Unknown enemy: chapter 12

Rob

<div class="IPBDescription">Guess who's back</div>Thanks again to Highlander for the proofreads!  He's a great hand.  Now, without making you wait further here's Chapter 12!  Let me know what you think!

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Go!

Sgt_X

Nice piece of work.

I from the "He's back" i was thinking a certain villan had survived, glad that's not the case. <!--emo&:)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'><!--endemo-->

Scythe

A very enticing read. A tad confusing at times with the scene changes, probably because I didn't get a lot of speel last night. It would be pretty cool if at some point the squad could be equipped with some of O'Neil's weaponary. I am waiting to find out how that ####### Victor got back into the TSA, friends in high places?. I assume Zerik got off scott-free from Victor's murder? Maybe some sinister official could give him a slap on the wrist for that?

--Scythe--
the_only_scythe@subdimension.com

Rob

Thanks guys.  Nice ideas, I've actually had many of the same, and I plan to put a few of them in.  It actually fits perfectly with some of the NS changes lately.

The funny thing about battlefields is that people die on them.  Sometimes who killed a particular soldier is a mystery, if you get what I'm saying.  <!--emo&:)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'><!--endemo-->

Llama_Killer

I read your story 3 days ago in a single read i was so addicted apart from reading really fast kepp up the good work!

Gwahir

very well done, just finished reading the whole thing, seems to go well with "Conquest of Paradise" by Vangelis, btw.  But I'm wondering how you're going to explain the presence of a scout buggy.  

As for the posed question of how Victor got through the incident as he did, "His gramps is an old fart two-star..."

humbaba

good stuff. me likes it.

Guardasta

more... more... must read more lol

very nicely written, makes me wonder if i should start contributing too...

Evil_Sonic_Death_Monkey

I read ur story. its really cool. i'm really looking forward to the rest of the story. overall, its pretty good, but it got confusing wit the scene changes, and also far too many gram/spelling mistakes. but its still good. neways, i wait patiently (or not) for the others chapters of your story.

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P.S.: WTF, THERE'S A EMOTICON LIMIT! U CAN ONLY HAVE 4!TAHT'S REALLY PATHETIC

Gwahir

down boy!  It's there because of all the other graphics that are commonly included in threads.

Rob

Actually, it's more there so we don't have a spam spree of smilies.  That can really get ugly.

Sgt_X

Be happy boy, before the aliens and turrets there was a cap of 2.

Evil_Sonic_Death_Monkey

whoa... only a cap of 2... that really sux... o well... i luv my marines and aliens <!--emo&:D--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':D'><!--endemo-->

Who will win?
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1. The Lvl 5 attacking the marine from behind?
2. The marine shooting at the wrong person?
3. The Lvl <b><span style='color:orange'>2</span></b> getting shot?

you will see on my next post (if i remember that is)

(He said level 1, maybe he should so some reading before his next post) <!--emo&:)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'><!--endemo-->



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Gwahir

both aliens, level 5 charges over the marine before he can finish the lev 2 off.