, Reinforced - Shadow
    I LOVE the lighting. It may be simple, but I love it.

    Don't post more than once. Just use the "edit" button at the top of your post
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  • MachiavelliMachiavelli Join Date: 2003-07-27 Member: 18468Members
    The blue lighting makes me feel like I'm under water. I suggest that you change the lighting a bit. Also, it isn't a great idea to have the light in the vent be brighter then the light in the room. The general layout and texture set of the room is nice though. As a final note, please use a differnt sky. That sky just screams HALF LIFE at me.

    You also don't need to post 3 times in a row (just edit) and you don't need to give that many screenshots of one room.
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  • Silencer9Silencer9 Candidate for B.Sc. Join Date: 2003-08-05 Member: 18967Members, Reinforced - Shadow
    edited August 2003
    Okay, okay!!! But there is a thing I didn't say!!!
    You all know: In all maps the aliens are going to kill the marines, and the marines are going to kill the aliens hives! In my map it is the same, but in an other version! I thought about a story!
    Like this: In the lab, the aliens escaped out of the alien-prisons, and started to kill all marines in the labs!
    The marines must escape from the aliens, I think, I will build func_weldables, which looks like rocks in the corridors, and the corridors will look broken, so the roof of the corridors are broken and rocks fell down, which must be destroyed with the welder!!!<span style='font-size:14pt;line-height:100%'><span style='color:yellow'>WELDER-POWER</span></span>
    And the aliens are coming from behind, and after a few meters there is a new place with resource nozzles to build a base, because the old is getting destroyed by the aliens! This is then so long getting downer and downer into the labs, until the marines find the alien hive(s) in the prisons, and can destroy them!
    <span style='color:red'>This will be hard for the marines!</span> <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo-->
    <span style='color:green'>And yes, i am sorry for my english!!!</span> <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif'><!--endemo-->
    I hope you understand a bit......
    <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
    EDIT: This is on a planet!!! Not in the universum! Does anyone have a better idea for the sky?! I need a great NS I am on a planet map SKY-name!!!
    EDIT (2): <span style='color:green'>I am still sorry for my english!!!</span>
    EDIT (3): <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • NayNay Join Date: 2002-06-09 Member: 741Members
    show us some more screenshots <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • OlmyOlmy Join Date: 2003-05-08 Member: 16142Members, NS1 Playtester, Contributor, NS2 Developer, NS2 Map Tester, Reinforced - Diamond
    edited August 2003
    It looks pretty good and the architecture is nice and simple. I think however that you should go a little easy on the blue, and add wall mounted lights to this area to add a little variation in colour and brightness. A few wall white lights spread around the walls would break up the continuous blue.
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  • Silencer9Silencer9 Candidate for B.Sc. Join Date: 2003-08-05 Member: 18967Members, Reinforced - Shadow
    Thanks to all who find it ok - good!!!
    OK! I do it! <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
    I think this topic and the level will get hoter and hoter..... <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • The_Real_QuasarThe_Real_Quasar Has the I.Q. of 12,000 P.E. Teachers Join Date: 2002-11-26 Member: 9998Members
    I like it, though it's a little too blue for my liking. Do you see where the red vent and blue room create a nice contrast? Try putting a few more (not working) vents in that room, or just red lights in general. That would make the room a lot more interesting.
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  • spinviperspinviper Join Date: 2003-05-08 Member: 16151Members
    <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo--> Post!! OMG!! you l3337 h4xor!! omg!!! you post spamming f00)!!! OMG!! l337!! m3h l337 m4g3c b33r!!! w00t!!!!!!!111oneone11eleven!!
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