Monster (fanfic)
DeepShadows
Join Date: 2003-02-11 Member: 13408Members, Constellation
Join Date: 2003-02-11 Member: 13408Members, Constellation
<div class="IPBDescription">Need... critisism...</div> Hola. I've been writing dish here fanfic <u>Monster</u> for a while. It's supposed to be the unofficial transfer from 1.0 to 2.0 - Anyway, I was coming on writing the next chapter (still am) and realised I really don't know what people think about it
<a href='http://mobianwarrior.tripod.com/monster/main.html' target='_blank'>Here's the link, btw. Or:</a>
<a href='http://mobianwarrior.tripod.com/monster/main.html' target='_blank'>http://mobianwarrior.tripod.com/monster/main.html</a>
Anyway, if anyone has read this all the way through, or would take the time to read it, I'd like to know if you think it is worth continuing. Furthermore, if it makes sense up to this point. Honest likes and dislikes, so on, laa dee daa.
Also, I'm considering starting a sub fanfic that takes place shortly before <u>Monster,</u> but on the same ship. It would be practically completely in game/battle writing, and might fill some story gaps that <u>Monster</u> will otherwise not completely cover.
Anyway, I don't know if that's worth it either:P I'd like some people to read it though, tell me what you think, and if it's worth continuing for you.
Thx much - ttfn. <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
<a href='http://mobianwarrior.tripod.com/monster/main.html' target='_blank'>Here's the link, btw. Or:</a>
<a href='http://mobianwarrior.tripod.com/monster/main.html' target='_blank'>http://mobianwarrior.tripod.com/monster/main.html</a>
Anyway, if anyone has read this all the way through, or would take the time to read it, I'd like to know if you think it is worth continuing. Furthermore, if it makes sense up to this point. Honest likes and dislikes, so on, laa dee daa.
Also, I'm considering starting a sub fanfic that takes place shortly before <u>Monster,</u> but on the same ship. It would be practically completely in game/battle writing, and might fill some story gaps that <u>Monster</u> will otherwise not completely cover.
Anyway, I don't know if that's worth it either:P I'd like some people to read it though, tell me what you think, and if it's worth continuing for you.
Thx much - ttfn. <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
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