The Frozen Souls

Stakhanov

<div class="IPBDescription">Visiting the Archives of the Fallen</div> Sorry for the format , couldn't find a host right now - I thought about this story for a good while , but failing at exams gave me the right mood to write it down <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->

Consider yourself lucky to have a reserved slot in the respawning queue regardless of how bad you messed it up in game... here's what would happen to the failing Kharaa.

To be continued , it's not the worst an alien can endure...

Stakhanov

btw , there might be spelling and grammar errors in the text , if someone could point them out please...

nooby

I don't know how you wrote it, but in wordpad would be easier for everyone to read. By the time you scroll far to the right you have a sore finger, hehe. I think it was good.
Might need work but hard to be sure.

GorgeConstructionCo

All you have to do is dl it to your desktop, open it in wordpad, and turn on word wrap from the format drop down menu.

Stakhanov

I'm not sure about the .doc format... sure it would be nicer looking but it might not be that easy to read for mac and linux users... need a homepage badly...

zooby

You could have just copied it into the post, couldn't you've?

Stakhanov

Well , no. The FAQ says stories longer than a page shouldn't be posted directly , but rather attached or linked to.

zooby

oops.